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Re: Argumentative essay writing, please help me!!!

Hi, First, you need to organize your thoughts into several paragraphs. This helps the reader to understand the way you are thinking about the topic, and to easily see the various points that you are making. Nobody really wants to read one huge paragraph. So, please change this and repost. Bets...

is it correct??

can someone check my paragraph?? Decision-making is common processes in companies. Every manager has to announce new decisions in order to achieve company the decision-making process, provide appropriate models to make better decisions and forecasting.

Re: Is this paragraph correct Thanks! j

.I have underlined some problem areas: Writing is one of the powerful tools that a person can have because it expresses who we are as a person. It’s a key to achievement in school, in the workplace, Writing equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively...

Re: THIS Narrative ESSAY?

Hi! Susankay, Can I ask a favor? Can you please check this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this for my English class and by the way thanks for edit my essay. My teacher already accept my paper,I really appreciated it. In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of Stockton, he...

Re: Argumentative essay 'Against Cosmetic Surgery'

I suggest taking out the fourth paragraph all together. But make sure your essay is long enough for your assignment. Perhaps elaborating a bit more on the deaths? Cosmetic surgery: a miracle worker? A study by Psychology Today magazine shows that many people are not satisfied with their...

Re: Argumentative essay 'Against Cosmetic Surgery'

I tried to improve the things you indicated. I tried to change the paragraph beginning with 'a common ground' into another argument. Indeed, that paragraph made no sense. Did you mean that I had to combine paragraph 2 and 3? (the point about death) Isn't the second paragraph too long...

Re: Argumentative essay 'Against Cosmetic Surgery'

I have tried to correct the mistakes you underlined, and have changed some other things. Could you please look if everything is correct? (I really do not know how I can rephraze the sentence I underlined in the introduction paragraph) Cosmetic surgery: a miracle worker? A study by Psychology...

Argumentative essay 'Against Cosmetic Surgery'

Could someone please help me with this argumentative essay? I have to write an argumentative essay against cosmetic surgery. Could someone please look if there are mistakes (grammar mistakes, vocabulary mistakes, logical mistakes), if the text is well-structured, if everything in the text is...

Ballad, Porphyria's Lover, To His Coy Mistress and My Last Duchess

Basically, I have been set a piece of coursework: to compare the aforementioned poems. I am going for an A* piece at GCSE level, there is no particular question, just to compare the four poems. I have almost completed My Last Duchess, mentioning all the themes I can think of and reading the...

Please correct my narrative essay

please correct my narrative essay..this is my final essay for my english class..my teacher ask me to write 5 paragraph..but i just write 4 can you please suggest what should i write on my 5 paragraph..please help me..thanks...i will really appreciate all the help.. My First Visit to Knotts...