By Essays, Personal statements

hi, i'm a french student and i'd like to be an assistant next year in the USA i have 2 essays to write for my application and i really don't know where to begin maybe some of you are more used to this kind of exercise and can help me to understand what the inspector wants. Personal Statement:...

Hello, everybody! I am applying to universities this year, and I have to write an impressive personal statement or motivation letter but I am not sure if I am doing OK. Could you please revise my essay and recommend some amendments? I would greatly appreciate your help! Regards, Ina Here it...

Good Day Heimdall, I have been writing essays and personal statements too lately. Hence I would like to make a small comment on your essay. I think your essay mentions too much of your ''struggle'' part. In addition you're applying for a scholarship to a University which is highly ranked and...

This is an essay I would be using for my personal statement in a series of college applications and scholarship applications. This was originally written for a scholarship that requires an essay that talks about your "dream job." I like this piece so much (comparng to the tripe I usually...

My english teacher recently told us how to get a good opening and ending sentence for your essay, and I thought I'd share it with you all. Write the entire essay first. Even parts of the introduction and conclusion. Then read the entire thing. You're bound to come up with something better...

Thank you nona for replying. I have redone my motivation letter, trying to "sell myself to the university" more rather then telling my past. Any more pointers that i should consider. Thank you so much for all your help. oh yea before i forget, they emailed from the uni telling me the...

Dear all, i have recently applied to university, and as required, i was supposed to write a personal statement of motivation. the requirements are : ------------ The motivation letter has to include four items: What is the international background you have, regarding nationality, place of...

Hi, 1) Do the "motivation letter" and "personal statement" refer the same thing? Yes, I believe so. 2) When writing personal statement, should I write it in a letter form? Depends on how they ask you to present it. They will usually give some instructions. But in any event, they are...

Dear sir or madam I have just completed my personal statement, or motivationa letter for applying for a Ma Programme in Marketing at a university in UK. I am anxious about it as the high admission requirements by the school. Could you please check it for me, please? Yours faithfully, maggiewong...

Okay, what I am wanting to know is if I don't make this my essay, how will I explain the gap in time? You're right about the resume. I've been debating it for a while. They have no directions for someone in my situation. This is the essay prompt: This personal statement helps us become...