By Essays, Punctuation

sat essey, do we need "to unlearn" ideas?, Pleeaase check it!!

The task is to answer the question posed in the assignment. Please, check all my grammar, punctuation and lexical mistakes. I would be also very grateful for any notes on ineffectiveness of the content as well as on the structure. Here is the task: Prompt 1 Think carefully about the...

Re: Hi, I have a questions about my letter to my professor.

You wrote these sentences to respond to the original inquiring post: : This is very informal - were you asked to do an informal letter or an essay? Other than that, my main impression is that you haven't really answered the question - only a few words about your impression of the class. I...

Re: however (punctuation)

Hi, 1. He studied very hard, however, he didn't pass the exam. 2. He studied very hard; however, he didn't pass the exam. 3. He studied very hard. However, he didn't pass the exam. I was wondering if it is alright to use #3 in one sentence and #2 on the other in one essay. Sure,...

Re: however (punctuation)

Hello, Clive I was wondering if it is alright to use #3 in one sentence and #2 on the other in one essay.

Re: Punctuation help

Hi, So what should I use instead of 'dissing' here? I didn't say you couldn't use it. I just said that it was slang. That's OK in situations where slang is acceptable. I wouldn't say it, for example, to the Queen of England or in a job interview or in a college essay. Since you've decided to...

Re: Please, lookthrough my essay, and make some comment about the contents.

Try fixing the parts in red first then... T_nattawat wrote:Topic: How movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reason and specific examples to support your answer. What type of media has the greatest influence on people's behavior? Surely, the only answer would be television. This...

Please correct my draft

This essay is about analyzing the images and/or symbols in "Two Kinds" by Amy Tan. Please correct structure and mechanics (punctuation and run-ons). Thanks. In the short story, there are images of disaster. For example, when she was playing the piano, the author described it by saying her...

URGENT: Require someone to check punctuation and usage of spelling.

Hi folks,I've writte an essay which I have to submit tommorow. I would like to have someone check it through for usage of words (such as: their, there) & punctuation. I do not want to publish it online so I have not posted it here. If somebody has a few extra minutes today please contact...

Re: please help with a college essay

I am not going to rewrite your essay for you, Pressey--you only learn by doing. Change the underlined parts, delete the crossed-out parts, and revise to make the essay smooth (some of my deletions affect the grammar and punctuation of the rest of their sentences).

Re: Please correct me with the essay

1) What should I replace my work with?-- No title is required for TOEFL essays; if you need a title, it should announce to the reader the topic of your essay.2)the parentless children-- these are not previously mentioned or specific childrenmake their lives better -- what English word means...