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Re: 1) What is the difference between splatter and patter?

Anonymous — Tue, 12 Aug 2008 13:48:00 GMT

Hello,

1. I have no idea
2. Could you please check my essay.
3. Judge is the person that holds the hammer, the jury consists of a number of people living in the country that have to listen to the entire trial and then say whether they think the person is guilty or not. During the trial, the judge tries to see that everybody works within the laws, then at the end he says whether the jury found that person guilty or not.
4. No idea.
5. a lively character means that a person is quite a lively person. It's what people notice. A lively personality is within yourself. Difficult to explain.

Regards

Help with essay via e-mail, english is my 2nd language

anabel_swe — Sun, 01 Jun 2008 09:22:29 GMT

Hi, I really need help with two essays that I have written. The subject is english literature. English is not my first language so they are written in quite simple english. I'm concerned about the fact having my essays being out on the internet, therefore I don't want to post them here, but I am in desperate need of help. If someone feels like they want to help me by correct grammar and spelling errors and eventually improve my formulations, please send me an e-mail at "[Removed by a mod. No contact info please. Add it to your profile only.] I would be eternally grateful to you! And who knows, if you feel like learning swedish someday (um probably not gonna happen but anyway^^) then I will be able to help you! =) Best regards Anabel

Re: Could anyone lookthrough my Illustration Essay? "The Impossible Peace"

Chibi — Fri, 30 May 2008 16:18:17 GMT

Sorry, there's a problem with the former posted entry!

There Is No "Together" In Jerusalem

For Jews and Muslims, Jerusalem has been a city of hope and loss. It has been their homeland but also their battlefield. Its history has been filled with great joy but also with tragedy. In Hebrew, the name "Jerusalem" literally means a "city of peace" Ironically, people there have not seem such thing for a long time.(people there have not seem to live in harmony for ages) There have been numbers of peace plans to settle this conflict between the Israelis and Palestinians but not even one has succeeded everything has failed to succeed); occasionally, they have even worsened the situation (U should write this clause as a separated sentence). One of the most well-known solutions is the Oslo Accord, the first official agreement signed by the leaders of both sides. It was first seen as a (the) hope to the end of the conflict (âto end the conflictâ is better) that (so that) they would live peacefully together in a bi-national state. Yet ( However â in written language, it is better not to start a sentence with Yet/ But), some groups did not accept it and launched a series of suicide bombings. This accord is now viewed to have brought more hatred and violation to the area. Nevertheless, there are still many attempts. It seems that they could live together peacefully since they are similar in many ways regarding their religions and ancestor.(try another expression Ã better) However, after carefully examined (examining) current situations and history, one (U mean who?) has to admit that they will never co-exist (word choice?) peacefully in this common area. It is due to their beliefs that Jerusalem belongs only to them and no one else. (I think the use of pronounce is not clear here. âTheyâ & âtheirâ mean who: Jews or Muslims?) Furthermore, they hate each other so much that they will never want to live together.

The first reason why two-state solution is impossible (be impossible to do sth) is because (Ã that) they believe that (omit this word) all areas of Jerusalem belong to only their people*. From the Jewish perspective, they have all the rights over this land due to God's will as well as their long close connection to it. According to the Bible, four thousands years ago, God promised that he will give Abraham, father of all the Jews, and his children the land of Canaan, or what is (omit) now the capital of the State of Israel. Since then, Jewish people have been waiting for that day to come (omit). The word "Jerusalem" is repeatedly mentioned several times in their daily prayers as well as in many special occasions, for instance, the Passover(Spiro, 2000). In addition, this area had once been under the reign of Jewish kings who had ruled for hundreds of years and built the first Jewish temple in this area. This temple has been the focus of (I guess a problem with word choice here) Jewish people around the world. They regard it as "the house of the Lord"(Bible in Spiro, 2000) and the direction (word choice, again?) in which they say their prayers to. If there is a place on earth that all Jews are willing to sacrifice their lives for, it would be this very place. A Jewish mayor once stated that this land represents, "the purist expression of all that Jews prayed for, dreamed of, cried for, and died for"(Pipes, 2001).
Conversely, from the Palestinian perspective, they are blessed people who deserve the rights over to this holy place, not the cursed Jews. In the Koran, Jerusalem is said to be blessed. It was where Prophet Muhammed was taken up to heaven and met other Prophets(Spiro, 2000). The significance of it had been emphasized several times by Prophet Muhammed himself through his teachings. He stated that it is where a single act of worship is equal to a thousand, and whoever die there or near by would directly go to heaven(Soufan, n.d.). These have made it one of the three holiest place in Islam. Furthermore, in the Koran, while Muslims are regarded to be the most prestigious group of people, Jews are the opposite, "cursed and condemned"(Abbadi, n.d.). Thus, as it is required in Muslim faith, it is their duty to protect a religious site from being contaminated by those corrupted people and bring the holy place back to the right owners.
The second reason two-state solution is impossible is because of the prolonged aversion that they will never agree to live with their enemies. In the last eight years, approximately 5,000 Palestinians have been killed with (Ã and) more than 33,000 have been injured(Palestine Red Crescent, 2008). The causes were mostly due to shootings as well as tear gas. (try another expression here) Many of the others have been forced to leave their home making approximately 4.4 millions Palestine refugees around the world now(United Nations, 2008). Owing to the loss of ones they love and the harshness of dispersing, hatred has developed. Their expression (word choice?) of hatred has been from incitement of violation to suicide bombings. Terribly, those who carried those horrors (repetition should not be occur) were of all ages including young children. In school textbooks, Israel is described to be “a country of gangs, born in crime"(Israel Ministry, 2001) with Jews who are "arrogant and sly traitors"(Israel Ministry, 2001). These are what all children in Palestinian school have been educated, or to be more accurate, "brainwashed." Not to mention the impacts from family and society in which those children have been raised. Thus, hatred has been deepening (deepened) in all Palestinian hearts both of this generation and the coming generation.
In responding to Palestinian violence, Israel has established a military force and checkpoints to limit the number of Palestinians coming to Israel. The primary objective was to prevent terrorists. However, the presence of humiliation during the search, suffering from long waits at checkpoints, and soldiers' attacks on innocent civilians, has only brought more hatred among them(The Nation, 2008, p. 9A).

It is ironic that a supposed city of peace is actually the most contentious (word choice) city on earth. Numerous peace plans have been made but then were collapsed. The hatred between Israelis and Palestinians has been strongly expressed though violation, and each has clearly stated that they are the only group whom Jerusalem belongs to. This contention has accumulated over a long period of time and it is getting worse. It is useless to force them to live together. No such plans have ever worked and will never work. At least they have given it a try, nevertheless. There is always a light in the dark, I believe. When the darkness disappears, the light would shine. Even though I have concluded that the Jews and Palestinians will never co-exist together in Jerusalem, I always wish that I have been wrong. Let the light shine and the city of peace becomes real. * If I were u, I will express like: Firstly, two-state solution fail to succeed because they believe that all areas of Jerusalem belong to only their people.

Re: Could anyone lookthrough my Illustration Essay? "The Impossible Peace"

Chibi — Fri, 30 May 2008 16:07:08 GMT

I have no ideas about the content or the organization of focused points. I just have some suggestions on word choices, expressions and grammar. The highlighted lines include possible problems and the red words are my suggestions to improve the writing.

Hope that it'll be useful!

There Is No "Together" In Jerusalem

For Jews and Muslims, Jerusalem has been a city of hope and loss. It has been their homeland but also their battlefield. Its history has been filled with great joy but also with tragedy. In Hebrew, the name "Jerusalem" literally means a "city of peace" Ironically, people there have not seem such thing for a long time.(Ã people there have not seem to live in harmony for ages) There have been numbers of peace plans to settle this conflict between the Israelis and Palestinians but not even one has succeeded (Ã everything has failed to succeed); occasionally, they have even worsened the situation (U should write this clause as a separated sentence Ã be clearer). One of the most well-known solutions is the Oslo Accord, the first official agreement signed by the leaders of both sides. It was first seen as a (Ã the) hope to the end of the conflict (âto end the conflictâ is better) that (Ã so that) they would live peacefully together in a bi-national state. Yet (Ã However â in written language, it is better not to start a sentence with Yet/ But), some groups did not accept it and launched a series of suicide bombings. This accord is now viewed to have brought more hatred and violation to the area. Nevertheless, there are still many attempts. It seems that they could live together peacefully since they are similar in many ways regarding their religions and ancestor.(try another expression Ã better) However, after carefully examined (examining) current situations and history, one (U mean who?) has to admit that they will never co-exist (word choice?) peacefully in this common area. It is due to their beliefs that Jerusalem belongs only to them and no one else. (I think the use of pronounce is not clear here. âTheyâ & âtheirâ mean who: Jews or Muslims?) Furthermore, they hate each other so much that they will never want to live together.

The first reason why two-state solution is impossible (be impossible to do sth) is because (Ã that) they believe that (omit this word) all areas of Jerusalem belong to only their people*. From the Jewish perspective, they have all the rights over this land due to God's will as well as their long close connection to it. According to the Bible, four thousands years ago, God promised that he will give Abraham, father of all the Jews, and his children the land of Canaan, or what is (omit) now the capital of the State of Israel. Since then, Jewish people have been waiting for that day to come (omit). The word "Jerusalem" is repeatedly mentioned several times in their daily prayers as well as in many special occasions, for instance, the Passover(Spiro, 2000). In addition, this area had once been under the reign of Jewish kings who had ruled for hundreds of years and built the first Jewish temple in this area. This temple has been the focus of (I guess a problem with word choice here) Jewish people around the world. They regard it as "the house of the Lord"(Bible in Spiro, 2000) and the direction (word choice, again?) in which they say their prayers to. If there is a place on earth that all Jews are willing to sacrifice their lives for, it would be this very place. A Jewish mayor once stated that this land represents, "the purist expression of all that Jews prayed for, dreamed of, cried for, and died for"(Pipes, 2001).
Conversely, from the Palestinian perspective, they are blessed people who deserve the rights over to this holy place, not the cursed Jews. In the Koran, Jerusalem is said to be blessed. It was where Prophet Muhammed was taken up to heaven and met other Prophets(Spiro, 2000). The significance of it had been emphasized several times by Prophet Muhammed himself through his teachings. He stated that it is where a single act of worship is equal to a thousand, and whoever die there or near by would directly go to heaven(Soufan, n.d.). These have made it one of the three holiest place in Islam. Furthermore, in the Koran, while Muslims are regarded to be the most prestigious group of people, Jews are the opposite, "cursed and condemned"(Abbadi, n.d.). Thus, as it is required in Muslim faith, it is their duty to protect a religious site from being contaminated by those corrupted people and bring the holy place back to the right owners.
The second reason two-state solution is impossible is because of the prolonged aversion that they will never agree to live with their enemies. In the last eight years, approximately 5,000 Palestinians have been killed with (Ã and) more than 33,000 have been injured(Palestine Red Crescent, 2008). The causes were mostly due to shootings as well as tear gas. (try another expression here) Many of the others have been forced to leave their home making approximately 4.4 millions Palestine refugees around the world now(United Nations, 2008). Owing to the loss of ones they love and the harshness of dispersing, hatred has developed. Their expression (word choice?) of hatred has been from incitement of violation to suicide bombings. Terribly, those who carried those horrors (repetition should not be occur) were of all ages including young children. In school textbooks, Israel is described to be “a country of gangs, born in crime"(Israel Ministry, 2001) with Jews who are "arrogant and sly traitors"(Israel Ministry, 2001). These are what all children in Palestinian school have been educated, or to be more accurate, "brainwashed." Not to mention the impacts from family and society in which those children have been raised. Thus, hatred has been deepening (deepened) in all Palestinian hearts both of this generation and the coming generation.
In responding to Palestinian violence, Israel has established a military force and checkpoints to limit the number of Palestinians coming to Israel. The primary objective was to prevent terrorists. However, the presence of humiliation during the search, suffering from long waits at checkpoints, and soldiers' attacks on innocent civilians, has only brought more hatred among them(The Nation, 2008, p. 9A).

It is ironic that a supposed city of peace is actually the most contentious (word choice) city on earth. Numerous peace plans have been made but then were collapsed. The hatred between Israelis and Palestinians has been strongly expressed though violation, and each has clearly stated that they are the only group whom Jerusalem belongs to. This contention has accumulated over a long period of time and it is getting worse. It is useless to force them to live together. No such plans have ever worked and will never work. At least they have given it a try, nevertheless. There is always a light in the dark, I believe. When the darkness disappears, the light would shine. Even though I have concluded that the Jews and Palestinians will never co-exist together in Jerusalem, I always wish that I have been wrong. Let the light shine and the city of peace becomes real. * If I were u, I will express like: Firstly, two-state solution fail to succeed because they believe that all areas of Jerusalem belong to only their people.

Could anyone lookthrough my Illustration Essay? "The Impossible Peace"

T_nattawat — Sun, 25 May 2008 18:21:00 GMT

There Is No "Together" In Jerusalem

For Jews and Muslims, Jerusalem has been a city of hope and loss. It has been their homeland but also their battlefield. Its history has been filled with great joy but also with tragedy. In Hebrew, the name "Jerusalem" literally means a "city of peace" Ironically, people there have not seem such thing for a long time. There have been numbers of peace plans to settle this conflict between the Israelis and Palestinians but not even one has succeeded; occasionally, they have even worsened the situation. One of the most well-known solutions is the Oslo Accord, the first official agreement signed by the leaders of both sides. It was first seen as a hope to the end of the conflict that they would live peacefully together in a bi-national state. Yet, some groups did not accept it and launched a series of suicide bombings. This accord is now viewed to have brought more hatred and violation to the area. Nevertheless, there are still many attempts. It seems that they could live together peacefully since they are similar in many ways regarding their religions and ancestor. However, after carefully examined current situations and history, one has to admit that they will never co-exist peacefully in this common area. It is due to their beliefs that Jerusalem belongs only to them and no one else. Furthermore, they hate each other so much that they will never want to live together.

The first reason two-state solution is impossible is because they believe that all areas of Jerusalem belong to only their people. From the Jewish perspective, they have all the rights over this land due to God's will as well as their long close connection to it. According to the Bible, four thousands years ago, God promised that he will give Abraham, father of all the Jews, and his children the land of Canaan or what is now the capital of the State of Israel. Since then, Jewish people have been waiting for that day to come. The word "Jerusalem" is repeatedly mentioned several times in their daily prayers as well as in many special occasions, for instance, the Passover(Spiro, 2000). In addition, this area had once been under the reign of Jewish kings who had ruled for hundreds of years and built the first Jewish temple in this area. This temple has been the focus of Jewish people around the world. They regard it as "the house of the Lord"(Bible in Spiro, 2000) and the direction in which they say their prayers to. If there is a place on earth that all Jews are willing to sacrifice their lives for, it would be this very place. A Jewish mayor once stated that this land represents, "the purist expression of all that Jews prayed for, dreamed of, cried for, and died for"(Pipes, 2001).
Conversely, from the Palestinian perspective, they are blessed people who deserve the rights over to this holy place, not the cursed Jews. In the Koran, Jerusalem is said to be blessed. It was where Prophet Muhammed was taken up to heaven and met other Prophets(Spiro, 2000). The significance of it had been emphasized several times by Prophet Muhammed himself through his teachings. He stated that it is where a single act of worship is equal to a thousand, and whoever die there or near by would directly go to heaven(Soufan, n.d.). These have made it one of the three holiest place in Islam. Furthermore, in the Koran, while Muslims are regarded to be the most prestigious group of people, Jews are the opposite, "cursed and condemned"(Abbadi, n.d.). Thus, as it is required in Muslim faith, it is their duty to protect a religious site from being contaminated by those corrupted people and bring the holy place back to the right owners.
The second reason two-state solution is impossible is because of the prolonged aversion that they will never agree to live with their enemies. In the last eight years, approximately 5,000 Palestinians have been killed with more than 33,000 have been injured(Palestine Red Crescent, 2008). The causes were mostly due to shootings as well as tear gas. Many of the others have been forced to leave their home making approximately 4.4 millions Palestine refugees around the world now(United Nations, 2008). Owing to the loss of ones they love and the harshness of dispersing, hatred has developed. Their expression of hatred has been from incitement of violation to suicide bombings. Terribly, those who carried those horrors were of all ages including young children. In school textbooks, Israel is described to be “a country of gangs, born in crime"(Israel Ministry, 2001) with Jews who are "arrogant and sly traitors"(Israel Ministry, 2001). These are what all children in Palestinian school have been educated, or to be more accurate, "brainwashed." Not to mention the impacts from family and society in which those children have been raised. Thus, hatred has been deepening in all Palestinian hearts both of this generation and the coming generation.
In responding to Palestinian violence, Israel has established a military force and checkpoints to limit the number of Palestinians coming to Israel. The primary objective was to prevent terrorists. However, the presence of humiliation during the search, suffering from long waits at checkpoints, and soldiers' attacks on innocent civilians, has only brought more hatred among them(The Nation, 2008, p. 9A).

It is ironic that a supposed city of peace is actually the most contentious city on earth. Numerous peace plans have been made but then were collapsed. The hatred between Israelis and Palestinians has been strongly expressed though violation, and each has clearly stated that they are the only group whom Jerusalem belongs to. This contention has accumulated over a long period of time and it is getting worse. It is useless to force them to live together. No such plans have ever worked and will never work. At least they have given it a try, nevertheless. There is always a light in the dark, I believe. When the darkness disappears, the light would shine. Even though I have concluded that the Jews and Palestinians will never co-exist together in Jerusalem, I always wish that I have been wrong. Let the light shine and the city of peace becomes real.

Re: There is an essay that I need help to correct!

phuthuy-zin — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 10:57:36 GMT

This is a paragraph that I want to check for grammar mistake. I hope that you can help me for this entreating help. So please accommondating for helping me.

A single parent adoption is so popular in social today. Many people are successful and having spare money for living. So they want to have a baby but they donât want to be covered by relationship in a family. Therefore, they think that they just have a baby without get marriage and then they take cared their child with only dad or mum. But a single parent adoption has a lot of disadvantages against both parents adoption. Hereafter, I will present disadvantages of single parent adoption and advantages of both parents adoption.

Regard,

Phuthuy-zin

Re: There is an essay that I need help to correct!

phuthuy-zin — Sat, 12 Apr 2008 10:29:26 GMT

I already follow your comments to correct my essay. It so interesting that you can help me. I will look at the way you correct as a mode for me to develop my essay. One more time, I'm very thankful for your help.

Regard,

Phuthuy-zin

Re: There is an essay that I need help to correct!

Anonymous — Sat, 12 Apr 2008 00:15:43 GMT

The first time, I'm very thankful and look at your correction as a first help. Because I attended many forum, but none of them replied for my essay. For this help, I will look at your forum as a good place for everyone who wants to discuss or improve English skill. So I will present your forum address for many people as I can.

Regard,

phuthuy-zin

Re: There is an essay that I need help to correct!

phuthuy-zin — Thu, 10 Apr 2008 04:30:41 GMT

Thank for your reminder. My essay so long that why I want to get a link at here. Also, this is a first time so I did something in wrong way. Next time I won't make some mistakes like that. ^_^
This is my essay, and please help me to correct it if you can. So I'm grateful if you can help me.

Single Parent Adoption
Part 1
The trends of married couples today in taking care of their children are hiring a wet nurse or single parent adoption. In model life, married couples are following physical life and living in the less sentiment life. Therefore, many couples are breaking to pieces and their children will be under the influence of this failure. Many researches have shown that taking care of children constantly by mum and dad from birth is increasing opportunity for children to develop all of their potentialities and ensure their health for growing up.
Mum and dad are together taking care of their children constantly help to develop all of their potentiality. For example, a child is growing in a happy family will become a self-confident and powerful child. Living in happy parents creates assistance for the child to do anything. In addition, when the child is a failure or obstructed by obstacle, he will know how to accept the situations or self-controlled to find out the solution for problems if he is educated by his parents.
Ensuring childrenâs health for growing up is concerned by their nutrition. For example, when a baby at the breast is received the motherâs milk, he will be inherited antibodies from his parents which protest against diseases. In addition, a diet system for a child after two years old is also important. Powdered milk or soy-bean milk is providing protein, sugar and vitamin for the child. Potato soup or baby foods is also providing nitrogen, fiber and water for the child. Therefore, a good care of nutrition is provided for children by parents are very important that help childrenâs growing up.
In summary, to ensure that children are growing up with good health and develop all of their potentialities, they must be took care by their parents. Child who will become success in future life is often living in a happy family has enough mum and dad. In model life, married couple relationships should be holds fast by society to guarantee a good parents adoption.

Part 2
Everybody in the model life is looking after a woman has a baby without husband or a man has a baby without wife easier than in the past. A single parent adoption today often causes of many problems in social life. When a child is cared by a single parent, he has not enough affection of parents or nutrition for growing up. Therefore, he wonât have a firm psychology and will being a disadvantage in social.
Many single parent adoptions often do not have enough time to play game with their children and interested in their children lifestyle. Therefore, the children are developing with no affection of parents. Besides, the children do not have ensuring about nutrition because single parent often do not have enough information about childrenâs regimen. Thus, the children are not growing up with enough height and intelligent.
The children who live with single parent often have some psychology diseases because they have to live under pressure of no mum or no dad feeling. A single parent often does not explain correct reasons for children about there are no dad or no mum. Also, a child no dad or no mum is being in prejudice of people and has fewer interests. In addition, there are many difficult things to balance between children and the single parent demands because the children donât want to share sentiment with a new person who is become a new dad or new mum of them.
To sum of, children need to have enough parents for taking care of them because a perfect family is a certain basis for children to develop good personalities. A family with enough parents forms good children and creates many good manners for society. Also, a sound family is an important element for building a good society.

Regard,
Phuthuy-zin

There is an essay that I need help to correct!

phuthuy-zin — Wed, 09 Apr 2008 20:59:08 GMT

Helo everyone! I'm a new member and I glad to join this forum.
The first time I really like this forum and want to contribute something for this forum. So my English skill is not comfortable that order me to practise English anymore. This is the first time I depend on this forum for help. If you can help me to correct grammar faults in this essay, I will give you something in reward for this help.

This is my essay: SINGLE PARENT ADOPTION (YES/NO)
My Email: [removed by mod - please put your contact information in your profile and not in the forum]

Regard,
Phuthuy-zin