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Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Dear members, i need some help . i hope u all can review and edit a few sentence on my application essay, on the grammar and the sentence structure, and vocabulary. -- When I was eight, most of my leisure time was spent gluing...

Actually I just want you to correct the grammar, sentence structures and check if the sentences sound OK. If a sentence is awkward, please suggest a better one.

Hi, I am applying for BBA-Finance in a university. They have asked me to write an essay on why I want to pursue the program. I've written it, but I feel that it doesn't sparkle. I am not sure if grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood and tense are presented in a manner that makes...

Hi, I am applying to a Clinical Psychology program and here is my essay. Can you tell what you think and give any suggestions especially with grammar and sentence structure. They want me to state my reasons for seeking admittance to the program at this point in my life; my scholarly and...

Hi I am applying to a Clinical Psychology program and here is my essay. Can you tell what you think and give any suggestions especially with grammar and sentence structure. They want me to state my reasons for seeking admittance to the program at this point in my life; my scholarly and...

Leolyy wrote: hi Goodman, it seems that you feel it not easy to alter and modify the paragraph of my test essay. even though you have written a new one in addition, you have not modified on it. why? i cant understand because i think that it is easier to alter than to re-create. the...

Can you guys please edit the sentence structure, grammar and/or the information in this essay? Please and thank you! Three symbols from the novel, The Lord of the Flies by William Golding, which have a titanic amount of significance to the story include Jack, Piggy, and the lord of the flies....

Hi forumites, I came to the US only seven years ago and I still have a little difficulty in grammar, word choice, sentence structure and such. I know my writing ability is not strong. So, please help me in give me some inputs/criticisms/editing/w.e on what you guys think and feel the...

hey! in my personal opinion, I think that reading is a very effective method to improve your writing skills. Although I am not an avid reader, I still believe that reading helps. You are able to find numerous new words from the reading materials. Not only that, you will somehow learn how to...

How can I have a wide and precise range of vocabulary? Despite writing in english most of time, I still make a few grammar and sentence structure mistakes here and there. Furthermore, the range of vocabulary which I usually use is quite limited, and simple. Does anyone have any idea how to solve...