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Hi julielai, thank you for pointing out some gramamtical mistakes and lack of explanation in the essay for me. However could any of you assess the introduction and sentence structures because the introductions of my essays are often criticized as ineffective and the sentences sometimes appear...

Hi Julie Thanks for your reply. Information regarding the IELTS : (if the forum rules do not allow such posts, I am asking any moderator to erase it, Thanks) -- The IELTS (International English Language Test System), is like TOEFL; but it is common in UK, Europe, Canada and Australia,...