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Ok I looked this over I know there are a lot of problems with it but some I can't find as well as others my Teacher said I need to be a bit more clear and she also said my sentence structure was bad. those were the two man things, so I need some help making corrections and being clear as to...

Hi I am applying to a Clinical Psychology program and here is my essay. Can you tell what you think and give any suggestions especially with grammar and sentence structure. They want me to state my reasons for seeking admittance to the program at this point in my life; my scholarly and...

I would have used a comma before the final "and" or "or" in a series, like this: mother, and lesbian church, or community You need "losing parental custody" -- one "o" in "losing". I think you need a more parallel structure than "as an activist and through faith", maybe "through faith and...

It's now called The McGraw-Hill College Handbook See below. From McGraw-Hill's webpage. There's been some cut & pasting from the old edition but the song remains the same -:) The McGraw-Hill College Handbook Compositions Author(s): Richard Marius Harvey Wiener ISBN: 007040481X...