By Essays, Sentence structures

I agree with Nona. Your sentence structure needs much improvements. I think part of the problem is that you intend to create a sophsiticated tone using big words in your writing but not quite mastering the skills as yet. As a result, your writing was entangled with wrong usage and ended up in...

Dear Experts, Hi, I have been wondering whether to use my first thesis format or my second thesis format in making my thesis statement for: Argumentative essay - What do you think the legal drinking age in your province should be? Give examples (be specific)! My first format: In my...

Hi, Welcome to the Forum. I've made some suggestions. If you'd like to revise your writing and post again, I'd be happy to have another look. I'm 14 and this is my first exam year. I really want to achieve a 1 but I need to be able to write stylish sentences and sentence structure is one of my...

Hi, I'm 14 and this is my first exam year. I really want to achieve a 1 but I need to be able to write stylish sentences and sentence structure is one of my weak points. I would appreciate it if you could help me with this sentence as I don't know if it sounds okay or is grammarly correct. An...

Hi julielai, thank you for pointing out some gramamtical mistakes and lack of explanation in the essay for me. However could any of you assess the introduction and sentence structures because the introductions of my essays are often criticized as ineffective and the sentences sometimes appear...

Yes, that sentence is correct. I've read essays and some books which used that kind of sentence structure. But if I'm not mistaken, I think that it is used in old english language (just a guess), because I've read some works of Shakespeare, and I saw some sentences of this kind. But I'm not a...

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Actually I just want you to correct the grammar, sentence structures and check if the sentences sound OK. If a sentence is awkward, please suggest a better one.

Ok I looked this over I know there are a lot of problems with it but some I can't find as well as others my Teacher said I need to be a bit more clear and she also said my sentence structure was bad. those were the two man things, so I need some help making corrections and being clear as to...

Hi, Can someone please please go through the essay and make sure that sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood, and tense are presented in a manner that makes sense, while looking out for inconsistencies??? Why I want to pursue B.S. in Telecommunication. I am lucky to have been born with...