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Re: Essay for Toefl 2

HI Doll, Describe one event from your country's history, and explain why it was important. Provide clear explanations and details in supoort of your answer. (This is supposed to be a descriptive essay.) The Gallipoli Campaign still has its memories vivid in our minds although 86 years...

Essay for Toefl 2

Hello everyone, it is me again. I wrote a new essay. I will be happy if someone could check it for me because I can't see my own mistakes. By the way, I still find the time insufficient and my eyes were on the clock. -Describe one event from your country's history, and explain why...

Re: Essay for Toefl 1

Thank you Julielai for all your corrections and suggestions. I shouldn't lose myself while writing. I need more practice, more practice and more practice.

Re: Essay for Toefl 1

Since this is not supposed to be argumentative, I suggest avoiding the standard "pros/cons" format. Highlighted a few things that need to be fixed. Vegetarianism Vegetarianism, preferring not to eat animal...

Need correction for essay

As I am preparing for TOEFL exam, I practice for essay writing. I woud be happy if anyone correct my essay and give feedback to improve my writting.Thanks in advance. Question:Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work.Others prefer to get up later in the day...

Re: Please correct me with the essay

1) What should I replace my work with?-- No title is required for TOEFL essays; if you need a title, it should announce to the reader the topic of your essay.2)the parentless children-- these are not previously mentioned or specific childrenmake their lives better -- what English word means...

Re: My essay for the topic "Why people go to university or college". Pls check.

After people finishing their high shcool, they faces two ways generally. One is going to higher education; Another is working. Many factors affect people's choosing, such as econimic ability, interests and his/ her attitude towards higher education and work. I think people go to college or...

Re: My essay for the topic "Why people go to university or college". Pls check.

I am sorry I will not be able to help you on this essay because I don' t know what Toefl expects. The only thing I heard is that they(teachers I mean) love advanced words and linkings.

Re: My essay for the topic "Why people go to university or college". Pls check.

This is one of the topics from the TOEFL writing topics.

Re: best vs the best

Grammar Geek wrote: Are parents best teachers? Are parents the best teachers? You need the "the." When you use the superlative (best, least, happiest, worst, etc.) you generally will need to use "the." Exactly! That is just what I thought, but yesterday, reading "Answers to all TOEFL...