http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aEssays+tag%3aUnderline+tag%3aPunctuationSearch results for 'tag:Essays tag:Underline tag:Punctuation' matching tags 'Essays', 'Underline', and 'Punctuation'en-USCSMOD (Build: 3273.32735)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectEssay/zwlmh/post.htm#460299Fri, 04 Jan 2008 08:51:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:460299mister micawber1 What should I replace my work with No title is required for TOEFL essays if you need a title it should announce to the reader the topic of your essay 2 the parentless children these are not previously mentioned or specific childrenmake their lives better what English word means make better people why did you underline here What word is more specific measure I will why did you underline here Only one measure And verb form is not consistent 3 normally why did you underline here Orphanhood is normal lead miserable lives due to why did you underline here Strictly due to is an adjective use a synonym the lack of education and materials why did you underline here wrong wordHowever before we did all the why did you underline here wrong verb formA charity fund might well be operated why did you underline here Can I replace it with opened Yes wrong word use opened or a synonym make them pay at all costs why did you underline here Idiom is wrong here and redundant taxes are mandatory by natureThe tax can be fluctuating why did you underline here wrong verb formIt s time the government emphasize the essay why would you say it was extraneous That is not emphasis it is beside the point the essay is about what you would do not what the government should do 4 To sum up I the governor why did you underline here Wrong punctuation new title unnecessary appositiveEveryone bears in their minds why did you underline here the idiom is incorrectly formedthat even orphans have the why did you underline here no previous mention no specificityNOTE If you want to continue this revision please post a clean revised copy for my review Belly