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Thanks That is the first time you have not been 100 I must be asking more complex questions now lolUm can you please answer these two trivial questions too 1 Um yes I agree with you when you said a dependent clause can precede a independent clause I believe it adds variation to a piece of writing...

Thank you Um yes I agree with you when you said a dependent clause can precede a independent clause I believe it adds variation to a piece of writing and thus is very effective I was merely saying it made the sentence a bit clearer but I agree with what you said about the creativity of the writer...

quote user Anonymous I just want use what is your favorite sports Imagining being asked this question as the opening of the essay I know that Imagining being asked this question what is your answer is wrong because the subject of this sentence should be you rather than your answer right so I...

OK here are a few specific things I see that may be problems in the first few paragraphs 1st paragraph Is going to movies a social standard Or is it an activity Your first sentence is 3 lines long It is difficult to read and needs to be shorter You frequently use that when it is better to say who...

Hi Neung I ve made some corrections to your essay Any corrections I made are now in red letters If you have any questions about what I mean or would like a more detailed explanation on why something was incorrect please ask We ll try to answer quote user Anonymous My name is Jeerapun Khunsopa and...

You need to break your essay down into paragraphs Your first sentence is missing a verb You need commas here and there For example Even though it may be a comedy it does have the human elements that we all go through every day of our lives

G E M I N I wrote Hi there I m an english student from Saudi Arabia I see myself ok in english but not that good I had an assignment a describing essay and I thought to show it to you guys first My Sister Sunshine Before I wrote this paper I was looking around the room trying to find something...

You might try revising and editing yourself before you post your work online and ask someone else to do that for you In general there are many problems that I m sure you will catch yourself in the form of run on sentences comma usage verb form and capitalization I think your ideas about...

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Chiara wrote Dr Symonds s proposal of using nuclear energy as a main solution to the running out of carbon fuel resources represents quite an attractive suggestion for the energy policy of many countries Despite the interest that this proposal might stir up the use of nuclear power represents a...