In Essays^x, Verbs^x, Contractions^x

OK here are a few specific things I see that may be problems in the first few paragraphs 1st paragraph Is going to movies a social standard Or is it an activity Your first sentence is 3 lines long It is difficult to read and needs to be shorter You frequently use that when it is better to say who...

Hi Crazy I finally got here I have added some comments in brackets after underlined problems Do Sports and Drugs Mix Since the dawn of time a ridiculous exaggeration delete it it seems that you can t do not use contractions in essays change to cannot think of sports without some sort of drug...

Some notes The first sentence is not a complete sentence add an all important comma after industrialization Multiracial or multi racial Multi is not a word imperative and crucial is redundant Eliminate one of the words deeply rooted Vesak Day use sprouting large scale blend and fusion is...

girding on my armour I m coming to rescue my mother tongue from the evils of translation engines chuckle I ve never liked those translation programs and I see I have good reasons for it Hola a todos mi español es muy pobre sé lo que nnecesito escribir en mi propio idioma pero no puedo encontrar...