By Essays, Verbs

Re: Money to live, or live to money?

.I have underlined some problem areas:I appreciate if you could let me know the mistakes I am sure I made somewhere in the essay below.I felt the time really changed when I watch a TV program about the salary of various occupations. Today, peoples care a lot about money because food/gas prices...

Re: Help me please.

You need to fix the part in red.

Help me please.

Ok... so basically I need to do a five paragraph essay (Paragraph model?) by analyzing 3 quotes from this a passage I read "No name woman" by Maxie Hong Kingston. I'm just having trouble with a few things... some I understand, and others I don't. I tried fixing some errors that...

Check My Answers!

1. Which of the folowing is a complete sentence, not a fragment?A. The sound of the crashing waves.B. The crashing waves.C. The waves crashing.D. The sound of the crashing waves was very soothing.Answer D. 2. Which of the following sentences is correct, not a run-on?A. Charlie enjoys jazz he...

Re: in order to do

I'm sorry, but I don't know what adverbial means (I'm not interested in learning the specific names of what I learn), but......I don't think that is possible. I have an essay to write. ("in order to" is not possible here)I have a new tool to control all the mail my...

Re: Help! help corrected my argumentative essay..

You said: In conclusion, I stress out that open book examination (OBE) should be implement in order to make our country remains of being the very best education provider; now it is a good started in finding ever more creative ways to cope with today’s high expectation on education...

Re: THIS Narrative ESSAY?

The Thing I Will Forget The thing I will never forget in my whole life is when my dad passed away. Back in the Philippines I had lots of experiences, such as pain, sadness, loneliness, happiness, etc. because all those things happened to me while I grew up. The most painful thing that I...

Re: "So blue the sky is!" Is this correct?

This is my opinion and I hope that you will agree with that. You may use "So", but at that time you are just emphasizing (not exclamation) on the adjective by using inversion. The sentences become: So beautiful are the trees.So pretty is she.So blue is the sky. But I suppose that...

Re: help with corrections

You need to break your essay down into paragraphs. Your first "sentence" is missing a verb. You need commas here and there. For example: Even though it may be a comedy, it does have the human elements that we all go through every day of our lives.

Re: must have done = may have done?

Hi,are you guys sure "must" is ok used that way? Does that sound good?I'm asking this because I think "must" usually becomes "had to" in the past. I don't like sentences like "When I was in high school one of my teachers told me I must write an essay...