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Argumentative essay 'Against Cosmetic Surgery'

Could someone please help me with this argumentative essay? I have to write an argumentative essay against cosmetic surgery. Could someone please look if there are mistakes (grammar mistakes, vocabulary mistakes, logical mistakes), if the text is well-structured, if everything in the text is...

Re: Please help me with the essay! I need some comment! Thank you!

It's not the vocabulary that matters here. The problem is that the story moves at one pace. Slow down and dwell on the experience of cigarette smoking more -- the pleasure, the discomfit and (deep down) the guilt. When Julie gets home and argues with her mom, she really feels guilty, but she...

Please help me with the essay! I need some comment! Thank you!

Please help me with this essay. How can i make it sound more realistic and with more feelings. What vocabulary should be used? Are there good vocabulary to describe what happen? Thank you so much! This is an essay to be completed with the phrase : " Suddenly, I realised I had lost my...

Re: Please correct me with the essay

Mister Micawber wrote:I have underlined some problem areas, vocabulary or grammar, and added some notes after some. All in all, your presentation is not very humane: My work: (Am I right to write "my work" here?-- No) Were I an influential member of the government, I would help the parentless...

Re: Please correct me with the essay

I have underlined some problem areas, vocabulary or grammar, and added some notes after some. All in all, your presentation is not very humane:My work: (Am I right to write "my work" here?-- No) Were I an influential member of the government, I would help the parentless children to make their...

Here's that lesson plan.

Hello everybody. I'm new here, so take it easy on me.LESSON 1Subject: William Shakespeare – History and Plays Date: Day 1Objective: ELA.10.LE.3 Use oral, written, and visual texts to research how individuals have had an impact on people...

Any dictionary plug-in for Firefox ?

HelloI use a dictionary while visiting this website very often. Even tough I always (or almost always) understand the whole plot - I would like to learn more more and more vocabulary, which is the most important, of course.I use http://dict.pl - some polish-english dictionary but it is not very...

Re: Can someone edit my Definition Essay

I like the tone of your essay. You have some punctuation issues, and I think you either need to 1)focus on one definition of "tight" and tie it to a theme or 2) have an overarching theme that covers all these definitions. Perhaps your generation has been through all sorts of "tightness" and...

Can someone edit my Definition Essay

I would be grateful is someone would edit my Definition Essay. I am defining the slang word "tight" I do not have a conclusion paragraph yet because I am struggling trying to figure out how to transition and start the last paragraph. Thank you!!! “Mrs. Seechoma, your outfit is really tight”,...

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THE PLACE OF WOMEN IN OUR SOCIETY Human beings are social animals who live together and by their nature can’t isolate themselves in the place where they dwell which is called society. The society whose inhabitants we are is of two types: the rural society and the urban society. By gender, a...