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Re: Please look through my narrative essay and correct grammar please

Hi - There are some grammatical errors here, but not too many for a story of this length. There are a few other problems, though. Are we supposed to understand that your mother is Luk, the poor girl who never gave up on trying to do the right thing? It's not clera that it's so....

Please look through my narrative essay and correct grammar please

Do you think the title is relevant to the story? I want to say like "For all your good hope, one day, he will know it" or "Don't regret for your good doing" but can't come up with any good title. Would you mind suggesting me any? If not, it is fine. Thank you so...

is it correct??

can someone check my paragraph?? Decision-making is common processes in companies. Every manager has to announce new decisions in order to achieve company the decision-making process, provide appropriate models to make better decisions and forecasting.

Re: Is this paragraph correct Thanks! j

.I have underlined some problem areas: Writing is one of the powerful tools that a person can have because it expresses who we are as a person. It’s a key to achievement in school, in the workplace, Writing equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively...

Re: Money to live, or live to money?

.Try this:I would appreciate it if you could let me know the mistakes I am sure I made somewhere in the essay below.I felt the times have really changed when I watched a TV program about the salary of various occupations. Today, people care a lot about money because food and gas prices have risen...

Re: Money to live, or live to money?

Thank you Micawber! I appreciate your work on pointed out my mistakes.I tried correcting them by myself as below, though, still could not correct all the mistakes;I have got to study grammar.I would appreciate if you could let me know the mistakes I am sure I made somewhere in the essay below.I...

Re: THIS Narrative ESSAY?

Hi! Susankay, Can I ask a favor? Can you please check this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this for my English class and by the way thanks for edit my essay. My teacher already accept my paper,I really appreciated it. In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of Stockton, he...

Re: Money to live, or live to money?

.I have underlined some problem areas:I appreciate if you could let me know the mistakes I am sure I made somewhere in the essay below.I felt the time really changed when I watch a TV program about the salary of various occupations. Today, peoples care a lot about money because food/gas prices...

Re: English Grammer

Hello Anon, Try using the search feature on this site and you will find plenty of examples of discussion on these topics. If you have any specific questions, please post them. It's easier to answer a specific question than write an essay on "adverbial clauses."

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There will be moments when you either can't get it fixed in your mind or find an effective way to put it on the paper. Don't panic. Talk to your lecturer or your friends. Above all, when you come to write it up, make it as simple as possible. Draw up a list of the points you want to make....