http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aEssaysSearch results for 'tag:Essays' matching tag 'Essays'en-USXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedLotsPunctuationPlease/lpkwb/post.htmSun, 22 Nov 2009 01:16:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:995453magnum960Bobby Juilfs Professor Kramer Fine Arts 101 16 November 2009 Undergrowth with Two Figures If you could ask Vincent van Gogh what he accomplished in his lifetime he would probably say not much. But we know now that van Gogh gave the world a gift. He is now one of the most recognized painters of all time for his exquisite masterpieces that went somewhat unrecognized in his time. They are now and will forever be considered fine works of art. According to Encyclopedia Britannica Online, Vincent van Gogh painted over 800 paintings and sketched over 700 drawings in his troubled life ( par. 18) . Undergrowth with Two Figures was finished in France Jun 1890 and was one of the last paintings van Gogh completed...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpForMyEssay/lxplv/post.htm#994390Sat, 21 Nov 2009 00:02:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:994390doctor dHere is your corrected essay. I tried to keep your words where possible, but I made a couple of < suggestions> where I think your word choice is weak or incomplete. The strikethrough letters are your original words and the color bar words are my replacements. No one can deny the importance of having a personal career plan. It's obvious that everyone starts his life with a plan which drives dries his future and determinates his career and his lifestyle. This career <path> starts after/in from college and extends until retirement. During this period , In this while we choose a specific domain that combines our motivation and ambitions . We , we also practice all that what we have learned had learnt in this...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnybodyCorrectEssay/lpdpk/post.htm#994346Fri, 20 Nov 2009 23:13:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:994346cliveHi, NOV 2009 Thurs Making Chocolate fruit Today, I tried to make some chocolate fruit to sell so that I could earn some money. However, I was at a loss to sell it. It’s because I only succeeded in making chocolate stick well to grapes, among the four types of fruit I bought, which were honeydew, bananas, papayas and grapes. That made me lose a lot of money. However, I think it was worth it. That’s because I got a precious lesson from it-- I should start by making a little when making new food, no matter how easy it seems, so as not to lose too much money. Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnybodyCorrectEssay/lpdpk/post.htmFri, 20 Nov 2009 06:25:05 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:993558lucus ongHi! Long Time No See! Finally graduating, I can now start writing dairies. I decided to write them before but I was stopped by busyness a few days after I started writing them.Ha!Ha! Could anybody correct them for me? Many thanks in advance. 19 NOV 2009 Thurs Making Chocolate fruit Today, I tried to make some chocolate fruit to sell so that I could earn some money. However, I was at lost to sell them. It’s because I only succeeded to make chocolate stick well and beautifully into grapes, among the four types of fruit I bought, honeydew, bananas, papayas and grapes. That made me lose a lot of money. However, I think it worth. It’s because I got a precious lesson from it-- I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMeDoMyEssay1/2/bndzm/Post.htm#992202Thu, 19 Nov 2009 00:13:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:992202cliveHi, Well, I googled it and got 923,000 hits. Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayCorrections/lxqbr/post.htmWed, 18 Nov 2009 23:13:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:992154jon78I was wondering if essay editing available? As people want to get attention from people, there are many ways. Some people make a tattoo on their body, build up their body, or make the body slim. When they’re dieting, some people choose a way to eat disorder and throw up what they eat. People get attention by an appearance mostly on the face or body that how much they are pretty or thin. People get obsessed with their weights when some fear that they won’t get any attention after they are not thin any more or some wants to diet but does not happen to be done easily. The idea where the eating disorder came from are getting common to people who desires so much to loose their weights. Rather than choosing...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EndlessAssociationalManifestedDelight/lxpdh/post.htmWed, 18 Nov 2009 17:58:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:991906newguestHi In his essay “Meditation and the Consciousness of Time,” the philosopher Phillip Novak describes how our minds are normally filled with “ endless associational chatter and spasmodic imaginative-emotive elaborations of experience .” Because of this, energy which could be “ manifested as the delight of the open, receptive and present-centred awareness” (as it is with native peoples) is, in his words, “gobbled” away. --- Can anyone try to paraphrase these two (or at least the first one) for me, so that I would understand them better?http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayUniversityApplication/lxnmd/post.htmWed, 18 Nov 2009 09:17:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:991477zamanovHi all!!! I am going to apply to a university and they want me to write an essay. It should be between 2000 and 3000 words and caver the following aspects: My motivation for the MSc-programme that I chose. Why I wish to conduct this programme abroad and/or in the Netherlands in particular. Why you are interested in TU .. If there are optional specialisations in the Master programme of your choice: which specialisation(s) interest you most, and why? Give three examples of Master thesis topics that interest me and explain my particular interest. Write a brief summary (maximum 250 words) of the thesis work or the final assignment done for my Bachelor study /in my case it's another Master study/ Here is what I wrote: Essay ...http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedEnglishEssayTopic/llrrm/post.htm#972995Mon, 16 Nov 2009 08:41:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:972995mister micawberStart by putting Google or another search engine to use, and see how much on-line information you can find.http://www.englishforums.com/English/Essay/lkbpw/post.htm#971360Sat, 14 Nov 2009 15:33:25 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:971360cliveHi Asud, First, can you come to my house and wash my car for me? Thanks, Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayWriting/kvqwb/post.htm#971357Sat, 14 Nov 2009 15:28:04 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:971357jamillahHey Benny777, I had forgotten that i posted this essay and I turned it in without reviewing your corrections but when googled myself I saw that I was a part of englsihforums and saw your comment. I would like to thank you for your constructive criticism it helped alot, I think I'm gonna use this essay for a book about myself some where down the road. Thanks again and I hope that you continue to comment on my posts in the future! Thanks agian!http://www.englishforums.com/English/Essays/lkgrd/post.htm#970080Fri, 13 Nov 2009 07:46:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:970080mister micawberLook at it, I suppose. Your question is very vague. Do you mean Introduction/Body/Conclusion or do you mean Compare-and-Contrast / Narrative / Descriptive / Persuasive / etc? You might want to read through something like THIS first.http://www.englishforums.com/English/SimpleMultipleSourceEssay/lkhgx/post.htmFri, 13 Nov 2009 00:48:51 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:970000eplymale3043I am quite terrible at writing, I am looking for some help looking for simple gramatical errors in my eassy. Ethan Plymale Professor Holbrook English 100 November 12th, 2009 Modern Tradition: Pay for Grades is a Good Thing. We've heard it all before, "Honey, if you get all As on your report card, I'll give you $200.00 dollars for the semester." I heard this my entire high school career and it brought me to one solid conclusion: hard work brings greater rewards. To this day, I am still offered rewards to continue my success here at Morehead State University. Upon reading Steven Vogel's essay "Grades and Money", Stephen Ray Flora and Stacy Suzanne...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ExactWord/lkrmw/post.htm#969499Thu, 12 Nov 2009 12:46:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:969499bradnugentHi Rishika, I wrote an essay on this for my law degree - a human rights unit! The politically correct term is: "transgendered person" - in other words people who were born biologically male, but believe they should have been born female or vice versa. You could also use the term "transexual". This is different from "transvestites" who simply enjoy wearing the clothes of the opposite sex. Let me know if this doesn't make sense Hope this helps. Best Wishes, Brad. << advertising link removed - don't link to your sites in your posts, please!>>http://www.englishforums.com/English/IHaveAToppicClass/lkvjk/post.htm#969188Thu, 12 Nov 2009 04:59:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:969188grammar geekSo go ahead and write your essay on How to Stay Safe in a Big City and post it in the writing section.http://www.englishforums.com/English/Hindi/jzbxn/post.htm#968579Wed, 11 Nov 2009 16:24:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:968579philipThe original request for an essay in Hindi was June 11, and now we have another request in November, from an apparently different source. I think someone is just having a good time here, wanting to see posts they make (anonymously, at that). I'm locking the thread.http://www.englishforums.com/English/Essay/lkbpw/post.htm#968524Wed, 11 Nov 2009 15:17:51 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:968524cliveHi, Are you asking us to write your essay for you? Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/Correcting/ljmdw/post.htmMon, 09 Nov 2009 18:45:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:966475mulderI am working on essays everyday. But I don't have anyone to proofread my essay. Could anyone help me ? I have a difficulty with an article .I would deeply appreciate it if anyone would do that for me . I am desperate cuz now I am living in Toronto to learn English but am having a hard time even meeting ones who would help me except for teachers . I just finished my school where I asked for proofreading to some teachers . Please help me out !!!http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectEssayReallyEssay-EieiieieAboutEssayChangeNext-Y/lwwxv/post.htm#965860Mon, 09 Nov 2009 06:23:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:965860ter**for ease of typing, I'll type "50" in number, but in a formal essay, you should use "fifty". What will be changed in 50 years? Many things have advanced with the growth of the population such as lifestyles, social education, culture, health care and technology. All of these things are only focused on improvement of the The advancement of these areas only focus on improving the standard of people living conditions (Is this what you mean? by living condition? Standard of people means "morality" rather than anything else. Not sure what you want here.) around the world. In this essay we will discuss about two factors that which will be going to be change will undergo changes in the next 50...http://www.englishforums.com/English/AnEssayWritingQuestion/ljjkr/post.htm#965836Mon, 09 Nov 2009 05:54:41 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:965836terInfluence you in what way? An essay question, if general enough, usually leaves room for much expansion. You start off with an introduction, body then conclusion, and it's in the "body" of the essay where you expand the main idea. You expand on the idea by writing related ideas in one paragraph each and putting details in it. I can't really say much here since I don't know the essay question, but if you're not really sure how to start, brainstorm some ideas first.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCorrectParagraph/ljdvx/post.htmSat, 07 Nov 2009 02:35:52 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:963897nithilaIt is important to have specific dreams and thought in life when i was in birth place and school, a lot of kids like me wanted to float the air. but i was aware that is not possible. so i asked to my mother to buy a TV because that time national television broadcasting aired two famous teledramas one is Dazan, hopefully every body watched and got astound about Dazan and his entourage monkey :) , and other one is very strange drama but unfortunately i forget that Teledrama name, but it was fill with lot of floating action especially by parashout and especially by girl floater too :) during that time i had chance by accidentally to watch what is para-shout by reality show which was shown by Air force, thanks a lot father....http://www.englishforums.com/English/DoesSenseWritingEssay/lwmpv/post.htm#961783Wed, 04 Nov 2009 21:22:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:961783avangiIt is a bit curious, and hard to parse at first. The single phrase, "The son of itinerant actors," gives rise to two separate appositives, one following the other. The second appositive matches up with the first noun, "the son." (The son, Edgar Allan Poe). The first appositive matches up with the second noun, "actors." (Actors, David & Elizabeth). It would probably help to get rid of the first comma, at least making the first match clear. But better yet, find another way to say it. The rest of your excerpt is fine by me. Edit. Perhaps you could use a nested appositive, if I may coin a phrase. Edgar Allan Poe, the son of itinerant actors David Poe Jr. and Elizabeth Hopkins Poe, was abandoned etc....http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSuggestBook/lwkqw/post.htmWed, 04 Nov 2009 04:50:05 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:961205uktoushi, Recently, I started my job hunting. There are some questions in an application form, for example: tell me a time when you worked in a team. tell me an event that you planned. Those questions were difficult for me, because my degree was maths related and had no essay. Could you please suggest a book for writing the answers for those questions? I hope those books could provide examples. Thanks.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectEssayReallyEssay-EieiieieAboutEssayChangeNext-Y/lwwxv/post.htmTue, 03 Nov 2009 11:13:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:960589onizumaruhi every body here, i really want to practice my writing english but i have no one who can help me to correct my mistake.. please look through this paper and comment to me.. it would be glad to have a comment from you.. thanks what will be change in the next 50 years? Since people have lived in this world, there were many things which together have improved with the growth of the population such as lifestyles, social education, culture, health care and technology. All of these things are only focused on improvement of the standard of the people around the world. In this essay we will discuss about two factors that which will be going to be change in the next 50 years. Firstly, in the next 50 years Technology will be invested more in...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectEssayReallyEssay-EieiieieAboutEssayChangeNext-Y/lwwxv/post.htmTue, 03 Nov 2009 11:13:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:960589onizumaruhi every body here, i really want to practice my writing english but i have no one who can help me to correct my mistake.. please look through this paper and comment to me.. it would be glad to have a comment from you.. thanks what will be change in the next 50 years? Since people have lived in this world, there were many things which together have improved with the growth of the population such as lifestyles, social education, culture, health care and technology. All of these things are only focused on improvement of the standard of the people around the world. In this essay we will discuss about two factors that which will be going to be change in the next 50 years. Firstly, in the next 50 years Technology will be invested more in...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EndingSentenceAccordingly/lwvrb/post.htm#959488Mon, 02 Nov 2009 03:31:43 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959488avangiI thougth the topic question was "ending the sentence with accordingly...!" I am freshman student at city college taking basic English 091 and I'm writing an essay. My question, can I end a sentence with a conjunctive adverb? Those danged subject lines are always messing me up.http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAnyoneCheckEssay/lhlmc/post.htm#959381Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:15:52 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959381julielaiYou've gone back and forth between present tense and past tense.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelloPleaseCheckMyEssay/lwbrb/post.htm#959380Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:14:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959380julielaiOnce upon a time in a faraway land, where all things are beautiful, all creatures big and small, there lies a young boy born to be one of the successful legends of world class entertainment of all time. (tense)http://www.englishforums.com/English/HiCanUPleaseCheckMyEssay/lwrjx/post.htm#959378Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:11:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959378julielaiYou went back and forth between past and present tense.http://www.englishforums.com/English/FromSamsonReviewEssayErrorFree/lhdzn/post.htm#959362Sun, 01 Nov 2009 23:56:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959362julielaiI'm not sure that having studied overseas will help your case. Doesn't the university give preference to those who never have a chance to study abroad?http://www.englishforums.com/English/Ielts/lhkjr/post.htm#958921Sun, 01 Nov 2009 13:54:32 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:958921tanitHi Shahla, You can post your pieces of writing here: Essay, Report and Composition Writing forum. I'm sure you'll get both feedback and guidance. Best of luck with the IELTS.http://www.englishforums.com/English/LawEssayWritingSkills/lwrhw/post.htm#958465Sat, 31 Oct 2009 23:53:58 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:958465mister micawberI don't know what you mean by 'ebb and flow', but using the word 'static' and 'opaque' to describe your efforts suggests that you are enamoured of the passive voice and the polysyllabic. Use active voice; use simpler and clearer vocabulary. Let verb choice color your statements rather than search for more adjectives and adverbs to tack onto them. Intercalate short sentences between longer ones: this creates variety and gives the reader a break. If you wish, you can post some of your efforts in our ANNOUNCEMENTS AND FAQS IN OUR ESSAY-WRITING FORUM , and we will review it for you.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelloPleaseCheckMyEssay/lwbrb/post.htmSat, 31 Oct 2009 19:41:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:958325joshmedranoThe Tale of Walt Disney (DRAFT) Once upon a time in a faraway land, where all things are beautiful, all creatures big and small, there lies a young boy born to be one of the successful legends of world class entertainment of all time. His name was Walter Elias Disney. Born on December 5, 1901 to Flora and Elias, Walt Disney, as he is now traditionally known, successfully managed his life full of "tricks-and-treats." From beginning to end, he didn't stop to attain and continue the fulfillment of his dream of becoming an animator. Walt Disney isn't the one who easily gives up. As the stock market crashed in 1929, his company augmented through the highest, though two of his closest friends turned him down, as they have...http://www.englishforums.com/English/AutobiographicalEssay/lwrll/post.htm#958299Sat, 31 Oct 2009 18:39:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:958299avangi"All about me" can mean "only about me" or "everything about me." I'm not sure which she intends. I should think the "family" part would show how they have influenced the simple facts of your life as well as your thinking. Hopefully, another year in college will enhance and expand on your accumulated life experiences. Best wishes, - A.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldYouCorrectMyEssay/lhqzh/post.htm#957862Sat, 31 Oct 2009 07:15:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:957862sr8Good Health Humans need Good Health because they are always happy whenever they are not sick.There are several ways to get good health. First,foods are the most important factor .To get good health we have to eat every kind of food especially fruits and vegetables.They all help us to eliminate the waste matter in our body. For meats,they provide us a protein Meat provides us protein to build up muscle.It's neccessay to take protein to repair injured organs. Next it is also neccessary to take enough exercise exercise enough , because while we are exercising , the metabolism rate of our body will increase then sweat will be released.Sweat is the way to reduce heat in our body.If we exercise regularly , it will give us...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldYouCorrectMyEssay/lhqzh/post.htmSat, 31 Oct 2009 06:27:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:957838tanakornnayHi , My name is Tanakorn from Thailand.I am studying at Assumption University. Today I have some essay that I need your hope to cope my mistake because my English is not good enough.So I hope that I will get you help. ^_^ Thank you , tanakorn And this is my work. Good Health Human need Good Health because we are always happy whenever we are not sick.There are several ways to get good health. First,foods are the most important fact.To get good health we have to eat every kind of foods especially fruits and vegetables.They all help us to eliminate the waste matter in our body. For meats,they provide us a protein to build up muscle.It's neccessay to take protein to repair injured...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ThoughtsOnAudition/lhqwl/post.htm#957896Sat, 31 Oct 2009 04:57:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:957896steven j. wellerI was immediately attracted to the title when this came out, seeing as how I'm involved in theater. But the reviews GAVE THE SECRET AWAY. Sad but true. Luckily, I was able to see it in a theatre, before I'd read the reviews. All I knew was that it was a horror film, and a fairly intense one, and I sat there for the first however long it was thinking, 'when does this thing actually START?' Okay, to be fair, I was also thinking how brutal and dehumanizing it must be to be an actress in Japan. Apparently they have to come in and read lines and what-not (like everywhere) but also write essays and suchlike, just to get a job? How much does THAT suck? Back around 1971 or so, a few years after the riots in Newark and Detroit, I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAnyoneCheckEssay/lhlmc/post.htmThu, 29 Oct 2009 20:31:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:956507bahdittell me if its good or not id i had to add anything thanks Father Son Relationship The novel “The Kite Runner” by Khaled Hosseini is the story of edgy family relationships between a father and a son, and between two brothers, who deal with guilt and forgiveness. The adult narrator, Amir, lives in San Francisco and is studying and remembering his past, thinking about a boyhood friend whom he has betrayed. The action of the story then moves backward in time to the narrator's early life in Kabul, Afghanistan, where he is the only child of a sophisticated businessman . Amir's closest friend is a servant of Hassan. Hassan is a poor illiterate boy who is a member of the Hazara ethnic society....http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMyEssayForMe/lhwwg/post.htm#955709Wed, 28 Oct 2009 22:37:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:955709dimsumexpressI can't agree more! Whether this is culture or individual, each one of us should learn to practice little common courtesy and manner when requesting help or favor. I can't stress it enough. For some reason, I notice that "please" seems to be a difficult word to say in some non-English speaking countries. Could it be my imagination?http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMyEssayForMe/lgrhl/post.htm#955658Wed, 28 Oct 2009 21:25:32 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:955658aznbabievietgurlCan someone or teacher please check my essay for me? I need it before tomorrow (Thursday), October 29, 2009. This is 5 paragraph essay and it on My hometown. I can't attch it on files so I'm going to copy and paste below it. Thank you. My Hometown Everybody probably remembers their hometown. I am from Saigon, Vietnam. I came to Untied State when I was little. I do not really remember anything about my country because I came here when I was a little girl. I have lived in Saint Petersburg, Florida for thirteen years ever since I came to United States. Since those thirteen years, I have not got a chance to go back my country, but if I do had chance to go there and visit, I would not want to go there, because it...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMyEssayForMe/lhwnb/post.htmWed, 28 Oct 2009 21:23:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:955656aznbabievietgurlCan someone or teacher please check my essay for me? I need it before tomorrow (Thursday), October 29, 2009. This is 5 paragraph essay and it on My hometown. I can't attch it on files so I'm going to copy and paste below it. Thank you. My Hometown Everybody probably remembers their hometown. I am from Saigon, Vietnam. I came to Untied State when I was little. I do not really remember anything about my country because I came here when I was a little girl. I have lived in Saint Petersburg, Florida for thirteen years ever since I came to United States. Since those thirteen years, I have not got a chance to go back my country, but if I do had chance to go there and visit, I would not want to go there, because it...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMyEssayForMe/lhwwg/post.htm#955586Wed, 28 Oct 2009 19:47:16 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:955586khoffI don't know how many responses you will get, because your "request" sounds more like an order, with all those exclamation points, "I need it before tomorrow" and no "please" or "thank you." We are all volunteers here, and we prefer to be asked nicely rather than ordered around . Thirteen years in the United States (not Untied State) should be long enough to learn to say "please" when you are asking for help.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMyEssayForMe/lhwwg/post.htmWed, 28 Oct 2009 19:31:02 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:955576aznbabievietgurlCan someone or teacher check my essay for me? I need it before tomorrow (Thursday). This is 5 paragraph essay and it on My hometown. I can't attch it on files so I'm going to copy and paste below it. My Hometown Everybody probably remembers their hometown. I am from Saigon, Vietnam. I came to Untied State when I was little. I do not really remember anything about my country because I came here when I was a little girl. I have lived in Saint Petersburg, Florida for thirteen years ever since I came to United States. Since those thirteen years, I have not got a chance to go back my country, but if I do had chance to go there and visit, I would not want to go there, because it not a beautiful city like Saint...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayOnDussehraInHindi/lbhmk/post.htm#953493Mon, 26 Oct 2009 11:46:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:953493cliveHi, We don't speak Hindi. We don't write essays for people. That is cheating. It is dishonest. Clivehttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckThesisStatement/dzvbl/post.htm#952983Mon, 26 Oct 2009 00:44:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:952983grammar geekHi Anon, Were you talking to the person who posted in 2006? Or the one who posted in 2007? You'll be able to help people more effectively if the post is recent and they are likely to still be around to read it. I suspect that essay was turned in quite a while ago!http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldAnotherText/lgpqg/post.htmSun, 25 Oct 2009 20:54:10 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:952822marylainWould you please be so kind as to correct this little text for me ? Please ... I need a correction in two days and I can give you a little donation for the effort . I put some alternatives and comments in brackets and parentheses . Thank you so much in advance for ANY help ( even partial !) -- Note: The entire passage is written in present tense in source language . I used present tense also in English , but I don't know if it is okay . Plus... this is a translation from a book. @page { margin: 2cm }http://www.englishforums.com/English/ApologyLetter/dpgbb/post.htm#951798Sat, 24 Oct 2009 19:59:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:951798grammar geekHi Anon, It was nice of you to put the time into correcting this letter, but it was posted 2 1/2 years ago - the original poster no doubt had to submit his/her letter a long, long time ago. We always need people to review and correct essays, so we're glad to have help in that - but please look for ones that are recent and without replies. Thanks.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanYouProofreadThisPlease/lgmgg/post.htmSat, 24 Oct 2009 19:46:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:951785marylainWould you please be so kind as to correct this little text for me? Please... I need a correction in two days! I put some alternatives and comments in brackets and parentheses. Thank you so much in advance for ANY help (even partial!) -- Note: The entire passage is written in present tense in source language. I used present tense also in English, but I don't know if it is okay. "Need help?" "Someone who kills me" (← this is the literary translation. Another alternative that comes in my mind is: "I need someone who wants to kill me"? The girl wants to be killed by an assassin!) That answer makes me completely stop. She is more crouched than sat on the ground, on the path border (this sound HORRIBLE to me...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanYouHelpWithThisOnePlz/lgzgz/post.htm#951181Sat, 24 Oct 2009 03:13:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:951181julielaiI think you can develop your ideas a bit more if you do not jump from idea to idea. I usually cover the causes in the first half and the solutions in the second half of the essay, but that's just how I've always handled these essay questions.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpNeededTheseQuestions-Please/lgjpj/post.htmSat, 24 Oct 2009 00:40:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:951074alc24Could you please look at this 12 sentences please? 1 If I can get it (for) cheap, then I'll wait till tomorrow. (Till) What time are they open till? 2 I found a lot of errors/mistakes in the essay. 3 Make sure you don't turn the light on too strong? 4 Tonight's one of those night when/where I'm going to be bored out of my skull. 5 This right here is a display of what caffeine does to you if you drink some before going to bed. 6 If I were to buy this cable, I want to know if I can use it to connect my TV to my computer./What I want to know is if I can use it if I were to buy it. (2 IFS 7 The video is on my TV but I have to listen to the audio through my computer. 8 It has been brought to my attention that you are a lot...