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You had too many spaces between Leet and ","My grandmother, Julie Lovins, put everything on the line for her job, including her life. She worked for the Leet Psychiatric Clinic in Lexington, Kentucky, and flew to various locations with Dr. Leet, a psychiatrist, to help patients. ...

I must admit I couldn't find much at all for errors in your essay, while I did take four years of English in college I don't consider myself a professional. Although this is what I found, you had too many spaces in the first paragraph. and a few present tense's in the fifth...

HELLO! CAN YOU PLEASE CHECK MY ESSAY ACCORDING TO SEA PARAGRAPHS (sTATEMENT, eVIDENCE, aNALYSE)?“How does Hitchcock create Suspense and shock?” Alfred Hitchcock is known as the ‘master of suspense’ and a great innovator. He has three films in the Top Ten of the American Film Institute’s top...

.I have underlined some problem areas: Writing is one of the powerful tools that a person can have because it expresses who we are as a person. It’s a key to achievement in school, in the workplace, Writing equips you with the communication and thinking skills you need to participate effectively...

Could someone please help me with this argumentative essay? I have to write an argumentative essay against cosmetic surgery. Could someone please look if there are mistakes (grammar mistakes, vocabulary mistakes, logical mistakes), if the text is well-structured, if everything in the text is...

Mellavere wrote:The bible says, "The love of money is the root of all evil." (Timothy 6:10). The Bible does not state money is evil, yet it says the love of money is and is a root for all kinds of evil, many kinds. Any kind of sin may take root and sprout from money and its possessions. From...

Mina_nami wrote: uhm, these are some thoughts that ample into my mind when reading ur essay. - U got great ideas - But a matter in structures and expressions. With the ideas from ur introductory paragraph, I've tried to rewrite it in my own way. Hope that my recasting would help serve as a...

uhm, these are some thoughts that ample into my mind when reading ur essay. - U got great ideas - But a matter in structures and expressions. With the ideas from ur introductory paragraph, I've tried to rewrite it in my own way. Hope that my recasting would help serve as a kinda inspiration....

Hi Nadja, Nice use of expressions in this essay. Here are some corrections. There are one or two places where a word in your original is not necessary, though there is nothing wrong with using it. I have indicated these by putting square brackets around the word. Let me know if you don’t...

Hi again, Kin has some helpful points there. Regarding the grammar, there are a few points I indicate here from the first two paragraphs. Would you like to have a look at these and then try and see if you can find anything similar in the final two paragraphs? (I don’t think there are many...