By Football, Motivation letters

Kamran, your letter is a very complex one and you have a rich language. Congratulations! I find that the thing that casts a small shadow over it is somehow the lack of order and the lenght of the phrases. I'm sure my correcting won't make it perfect, but here's a suggestion: Dear Sir...

Letter of MotivationKamran Huseynzade Dear Sir or Madam, I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application for entrance to the International Business program at the University of Maastricht for the 2008 autumn term. First of all, I would...

My strong desire to take a Business-related course in Great Britain began three years ago when I realized I was attracted to this dynamic field of logic and consistent patterns. Having a broad interest in many subject areas, I now seek to become as versatile as I can. Therefore, choosing a...

Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :)My strong desire to take a Business related course in Great Britain dates back about three years ago, realizing that this dynamic field...

UNIVERSITY OF ***, Faculty: Marketing Communication Sciences. Dear Sir / madam or admissions board: One of the many things I learned over the few years I’ve worked in the private and public sector is that in order to go furtherin my career I need to obtain a master’s degree....

Welcome to English Forums, AG! Obviously I can't amend the letter; but I've underlined some parts that may need further attention (mostly from a grammatical point of view). Since the letter will find its way into the maw of Google shortly, I've also removed the identifying features. Best...

With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the *** as a *** student. For the last two years I have been studying at the YYY Technical University majoring in Electronics & Telecommunications. There were several reasons for my choosing the profession of an engineer....

Hi. I want to continue my undergraduate studies at **** College. I write my motivation letter but i need your help as i am not a native english speaker. Plz help me to make my letter more adequate. Thanks here is my letter: MOTIVATION LETTER My name is Klajdi Turlla. I was born and...

Turinsnow wrote:Dear sir or madam， My undergraduate educational background at Guanghua School of Management, Peking University, my passion for finance and my interest in the Italian culture make me an ideal candidate for the Master of Science program in Finance at Università Bocconi for the...

Dear sir or madam， My undergraduate educational background at Guanghua School of Management, Peking University, my passion for finance and my interest in the Italian culture make me an ideal candidate for Master of Science program in Finance at Università Bocconi for the year 2007-2008. ...