By Football, Paragraphs

I have highlighted errors. You use "he" and "your" and "I" so it's not clear who you are talking about. Your capitalization is uneven, and you need to use the past tense.

Please edit my paragraph writing. Thank you for helping me.Introduce Myclassmate The last class I interviewed my classmate His name is Atirach limphaiboon and he nickname is Toon. He is 19 years old. Your birthday is 7th July 1989. He was born in Chiang Rai province and move to Bangkok is a...

Aloha from hawaii, I was looking at different website which I notice your looking for pen pals by email or postal mail.. I would like help you gain sincere friendship all over the world for free.. look it this Pacific Ocean pen pal club is publish twice a year ( June 2008 / JAN 2009) for...

Right away, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just got through replying to a friend , the letter is quite long, so I it took a long time to write. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's extremly curious about Vietnamese culture, activity, attitude with foreigner.......

Right NOW, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just gotten through replying to a friend. The messge is quite long, so I have to take a long time. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's very curious about Vietnamese culture, activity, and attitudes about foreigners. She also wants to travel to...

Newbie2007 wrote: Please help me correct the grammar of these paragraphs. Thanks so much. Right away,-said my mother (for example)- it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just gotten through replying to a friend (it's very complicated, it'd better to change it), it was quite long, so I have to take a...

Please help me correct the grammar of these paragraphs. Thanks so much. Right away, it's nearly 11:00 pm. I've just got through replying to a friend , it's quite long, so I have to take a long time. She's Taiwanese, quite nice and very kind. She's very curious about Vietnamese culture, activity,...

My attempt #2. Aronika28 wrote: Проїхати автівкою чи автобусом до стадіону за дві-три години видається проблематичним. Головний футбольний об'єкт - на схилах гір. Вузенькі дороги і тротуари переповнені людьми, які прямують на футбол. Причому панівний колір футболок і «роз» - бордовий. Ті, хто...

ElevenTattic wrote: I think you'd rather say "Wherever I look, I see her." without "would", because: (apparently) the sentence is about anywhere you look, you can see her, and this kind of sentences is about something that's always or usually happening. "The Present Simple" is used in this...

I had been to public entertainments before, of course; I had been to cinema and the pantomin and to see my mother to sing in the chorus of the White Horse Inn at the Town Hall. But that was different. The audiences I had hitherto been a part of had paid to have a good time and, though...