College Motivation Letter help

Anonymous — Wed, 21 Feb 2007 19:35:32 GMT

Hi. I want to continue my undergraduate studies at **** College. I write my motivation letter but i need your help as i am not a native english speaker. Plz help me to make my letter more adequate. Thanks here is my letter:

MOTIVATION LETTER

My name is Klajdi Turlla. I was born and raised in Albania. Living in the capital city of my country I have been able to observe my country economical development. Since 1990 after the collapse of the dictatorial regimen Albanian business was improved very quickly. Now in Albania thousand of business offers their service to the community. This is a very positive thing for the Albanian development. Being successful in the business field needs a lot of business knowledge. Business studies are available even in Albania but our universities do not accomplish the European standards.

Since I was a little boy I had the desire to become a successful businessman. My parents also are involved in the business world and I want to continue and improve what they have achieved so far. The only way to make this dream come true is studying in a European school. There are many reasons for my desire to study at **** College. I think the program offered is the right for me. For my opinion British programs are the best. Studying in your college will give me the opportunities to find a job right after graduation. Also as an international student I think I can find the needed support. Furthermore I think Prague is a grate city.

To study at your college English language is very important. I have learned english since third grade (at age of 10) in public school and later in several private courses. Of course that the only way to confirm that my english is at the required level I have to do exams that shows my english proficiency. Iâll do the TOEFL test and than Iâll announce you my result.

Society is very important to me. I spend the most of the free time with my best friends. As we live in the biggest city of Albania the ways to pass the free time are a lot. Usually we play football, basketball or bowling. In the weekend we go to a party or to quiet places of the city where we can enjoy the day in peace. When Iâm at home I like to read, surf in the internet, play guitar or watching TV. A lot of my social activities are planned by the school. Trips are organized in cultural and beautiful places in Albania.

I would be thankful if you consider my statement and would be very satisfied to be accepted to *** College.

Thank You

Klajdi Turlla

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College Motivation Letter help