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Hi Crazy-- I finally got here. I have added some comments in brackets after underlined 'problems': Do Sports and Drugs Mix? Since the dawn of time years while playing football and was the quarter back of our team. Everyone thought he was going to make it to the NFL but during our...

Hello Sextus As it's quite a long paragraph, I've put some suggestions in square brackets. The sq. brackets replace the text in curly brackets. The paragraph breaks are merely for ease of reading, and aren't supposed to be suggestions. Let me know if these edits change your meaning: 9) “{To...