In Football^x, Yours faithfully^x, Motivation letters^x

Kamran, your letter is a very complex one and you have a rich language. Congratulations! I find that the thing that casts a small shadow over it is somehow the lack of order and the lenght of the phrases. I'm sure my correcting won't make it perfect, but here's a suggestion: Dear...

Hello to everyone. I am trying to apply for an academic year at a University in Jacksonville. Now I have to write a motivation letter and hand it in on wednesday. I spend a lot of time writing it and now I really hope that someone can help me read over it and tell me if something is very, very...