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Re: plzz...help me! can anybody check ma motivation letter..???

Anonymous — Fri, 21 Mar 2008 11:34:20 GMT

Kamran, your letter is a very complex one and you have a rich language. Congratulations! I find that the thing that casts a small shadow over it is somehow the lack of order and the lenght of the phrases. I'm sure my correcting won't make it perfect, but here's a suggestion:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I appreciate the opportunity that I have to provide further background information in order to support my application to the International Business Program at the University of Maastricht for the 2008 Autumn term.

First of all, I would like to give some information about myself. My name is ......I was born in Baku, the capital city of Azerbaijan, on the 26^th of September 1989. My nationality is Azerbaijani. My parents are both teachers ( the subjects they are teaching and maybe the institutions) , therefore they are seriously concerned with my education. Education is my concern too and during all my school years I have worked hard in order to give a good use to my parents' heritage and to put a good base for a successful career. I think the landmark of my education was my entrance in one of the most well known schools in Azerbaijan, "Dede Gorgud" Private Turkish High School, after I graduated my 6^th grade at the state secondary school. My future career has been a main preoccupation for me since the begining of high school. In the 8^th grade, I started to prepare myself to join the National Mathematics Olympic Team. Eventually, in the 9^th grade my goal was achieved. In May 2005, I participated in Almaty (Kazakhstan) to the International Mathematic Project Competition â 2005. My project received the first place and I got a golden medal.

Languages are bridges between the nations and knowing as many languages as one can is an important factor in understanding the world in which we live and in developing a successful career. I speak fluently my mother tongue and I know English, Russian, Turkish and German. The fact that I have raised in a bilingual city and in a multicultural environment has presented me great chances to enlarge my cultural knowledge and my language abilities. In high school, item like Mathematics, Physics, Chemistry, Biology and Computer Science have been thought in English. Russian is the second language in my country, so it wasn't too difficult to learn. Turkish language is also widespread in our environment and it is close to my mother tongue. But I found German language a challenge, so I attended to a language course organized by the German Embassy in Baku. Here I was able to establish my basic German knowlege and now, in the university, German is my second foreign language.

I also consider that the equilibrium in life is given by combining mind acnity with a healthy and a strong body, so sports play an important role in my life. I am very interested in football (Kamran, is this soccer or football?) and in table tennis. In 2006, there was a football championship among private high schools and I received along with my schoolmates the gold medal. I consider this gold medal an award for what the team spirit can achieve. After I graduated the 9th grade, I faced the challenge to chose the most appropriate University for me. I found that the International Economic Relations Faculty of Azerbaijan State Economics University was suiting my desire to interact with other people and cultures and my administrative skills that I had developed by organizing different social activities in school. Consequently, I applied to this university and I had an entrance examination exam that included Mathematics, Geography, Mother Tongue, English language and the History of Azerbaijan. I received 668.75 out of 700 points and now I benefit from the presidential scholarship because of my high points.

We learn as long as we live and we must put no boundaries to our knowledge. Having this in mind, I decided to continue my education in a respected European university such as the University of Maastricht. My decision has been influenced by several factors: the growing interest in what I have been learning in the university, International Economic Relations, my father's advice and lectures at Azerbaijan State Economic University and the captivating way that the economy develops in this era of globaization. I am aware of the fact that education at such a distance away from home is an increased responsibility that can contribute to a more mature way of thinking, behaving and viewing in this complex world. I am sure that your program can provide me the experience of discovering new ways of growing and giving. I am convinced that the University of Maastricht would be an excellent start for a business career.

I thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to receiving your decision.

Yours faithfully,

Kamran Huseynzade

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I really hope someone can look over my motivation letter.Please!!!

Juliamachita — Mon, 27 Nov 2006 13:20:59 GMT

Hello to everyone. I am trying to apply for an academic year at a University in Jacksonville. Now I have to write a motivation letter and hand it in on wednesday. I spend a lot of time writing it and now I really hope that someone can help me read over it and tell me if something is very, very wrong or bad. I know, its a big favour I am asking for because the letter is very long......but I hope someone finds time to do it. Thank you, thank you, thank you in advance!!! If someone needs help with german, russian or spanish I can help you too ;-)

So , hereÂ´s the letter:

Why I am highly motivated to study one year at the

University of North Florida, Jacksonville

Dear Sir or Madam,

my name is Julia *** and with this letter I would like to explain my motivaiton for studying two semesters at the University of North Florida .

IÂ´m 22 years old and studying in the third semester at the Otto-Friedrich University of Bamberg. My directed interest towards economy and an international education led me to the decision to attend the âEuropean Economics Studiesâ Bachelor programme.

One of the main reasons to choose this programme was the obligatory academic year abroad. Two semester at a foreign college offers a lot of chances: giving material for new perspectives and ideas,establishing new connections, and last but not least it provides the opportunity to identify additional strength and weaknesses.

I am dreaming of going abroad to the USA. In terms of culture , and especially economy and politics, nowadays no one can deny that the United States of America fill an unique position in the current world affairs. This omnipresent appearance and involvation awaked my interest in the country. Caused by my migration from Kazachstan I have always been very open to new people and grew up in an multicultural environment. This fact tought me the importance of understanding and getting involved with different cultures and mentalities.

Furthermore during my stays abroad I came to know how much the experiences in a foreign culture may influence your own mind and thinkings. Just this experiences made me understand aspects of my own cultur and society I have never noticed before. With view to the anglo-american space and especially Jacksonville as a steady growing center of commerce I consider it as particulary attractives to see how it will influence my present angle.

Beeing an ambitious person with a wide range of interest there are other reasons beside the not unimportant experience of life which make me arrive to the decision that a adacemic year at the University of North Florida will complement my education best possible. The University of North Florida, considering field reports, internet presence and personal conversations, give me the impression of being an educational institution which is able to encourage and support their students. Especially I, as/beeing (?) a german student, am impressed by the minimized courses, the way of teaching which is complemented by practical experience and the face-to-face relationship to the lecturers.

I am a person who is communicative, inquiring and likes to work in teams. For this reason I appreciate this system of personal relationship and nearness.

Another reason that makes me confident that University of North Florida is the best University for shaping my future the way I imagine is the large variety of the courses offered. This fact povides me the opportunity to create my way of education as individual as possible.

During my six-month internship in Costa Rica and the following travels through Central America it became clear to me that , after my studies, I want to participate in the sustainable economical Development of Third World- and Developing Countries.For example I would love to work as part of the german GTZ company. With courses like âCurrent Issues in the Economy of Latin Americaâ,â Third World Politicsâ and âInternational Tradeâ the UNF offers me the opportunity to put first focuses on my field of interest. This chance makes the University of North Florida become even more unique for me.

Beside my studies in Bamberg I am member of a consulting business run by students , I participate in the organizasations for a group tour for over 100 freshman students, spend time as a volunteer in a National Park in Costa Rica and spend as much time as possible with sports. Activity for me acts as a perfect counterbalance to my studies. Therefor this aspect was very significant for me in connection with my decision.

Since almost 5 years I am a passionated sailor and wind-surfer. I was pleased to hear about the univesitary surfteam which creates a perfect combination of social work in form of beach cleaning, fund-raisings and the sport in/by itself. It is the first time that I hear of such a combination. This kind of activity impresses and attracts me. I can really imagine taking part in this teamÂ´s work and supporting it with my experiences and ideas.

Thinking about the Univesity of North Florida I am very determined to having found a University which combines all the aspects which are important for a succesfull year abroad. The University is up to the standard I ever imagined it to be, the course offers meet my expectations perfectly and Jacksonville itself attracts me with its multicultural population, its steady growing structure, and offer of activities. The USA, is a phenomenon for me, famous for their tolerance and openness, their living of the american dream and their uniqueness.

In my academic year abroad one of my aims is to be able to judge personaly about information delivered by media or impressions given by personal report about the USA. I want to make my own opinion, confirm or refuse and understand by beeing part of the country.

âAbility is what you're capable of doing. Motivation determines what you do. Attitude determines how well you do it.â

said once the famous football coach Lou Holtz in order to support his team. This words staid in my mind and explain best my attitude. I am very confident about my decision to enhance my education with a academic year at the Univesity of North Florida, and I feel I will be able to excel in my studies abroad, because it is something that I am extremely interested in doing and that I will enjoy doing.

In the end it is for you to decide if I will be able to make my âgerman dreamâ become reality.

Thank you very much for your time and considering my request. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

***

Whats the correct reponse?

Guest — Fri, 28 Jan 2005 18:39:39 GMT

Letter starts,

To the football manager
should it end with yours sincerely or yours faithfully?