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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Football tag:Yours sincerely' matching tags 'Football' and 'Yours sincerely'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aFootball+tag%3aYours+sincerely</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Football tag:Yours sincerely' matching tags 'Football' and 'Yours sincerely'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3256.36449)</generator><item><title>letter of recommendation</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfRecommendation/gqnwv/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 04 Nov 2008 17:04:50 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:583631</guid><dc:creator>gorodman</dc:creator><description>Somebody, please, check my recommendation letter. The deadline is the 6th of November.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Dear Sir/Madam,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The academic reference is provided at the request of *** who is applying for the *** Program.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have known *** for 2 years as he has taken a number of courses on Higher Mathematics which I teach, i.e. ***&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I can say that it is not quite easy to get an excellent mark in the course examinations on the above sciences. A student is supposed to find solutions to original and sophisticated problems which were not considered on workshops during the semester. *** has successfully solved these difficult problems and brilliantly passed all the tests and got excellent marks for all examinations being quite creative and original in his answers.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;*** is a very industrious student. He had been always performing his homework, though it was not obligatory. He is not afraid to assume the responsibility. At my classes he always tackled the difficult problems while others did not do so being afraid to make a mistake.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My hobby is a football, and sometimes students invite me to take part in their matches. I remember a match, when *** was a captain of the opposite team. He scored the goal at the last minute of the match, thus bringing the score draw. Then, in penalty shots, he scored the last penalty and brought victory for his team. It shows that in a critical moment *** is not afraid of taking responsibility and being the leader. Although, during the football match *** can sometimes be rather violent in everyday life he is a very kind and caring friend with a good sense of humour.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Based on my professional experience I hold *** as an industrious, intelligent, well organized and easy-going person with a considerable willpower. I strongly believe that *** is an appropriate candidate for admission to the *** Program.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If you have any further questions with regard to his background or qualifications, please feel free to contact me. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yours sincerely,</description></item><item><title>Recommendation letter</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/RecommendationLetter/gqmdg/post.htm</link><pubDate>Mon, 03 Nov 2008 17:07:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:583259</guid><dc:creator>gorodman</dc:creator><description>Hi, everybody!!! Could you be so kind and check the following letter. I will be glad if you leave some comments and recommendations about it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Dear Sir/Madam,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am, senior lecturer of the â****â Department, writing this reference for *** (me) for admission to the â****âProgram.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have known *** for 2 years as he has taken the following chapters of the Higher Mathematics which I teach: **.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I can say that it is not quite easy to get an excellent mark in the semester examination I conduct. To do so student must find the solution to an original and sophisticated problem which was not considered on workshops during the semester. ** successfully solved these difficult problems and passed all the tests and got excellent marks for all examinations in my courses.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;** is very industrious student. He had been always performing his homework, though it was not obligatory. He is not afraid to assume the responsibility. At my classes he always tackled the difficult problems while others did not do so being afraid to make a mistake.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My hobby is a football, and sometimes students invite me to take part in their matches. I remember a match, when *** was a captain of the opponent team. He scored the goal at the last minute of the match, thus bring the score level. Then, in penalty shots, he scored the last penalty and brought the victory for his team. It shows that in at a critical moment *** is not afraid to assume the responsibility and can be a leader of a team. Though, during the match *** can be rather violent and use not very courteous words to encourage the team to play well, in everyday life he is very kind, careful and attentive friend with a good sense of humour.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Based on my professional experience I evaluate *** as an industrious, intelligent, well organized and easy-going person with a strong willpower. I strongly believe that he is an appropriate candidate for admission to the ** Program.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If you have any further questions with regard to his background or qualifications, please feel free to contact me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yours sincerely,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;***&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Academic Reference 1</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/AcademicReference1/gqlbp/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sun, 02 Nov 2008 20:11:38 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:582945</guid><dc:creator>gorodman</dc:creator><description>Hi, there!!! Could you be so kind and check the following letter. I will be glad if you leave some comments and recommendations about it.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Academic Reference&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Dear Sir/Madam,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am, senior lecturer of the â****â Department, writing this reference to *** for admission to the â****âProgram.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have known *** for 2 years as he has taken the following chapters of the Higher Mathematics which I teach: **.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I can say that it is not quite easy to get an excellent mark in the semester examination I conduct. To do so student must find the solution to an original and sophisticated problem which was not considered on workshops during the semester. ** successfully solved these difficult problems and passed all the tests and got excellent marks for all examinations in my courses.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;** is very industrious student. He had been always performing his homework, though it was not obligatory. He is not afraid to assume the responsibility. At my classes he always tackled the difficult problems while others did not do so being afraid to make a mistake.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My hobby is a football, and sometimes students invite me to take part in their matches. I remember a match, when *** was a captain of the opponent team. He scored the goal at the last minute of the match, thus bring the score level. Then, in penalty shots, he scored the last penalty and brought the victory for his team. It shows that in at a critical moment *** is not afraid to assume the responsibility and can be a leader of a team. Though, during the match *** can be rather violent and use not very courteous words to encourage the team to play well, in everyday life he is very kind, careful and attentive friend with a good sense of humour.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Based on my professional experience I evaluate *** as an industrious, intelligent, well organized and easy-going person with a strong willpower. I strongly believe that he is an appropriate candidate for admission to the ** Program.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If you have any further questions with regard to his background or qualifications, please feel free to contact me.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yours sincerely,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;***&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Plzzzzz help me to improve this Letter of motivation- my deadline is 8 Feb</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlzzzzzImproveLetterMotivation-Deadline/dxvwp/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sat, 27 Jan 2007 12:57:24 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:320652</guid><dc:creator>Novrain</dc:creator><description>&lt;TABLE class=MsoTableGrid cellSpacing=0 cellPadding=0&gt;

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&lt;P&gt;&lt;B&gt;Adress&lt;/B&gt;&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/TD&gt;
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&lt;P align=center&gt;1&lt;SUP&gt;st&lt;/SUP&gt; February 2007&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/TD&gt;&lt;/TR&gt;&lt;/TABLE&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Regarding: &lt;B&gt;LETTER OF MOTIVATION&lt;/B&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Dear Sir or Madam,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I am a civil designer of an A company, which is a branch of renowned&amp;nbsp;B Corporation. When finding out of this master program Civil Engineering I immediately knew I want to be a part of it. With this letter I would like to apply for the admission as a graduate student in your Scholarship for Master of Science in Civil Engineering program and through it I'd like to bring you closer how deeply I would like to become a student of your course and why I think you'd make a great decision choosing me.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;As Iâve already mentioned, before taking over present position I worked for CCC a leading state company in construction. At here I worked as a structural engineer and participated in designing high-rise buildings. I am very proud of them because they were the first high-rise buildings in my country applied innovative methods of designing and execution: precast/prestressed concrete for structure system and âlift-formâ execution. Presently I am working in a completely fresh field: iron metal factory with my responsibility of designing particular structure systems for giant industrial machines. In any position of a structural engineer I also learn how to apply my theorical knowledge into practice that gives me a good structural sensibility and exact data analysis. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Three years of working in not only civil but also industrial construction projects I have met many fresh, interesting and difficult issues in designing which are never written in textbooks, if any available, their contents are very simple. These issues are dealing with earth quake, the tremor of high-rise building due to seismic load, fatigue failure of reinforced concrete structures due to cycle loads, design and execution of prestressed concrete, etc. I confront awkward circumstances in real designing that in my opinion they can be solved easily by using prestressed concrete structures. A more critical matter is that how to protect this kind of buildings against natural and serviceable risks. Gradually one studying plan is beginning to take shape in my mind more and more in detail. I want to study prestressed concrete thoroughly. My research proposal should be â&lt;I&gt;Dynamic responses of prestressed concrete long span beams imposed vibrating loads&lt;/I&gt;â.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;It is after a good deal of thought and self-evaluation that I have decided to pursue a Masterâs Degree in Civil Engineering. The decision was made after careful deliberation in taking into objective my ultimate professional ambition, which is to pursue the research career in this field. The curricula at&amp;nbsp;X University introduced me to a wide gamut of subjects, both in and outside the field and provided me with a strong footing in the theoretical concepts of civil engineering. Iâm a highly motivated, initiative; hard-working, ambitious in studying and non-stop cultivate my mind. I always improve my practical experience by regular contacting with my university professors and various enhanced international technical seminars. In addition, with my proficiency in computer, using structural analysis software and writing report Iâm confident to taking part in higher research career.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The master program in Civil Engineering with many interesting courses is exactly what I have been looking for a long time. I believe that your university with its sophisticated facilities, competent faculty and good studying environment would be an ideal place for me to pursue graduate studies and realize my career goals. Furthermore, Italia with its history of architecture and building techniques as well as the history, the image and the identity of cities prods me coming to Italia to experience this unreachable set of positive values. Iâm eager to taste pizza at its fatherland and watch football matches as a real Italian. This is also a wonderful chance for me to introduce my countryâs culture to international friends.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Itâs really important for me to receive scholarship. In fact that my financial condition canât afford me to pursue any abroad study programs. My family has a tradition of research, my father is a professor and my mother is a doctor. My parents often say that they can help me but they are pure teachers at university. The most valuable thing they give me is not finance however the passion for researching and a serious attitude in science. With financial aid I will wholeheartedly dedicate my capacity for this master program.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I'm sure you have already got an idea of how much I'd like to come and become a graduate student in your master program, but all the same, I'll use one more opportunity to express how strongly I desire to pursue my research career at your campus. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I thank you for the time you spend reading this letter. I am looking forward to a positive response.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Yours sincerely,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;VH&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Please consider my letter of motivation and give me advice !!!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ConsiderLetterMotivationGiveAdvice/dxdhk/post.htm</link><pubDate>Fri, 26 Jan 2007 16:27:33 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:320341</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><description>&lt;TABLE class=MsoTableGrid cellSpacing=0 cellPadding=0&gt;

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&lt;P align=center&gt;1&lt;SUP&gt;st&lt;/SUP&gt; February 2007&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/TD&gt;&lt;/TR&gt;&lt;/TABLE&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Regarding: &lt;B&gt;LETTER OF MOTIVATION&lt;/B&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Dear Sir or Madam,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I am a civil designer of an&amp;nbsp;AAA company,&amp;nbsp;BBB, which is a branch of renowned&amp;nbsp;BBB Corporation. When finding out of this master program Civil Engineering I immediately knew I want to be a part of it. With this letter I would like to apply for the admission as a graduate student in your Scholarship for Master of Science in Civil Engineering program and through it I'd like to bring you closer how deeply I would like to become a student of your course and why I think you'd make a great decision choosing me.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;As Iâve already mentioned, before taking over present position I worked for ZZZ, a leading state company in construction. At here I worked as a structural engineer and participated in designing high-rise buildings. I am very proud of them because they were the first high-rise buildings in my country applied innovative methods of designing and execution: precast/prestressed concrete for structure system and âlift-formâ execution. Presently I am working in a completely fresh field: iron metal factory with my responsibility of designing particular structure systems for giant industrial machines. In any position of a structural engineer I also learn how to apply my theorical knowledge into practice that gives me a good structural sensibility and exact data analysis. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Three years of working in not only civil but also industrial construction projects I have met many fresh, interesting and difficult issues in designing which are never written in textbooks, if any available, their contents are very simple. These issues are dealing with earth quake, the tremor of high-rise building due to seismic load, fatigue failure of reinforced concrete structures due to cycle loads, design and execution of prestressed concrete, etc. I confront awkward circumstances in real designing that in my opinion they can be solved easily by using prestressed concrete structures. A more critical matter is that how to protect this kind of buildings against natural and serviceable risks. Gradually one studying plan is beginning to take shape in my mind more and more in detail. I want to study prestressed concrete thoroughly. My research proposal should be â&lt;I&gt;Dynamic response of prestressed concrete long span beams imposed vibrating loads&lt;/I&gt;â.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;It is after a good deal of thought and self-evaluation that I have decided to pursue a Masterâs Degree in Civil Engineering. The decision was made after careful deliberation in taking into objective my ultimate professional ambition, which is to pursue the research career in this field. The curricula at YYY university introduced me to a wide gamut of subjects, both in and outside the field and provided me with a strong footing in the theoretical concepts of civil engineering. Iâm a highly motivated, initiative; hard-working, ambitious in studying and non-stop cultivate my mind. I always improve my practical experience by regular contacting with my university professors and various enhanced international technical seminars. In addition, with my proficiency in computer, using structural analysis software and writing report Iâm confident to taking part in higher research career.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The master program in Civil Engineering with many interesting courses is exactly what I have been looking for a long time. I believe that your university with its sophisticated facilities, competent faculty and good studying environment would be an ideal place for me to pursue graduate studies and realize my career goals. Furthermore, Italia with its history of architecture and building techniques as well as the history, the image and the identity of cities prods me coming to Italia to experience this unreachable set of positive values. Iâm eager to taste pizza at its fatherland and watch football matches as a real Italian. This is also a wonderful chance for me to introduce my countryâs culture to international friends.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Itâs really important for me to receive scholarship. In fact that my financial condition canât afford me to pursue any abroad study programs. My family has a tradition of research, my father is a professor and my mother is a doctor. My parents often say that they can help me but they are pure teachers at university. The most valuable thing they give me is not finance however the passion for researching and a serious attitude in science. With financial aid I will wholeheartedly dedicate my capacity for this master program.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I'm sure you have already got an idea of how much I'd like to come and become a graduate student in your master program, but all the same, I'll use one more opportunity to express how strongly I desire to pursue my research career at your campus. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I thank you for the time you spend reading this letter. I am looking forward to a positive response.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Yours sincerely,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;VH&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Plz help me imrove my Motivation letter!!!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ImroveMotivationLetter/czjwv/post.htm</link><pubDate>Wed, 08 Feb 2006 21:58:12 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:194348</guid><dc:creator>Zhelyazkov</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Dimitar Petkov Zhelyazkov&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Str Dragan Tzankov 8-B-9&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;8800 Sliven, Bulgaria&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&lt;B&gt;Hanze&lt;/B&gt;&lt;B&gt; University Groningen&lt;/B&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Faculty: International Business School&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Dear Sir/Madam:&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&amp;nbsp;I am from Bulgaria. And this year I am graduating from high school. I am writing to apply for the Bachelorâs Degree program in International Business and Management Studies in order to obtain the necessary knowledge, skills a degree needed for my future career in the business world.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&amp;nbsp;I am from small provincial city in Bulgaria called Sliven, but in the recent five years I have been living and studying in the capitol of my country Sofia. My school Private College Drugba is owned by multinational Bulgarian-Turkish foundation, and most lessons are taught in English. There are also a lot of teachers and students from non-Bulgarian origin who do not speak Bulgarian, and we communicate only in English. This helped me a lot, to prepare for studying in English language program, abroad.&amp;nbsp; As I have been living for five years in dormitory ,with people from different cultures, rather than just Bulgarians, I have learned a lot how to get along with different people, with different thoughts and origins. How to evaluate and enrich myself by the foreign culture, and how better evade culture clashes, and harmful misunderstandings. I consider myself a good team player and in perspective a good leader. I am not afraid of taking in charge of the activities I am involved in, and also of taking the initiative, and the responsibility for making the crucial decisions.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I am truly interested in economics, history, political-geography and other social sciences. In my free time I like reading books in historical or economical themes, and also observing the business world and its trends, by making my own amateur internet researches in freely accessible business devoted web sites. Other things I do in my leisure time are playing chess, football and snowboarding as well as making short âUrban photo tripsâ as I call them.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I chouse to apply for studying in the Netherlands, because Dutch people are famous for their commercial and diplomatic skills. The openness of the Dutch people for the different ,is well known in Bulgaria. I consider studying business in the Netherlands the most appropriate choice. Holland being the headquarters of many transnational corporations in Europe, the logistical heartland of Continental Europeâs intercontinental trade and one of the worlds biggest exporters ,is the best place to continue my observations over the business world trends in closer, up to date view. Hanze university being one of the best universities in the Netherlands and with its affordable costs is the logical choice for me. The problem solving educational system applied in your university is very appealing to my tastes. The International orientation of IBMS fits well my desire for multicultural environment and will certainly help me improve myself.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;With my desire to study business and management the Netherlands is the logical answer for me .By my skills, enthusiasm and passion for studying business I would contribute to the university and myself. I love the architecture of the Dutch cities both old and modern. I could make great photos there.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&amp;nbsp;Thank you for considering my application, I look forward to your favorable reply.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Yours sincerely,&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;Dimitar P. Zhelyazkov&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>motivation letter to apply for PhD position! for help!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/MotivationLetterApplyPosition/ccljg/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sun, 08 Jan 2006 09:39:23 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:180206</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Hi, MountainHiker! I am from China. I met this&amp;nbsp;forum about two months ago and found you are very friendly. Now I want to apply for a PhD position, and I need your help. It would be very helpful. I would highly appreciate your suggestion! Thanks a lot!---By the way, I have registered, but not received the email of password yet.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;My&amp;nbsp;structure of the motivation letter:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;1.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Introduction: who I am, what I want to do, what is future plan and what I can obtain from this&amp;nbsp; program?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;2.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Why quantum optics?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;3.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Why your group?&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;4.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Preparation 1: courses taken;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;5.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Preparation 2: research experience;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;6.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Extracurricular activity;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;7.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Summary;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;8.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Thanks.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I am not satisfied with my letter; I think it has too many paragraphs and maybe too many words. But I don't have any idea to perfect it. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Yours sincerely,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;iony&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Dear A:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I am a motivated master student of Physics Department at Fudan University in China and I would like to apply for the PhD program in the Group B in University C. After completing the PhD program, I plan to continue my research in the field of quantum control. My objective is to become a faculty member at a leading university and investigate the physics of controllable quantum phenomena. This program would assist me to start my career as a scientist in quantum optics. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I am very excited by quantum optics. It provides fundamental studies with the possibility to test the basis of quantum mechanics and simulate many-body quantum systems with unprecedented control of parameters. With these characteristics unique to itself, quantum optics has found applications in various fields, ranging from laser, precise measurement to quantum information. The mental and physical hard work in such a fascinating field full of surprises will be always enchanting and push me to look and strive for more. It can perfectly satisfy my inherent inclination for the beauty of physics and pursuit of something new. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;The Group B has a distinguished research reputation. I have researched it from its homepage and its publications. The research level is international, the environment is stimulating, the projects are creative and the collaborations are broad. They are all crucially advantageous for research, and hence attract me. Besides, University C has a glorious history in physics, which would inspire me to pursue the truth and work harder. I have confirmed such motivation in &lt;a href="http://www.itp.phys.ethz.ch/staff/rice/" target="_blank" title="http://www.itp.phys.ethz.ch/staff/rice/"&gt;Prof. D&lt;/a&gt; during his visit to Fudan University in this semester. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I have furnished myself with solid foundation in physics and mathematics. It is confirmed by my high GPA and rank. Especially, I have completed the most relevant curriculums, including Atomic Physics, Quantum mechanics, Advanced Quantum mechanics, Electrodynamics, Electronic Method, Electronic Method Experiment, Structures and Properties of Materials, Solid State Physics, Semiconductor Physics, Principles of Semiconductor Technology, Optics, Nonlinear Optics, Laser Physics, and Optical and Opto-Electonics Measurements. Besides, I have attended some Colloquiums on Mesoscopic Physics, Quantum Information, and Atomic, Molecular and Optical Physics. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I started my experimental experience as early as I just entered the university, and published a paper on liquid crystal light valve in 2002. Now in the Surface Physics Laboratory (National Key Laboratory), I am researching nanomagnetism mainly with optical tools and trying to understand the effects of many-body interactions and dimensionality. With hard working, I have finished several projects, of which the first one was finished when I was a fresh master and had to adapt myself to everything in the laboratory. My experimental research is focused on the ultrathin films Ni/Cu(001), Fe/GaAs(001), Fe/Cu(001) and Fe/Cu&lt;SUB&gt;x&lt;/SUB&gt;Au&lt;SUB&gt;1-x&lt;/SUB&gt;(001). I have not only mastered UHV, MBE, Surface Magneto-Optical Kerr Effect, STM and Physical Properties Measurement System, but also developed some nanotechnologies, including the &lt;EM&gt;in situ&lt;/EM&gt; ac-susceptometer with optical technique, and the composition wedge to manipulate properties at nanoscale. Besides, I also have theoretical research experience. Especially in the investigation of finite lattice size effect of nanoclusters array, I proposed the concept of temperature fluctuation in the system for the first time. Some projects were finished under collaboration with the colleagues. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;In regard to my extracurricular activities, I like playing football, running, cycling, and traveling. I enjoy the success and fun, and appreciate the value of the perseverance and team spirit. I have learnt the commitment necessary for success as an individual and how to work as a team member.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;As evidenced by my experience, I have a solid background both in relevant experimental and theoretical physics, a strong adaptability and a high team spirit. With all these abilities and my fascination in quantum optics, I am confident that joining your program will be a great experience and a large step forward toward my final goal. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Should you require further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your favorable reply. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Yours sincerely,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;iony&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Time is limited...help me with my motivation letter...THX!!!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/LimitedMotivationLetter/2/brkzz/Post.htm#86501</link><pubDate>Mon, 04 Apr 2005 07:03:36 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:86501</guid><dc:creator>reviver4dream</dc:creator><description>Ooo,Abbie, I do think this revision looks better, could you help me once again:)&lt;br /&gt;I am not sure about several phrases , can you help correct them? Thanks:)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;LETTER OF MOTIVATION&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Dear Sir or Madam:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;During my education to date, my strength of character and determination to fulfil my goals enabled me to work hard and achieve good grades. Now I find myself ready to reach out for a higher educational goal, and I am applying to you to study for a BA in Cultural Anthropology and Developmental Science&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My education in China was broad, including studies of Chinese ancient and modern history, modern history of the world, political economics, philosophy etc. . This variety of topics enabled me to gain an awareness of the humanities and its development. Although favouring the social sciences, I incorporated other science subjects and mathematics into my studies, which I believe has brought me much more effective tools and techniques wherever in logical analysis or rational conclusion, and moreover, it has endowed me with an objective and comprehensive attitude.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My special interest in geography has been aroused since I was a little girl, who often stood against a huge map staring at it curiously. The fascination is still there and I own a collection of maps and atlases, which supports me in my studies. I enjoy reading travel notes and magazines, and am keen on documentaries about different cultures and customs. The read about the Nobel Prize winner Pearl S. Buckâs autobiography has sent me an enlightenment saying that the best way to observe and savour a certain society or community, is to live amongst the people and get mingled with them. However, to get a systematic education and research training in such realm first is a necessity, it could help me better explore and refine the essence.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;    What has motivated me doesnât limit in the very courses, but the University of Leiden and the great city in which it lies. The history, the academic records, and the applied achievements dedicated to the world over, especially the universityâs historical commitment to critical thinking and the art of debate raised my interest. As an independent thinker I would love to take part in that ongoing process of change.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;    Furthermore, the University of Leiden owns a unique library of Chinese literature, and is undoubtedly the centre of Sinology in Europe. Touching my own country and cultural origin from an outside perspective seems to be challenging to me as well, but I do believe that from a brand new angle, I could better understand my own culture and the comparison with other countries.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;During the application process, the officerâs rapid, detailed and sincere responses to my innumerable questions ensured me of my choice.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I consider myself to be insightful, intuitive and adventurous. During an unforgettable traveling to a thermal spring and water-eroded cave with a large group of contemporaries, we were shown the great landscape and figures made by the local people hundreds of years ago, from which Iâve felt the huge power of creativity and the importance of our being organized orderly, otherwise some of the spots would be ignored unconsciously. And the availability of team co-operation, core decision-making is beneficial.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The experience of being a conductor of a 60-people chorus and the planner of the whole performance, which had been put on in the municipal theatre of Hefei as a celebration of the New Year 2002, has given me a valuable and practical experience in disposing the divarication, coordination, and strategic planning. As the last programme in that celebration, with my calm and active conducting and guiding, it earned the warmest applause of the 1000 people in the audience. Learning to play the accordion for years provided me with the profound comprehension of music and the leading singing by myself during the practice period did encourage and capture the members of the chorus, which allowed me to make the performance a success. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Although Iâve got little chance to play football, for the pitch is always been occupied by boys, I am eager for being a participant singing and cheering there in the stadium together with the crazy fans dressed in the same color, waving the team flags. Itâs obvious that here in China thereâs rare such circumstance for football.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I believe that studying and engaging in extracurricular activities at your institution would improve my communication skills, and enrich my life experience.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Yours sincerely,&lt;br /&gt;Guo Ying&lt;br /&gt;    &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;?:)secondly, what type of characters is formal ??or can I just choose the one that appears clearly and nice?:)&lt;br /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Time is limited...help me with my motivation letter...THX!!!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/LimitedMotivationLetter/brwbl/post.htm#85861</link><pubDate>Sat, 02 Apr 2005 01:09:56 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:85861</guid><dc:creator>abbie1948</dc:creator><description>It is  a little bit flowery, Reviver. Maybe we can make it a little more formal. I have left out the reference to your Zodiacal sign, as this is not considered significant in the west.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Dear Sirs,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Having studied hard during my education to date, and gained good grades, I am applying to you to study for a BA in Cultural Anthropology and Developmental Science. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt; I had a broad education, studying Chinese ancient and modern history, modern history of the world, political economics, philosophy etc. and gained an awareness of the Humanities. Although favouring the social sciences, I incorporated other social science subjects and mathematics into my studies, which I believe has helped me develop effective techniques and given me an awareness of the necessary methods to pursue logical analysis and draw rational conclusions.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I developed an interest in geography as a very young child, when I was fascinated by maps. I gradually collected maps and atlases, and a small library of geographical texts and information. I enjoy reading travel books, and am fascinated by documentaries  about different cultures and customs. I was inspired by the autobiography of Pearl S. Buck, and agree that the best way to study any community or  society is to live amongst the people.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I am applying to study at the University of Leiden because of its sound academic record, its history, and the beautiful city in which it lies. Further, the University owns a unique library of Chinese literature, and is undoubtedly the European centre of Chinese Studies. I believe that studying at your institution, together with extra-curricular activities, would improve my communication, study and research skills.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I consider myself to be insightful, intuitive and adventurous. I also have determination and strength of character, which I feel will enable me to benefit from the University and the city. I am independent, calm under pressure, and have good interpersonal skills. I enjoy travelling and having new experiences, and I am interested in languages and choral music, and enjoy playing football.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thank you very much for considering my request. I hope I may look forward to a positive response. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;yours sincerely, &lt;br /&gt;Guo Ying &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Whats the correct reponse?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WhatsTheCorrectReponse/xghl/post.htm</link><pubDate>Fri, 28 Jan 2005 18:39:39 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:70646</guid><dc:creator>Guest</dc:creator><description>Letter starts,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;To the football manager&lt;br /&gt;should it end with yours sincerely or yours faithfully?</description></item></channel></rss>