Hello there! Can anyone help me to improve this covering letter which I will need for an internship? Thanks a lot! To whom it may concern, Please accept this letter along with my Resume in consideration for a internship position within your

Date: - Please correct my letter if there are any mistakes. I will be very thankful to you. Dear Sir/Madam, Sub: - Requesting Admission My name is ** and I have done my High School and received Senior Secondary

Hello ! I am new to this forum and I have discovered it when I was looking for formal letter samples. I want to apply to a College in Denmark and I want to have a chance to be chosen, so I am requiring help from anyone that is kind enough to offer

I have reviewed your letter again, with suggested changes in bold. I cannot follow all your colours and interjections, so I have merely amended as I think best (and some of them are improvements on my own previous suggestions): Program Code:

Is this a cover letter (I would like to apply for...) or a motivation letter (The reason I want to be a developer is...)? Certainly in whatever letter you develop, you should mention the movie. You can follow whichever format you want for a

I didn't say your view was that of a novice, but that the standard 3-paragraph essay structure is designed to make essay writing easier for novice writers. I apologise if you felt insulted; that was not my intent. The 3 para format is also

The format isn't fine. Yes, there is no law that says paragraphs must be 3, and I don't like the condescending comment that my view is of a novice standard, please take that back. If you are sending a formal letter, I think the style must be

1) My name is X.X. This is a very unusual opening line and not even necessary one. Your name is known from the CV as well as the from the address. There is no need to introduce itself in a formal letter. My name is .. is for writing to potential

Your leter is a bit long; hence, I have only corrected the first paragraph. With these comments in the back of your head, you should be able to improve the other paragraphs, too! There are some things that sound a bit strange to my ears. I have

First 10x So it's not possible to be used as I proposed or it's not good to be used like that in a formal letter? As I already said it's not a motivation letter, it's a part of application form and there is a question in it: What motivates you