First of all thanks a lot!!! I couldn't imagine that there were so many issues in my letter. Sorry that I wasn't clear enough. I should clarify things a bit before continue. The company I'm writing to is a world-wide organization. In

Dear Anon: First, as Mister M. has written, using "i" and "u" is extremely bad form in a formal letter. In fact, if I were your boss, I would consider being called "u" an insult. Second, your first paragraph is a

We have arranged for the surveyor to inspect these goods in November (or do you mean, on 7th November). After that: your paragraph sounds like it is part of a formal letter to a client or customer, so that "after that" is slightly too informal.

I didn't say your view was that of a novice, but that the standard 3-paragraph essay structure is designed to make essay writing easier for novice writers. I apologise if you felt insulted; that was not my intent. The 3 para format is also

The format isn't fine. Yes, there is no law that says paragraphs must be 3, and I don't like the condescending comment that my view is of a novice standard, please take that back. If you are sending a formal letter, I think the style must be

Hello .. I will give you some help in writing your letter .. I'm going to tell you how to write a very formal letter.. You should write your address right aligned in the top of the page.. after you finish writing your address skip one

Can you help me with my English task? I have to weite a semiformal letter to this subject: You contact a previous teacher about your choice of career. Your heart is set on theatrical studies but your parents disapprove of this choice for various

Here's how you should lay it out: Date Name of recipient (This line and the next two should be single-spaced, this program won't allow me to do that.) Recipient's address Rest of address RE: What your letter is about Dear Name of

Your leter is a bit long; hence, I have only corrected the first paragraph. With these comments in the back of your head, you should be able to improve the other paragraphs, too! There are some things that sound a bit strange to my ears. I have

Hi, Just tidy up these paragraphs a little bit. I have few questions connected with the application process for this course. Will my IBD qualify me to attend or would I need to take any additional courses, which are obligatory to access this