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Re: Hi, I have a questions about my letter to my professor.

Anonymous — Thu, 13 Mar 2008 07:29:20 GMT

You wrote these sentences to respond to the original inquiring post: :

This is very informal - were you asked to do an informal letter or an essay?

Other than that, my main impression is that you haven't really answered the question - only a few words about your impression of the class.

I like your use of dashes -- they flow naturally and seem to convey your thoughts naturally. Having said that your first sentence of using a simple sentence and following that with a question with a dash to connect both is very interesting. In your second sentence, what follows the dash isn't a clause, nor does it seem to link to the previous clause in a way that natually connects them but rather have done in a way that is connecting but rather distant structually.

How can I use to learn to use a dash like you have done? I looked at online sources for help but they don't seem to go in detail about this punctuation mark.

Re: Am without I

khoff — Thu, 04 Aug 2005 04:46:12 GMT

It's sometimes called "telegraphic style" - as if you were sending a telegram and paying for each word, you would leave out some words to make it shorter. You might write like this in a diary, or in a very informal letter, especially if almost every sentence would otherwidse begin with "I."

In the other example you give, "I like to write, surf the net, and am also a member of the International Club," you need the "am" because what follows it is not a construction parallel to "I like to write" and "(I like to) surf the net." It's not a great sentence either way - I wouldn't say it's incorrrect (with "am") but it seems to me that in a list of three things they should be parallel in construction. I would prefer either a more parallel construction : "I like to write, surf the net and attend the International Club" or else two more distinct clauses: "I like to write and surf the net, and I am also a member of the International Club." (without a comma after "write" it looks less like a list.) I'm not sure what the appropriate grammar rules here are, I'm just trying to explain why the original sentence sounds rather awkward to me.

Re: Two days ago

Mister Micawber — Thu, 30 Dec 2004 00:55:14 GMT

Morning, Non Con--

'Better'? I would probably use the past perfect here if I were writing a thesis, a careful formal letter, or a piece of literature (and I think I would be overconservative in doing so). What would I say if I were talking about my wierd friend, Jack? 'Jack sang in the park again this morning-- he did it yesterday too-- and the day before!' Or something like that. I think the neutral use sits with the simple past.

Points to consider:

(1) there is a noun phrase clearly indicating the past in the past ('the two previous days')
(2) there is, however, no conjunction indicating the temporal relationship ('as'?)
(3) the pragmatic reason for the clause is to indicate the continuity of his singing habit; it is not to make clear that he had finished singing on the 27th and 28th when he began on the 29th.

(1) and (3) point to the use of the simple past; (2) would encourage the use of the past perfect.