http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aFormal+letter+tag%3aEnglish+as+a+second+languageSearch results for 'tag:Formal letter tag:English as a second language' matching tags 'Formal letter' and 'English as a second language'en-USCSMOD (Build: 3256.36449)http://www.englishforums.com/English/FormalLetterUniversity/4/lxjr/Post.htm#58242Mon, 29 Nov 2004 22:32:18 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:58242anon1Greg, <br /> <br />I don't see that your space is limited. That said, you don't want to write a book either. <br /> <br />Para1: What you want to accomplish at their univeristy. What you plan to do after graduation. Mention that English is the international business language and it will provide you with the best opportunities to chase your dreams. <br /> <br />Para2: State your strong academic achievements. With your strong track record, you are confident that you will excel at their program. <br /> <br />Para3: Tell us a little about yourself. Tell us what you like, what you are good at, and why you want to pursue your degree. You might need a couple paragraphs. <br /> <br />Para4: Summarize what you've said. You are bringing together your academic and personal strengths to accomplish your goals. <br /> <br />Para5: Thank them for considering your application and you look forward to their positive reply. <br /> <br />You're done. <br /> <br />A hint to the wise: Don't try to use "complicated language"or "flowery words" but instead stick with the basics. As a person who has learned English as a second language, you are likely to make mistakes if you get too fancy. Stick to the basics and you'll impress them. <br /> <br />MountainHiker