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Re: Sample of formal letter writing

Clive — Sat, 02 Feb 2008 17:25:17 GMT

Hi,

Sorry, we don't write letters for people, but we will help you with comments if you try to write one youtrself.

Where you live, do people who are looking for a job write a resume?

Best wishes, Clive

Re: PhD Cover Letter ! Need help to correct it

Kathrin — Sun, 09 Sep 2007 08:21:41 GMT

Hello all,

First of all, i would like to thank everyone who have good posts on this forum. It helps me a lot when I learn English.
I am now writting a PhD. Cover Letter. I would highly appreciate any help to improve it.
Please help! I am not good at writting .

Thank you in advance.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

On recommendation of Prof. Dr. ***, University of ***, I am writing to you in order to apply for ~~the PhDt~~the PhD-program you are offering. ~~Student position at ***. I have enclosed a completed resume for your review.~~

My name is Quan Nguyen, a fresh graduate from University of *** [Please don't introduce yourselve in a formal letter, it is very unprofessional. Besides, your resume is enclosed.] In March 2007, I ~~hold~~ got the Master degree in Communication and Media Engineering. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do an my internship and master thesis in the *** company. There I gained profound ~~developed not only my~~ knowledges in web development ~~but also real~~ as well as working experiences in an international environment. My thesis is related to the issues in Business Intelligent and Web 2.0. I obtained skills in J2EE programming and advanced web technologies for Enterprise Applications including Jboss, Portal/Portlet, Ajax, Web services,etc.. ~~It was a great experience for me, which~~ has focused my interests on the topic of Web 2.0 technologies.

After my graduation, I worked as a PHP developer for ***, an IT and business consulting company. I gained further experiences in web programming, project management and team-working.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. It makes me confident that I will be suitable for your research team.

For my future career, I see this PhD program as the way to broaden my knowledges in designing and implementing Enterprise Distributed Applications, as well as how to ~~apply~~ ~~these applications~~ use them in business, ~~which~~ in the case that SAP is now the best solution. ~~This~~ Your program ~~proposes~~ covers areas of research that match my interests, such as Business Process Management and Semantic Web Technologies. ~~I have no doubt in mind that I have enough knowledges, skills and competence to pursue the PhD program in your research center.~~

I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I may be suitable for this position. I am now on vacation in Vietnam, but can be reached at any time via email or telephone at number +***.[Your contact data should be in the resume and every person in the business wourld know how to reach an other person. If your contact data are not on the resume, you should put it there and don't write about it. Again, it looks very unprofessional, sorry, if I am too hard by trying to help]

Thank you very much for your time an ~~your~~ consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Quan Nguyen

Formal letter: research inquiry

Anonymous — Wed, 29 Nov 2006 00:13:38 GMT

Hellow,

first of all I'd like to say that I like this initiative and this forum. Although I 'presume' I write understandable English, I still would like to get rid of stupid mistakes. Researching about music piracy for my journalism studies, I'd like to write organisations related to copyright matters to ask them about their point of view in a formal way. I looked up some things and formulations and I came up with this letter. Can you tell me if there are still large mistakes in it? Thanks in advance,

Joris

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Dear Sir / Madam

My name is Joris Heymans. I'm a journalism student at the Plantijnhogeschool in Antwerp (Belgium). Currently I am researching about illegal filesharing and music piracy. I hope you can help me in obtaining a better view on the vision of organisations related to copyright affairs.

I would like to get to know more about your organisation's view on the way the recording industry should deal with the current situation. Should the industry invest in preventing illegal filesharing and downloading, trying to wipe out music piracy, or should companies concentrate on searching for other activities (such as offering legal downloads, ringtones etc.) that may make up the loss of incomes throuh piracy?

Can you provide me with an answer on this question or tell me where I can find more information about the organisation's point of view on this matter?

I would like to thank you in advance for your time and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Joris Heymans

Plantijn Hogeschool, Antwerpen

Belgium

Please help me fix my letter

mohen — Sat, 30 Oct 2004 22:18:13 GMT

i'm tryin to write an formal letter to couple of unversites , so please help with this letter .
this one is really bad , so if yÃ¡ll can please add/fix/rebuild it or whatever so it will look better i will appreciate ! ( by the way , don't worry about the spelling )

dear coach ,
My name is Guy Cohen , i'm from israel and i'm suggesting myself (to a ) (for your) college.
let me tell you about me ,
i was born in 83' , i played since i was 10 . i was the best scoring in the yough team of "Hapoel Eilat ( in the first legaue ) . after the yough team i got recuited ( i had no choice ) to the army . it wasnt that bad , cause i had my "Active Player " rights , so i was able to play and keep on shape at the time .
I played at Yotveta for 3 years, and i became the leader of my team .
i decided that i need to get education , and the states is the only place to fulfill my dream , combing basketball and school at the same time.

at july 2004 , i went to the eatern invitiual camp , and i got a few offers from some colleges , but i couldnt afford it , cause its was a divion III , and it's not full scholarship .
i did go to hilldale college ( at michigan ) and did a try out game there, so u can ask the coach DUMA what is my skills .
fortunally , when i played in the camp , some french coach saw me there and invite me to a tour in paris... i went to paris , and i did my tour there .
it was nice , but i don't want to play for money , i want to learn and get more educated , since i'm pretty young.

that's why i came back to israel.

understood that the full scholarship is usually given at april or even before , so that's the reason i'm writing u so soon.
i attached my resume from the camp plus a few pictures , and since then i improved myself alot .
i workin' right now on my tape , so you'll see me in the future .

thank you for your time

sincerly yours ,
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