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I'm not too sure what all this is about - is it just part of a letter? anyway my suggestions are in red. By the end (By the end makes no sense, do you mean by the way? Not really suitable for a formal letter though). I should mention that there is no graudated (spelling) MSc or PhD study at...

Hi, As you see, I have followed some of them, and not others. Actually, not I can’t see because I can’t be bothered to compare your specific iterations when you have taken some but not all. It would be helpful to know where you chose a different path and why. Dear Sir or...

Hello. I'm in a middle of writing a formal letter to a British university and I'm not sure if "programme" or "program" is the correct spelling. Can you help me out?

Greg, From my brief read through the web site, all you need is C in the major courses. So to me, I think as long as you have reasonable grades plus proof of your English fluency, you shouldn't have too many difficulties. With regard to your original letter, it contains too much information....