http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aFormal+letters+tag%3aDates+tag%3aInterviewsSearch results for 'tag:Formal letters tag:Dates tag:Interviews' matching tags 'Formal letters', 'Dates', and 'Interviews'en-USCSMOD (Build: 3273.32735)http://www.englishforums.com/English/UrgentLetterEmployerGrammarCheck/chhlj/post.htm#203652Mon, 06 Mar 2006 11:25:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:203652demetriusDear Tim Garland amp Wendy Luc Thank you for giving me the opportunity to discuss the position of Web Programmer with you Our meeting helped me to better understand your company s goals and reaffirmed my belief that this is the organization I would like to work for Although I m ranked second you have indicated that I am second choice among the three candidates I would like you to reconsider about my application as I believe I have a lot to offer not only again to be the right person you would like to hire and at the same time giving me a chance to work as a long term employee not just to benefit the development team but also the company I made some mistakes by showing too much of may perhaps have over emphasized Front End Materials Front End Application skills in the interview as but I ve the I also have extensive experience in Back End Programming Knowledge too which I didn t showmay might not have been apparent With all that I could clearly see that you doubt if I were the right candidate your organization is looking for To reaffirm your confidenceIn In order to reassure you I come came from a wide programming background and from during my time at collegea Programming College APIIT I designed and I ve done a successful prototype E Commerce system for my Final Year Project using ASP VB Script SQL and DBMS The project was a success but not only that I ve I have also integrated multimedia elements with Back End Programming Languages programming languages and a properly designed web presentation layer layout to make it as a whole package of an produce a complete E Commerce System I can show you this project if you decideThe project is available to be shown if you would like to invite me for a 2nd interview As I amI m a fast and a self learner I believe that it would be a straightforward matter for me to become quickly acquainted with any particular programming language that my work may require would say I could easily pick up any Programming Languages and learn them in a fast pace 2 3 weeks will be needed for my refresh by that time the hiring processes signing offer letter medical report HR processing etc will take longer than that so I ve retrained myself to accomplish your work and am capable to handle the job as per your requirements and lead Your Company to success I I don t fully understand the preceding section what is a refresh but I feel it is unnecessary in any case I m a hardworking someone with a sense of humor a competent young man have the ability to product a self learner and easily mix around with new people I would say its better to think for a long term employee instead of a short term Don t you want to hire somebody like this Remove ALL of the previous section NEVER ask informal questions in a formal letter I am hardworking friendly conscientious self motivated and a good mixer These are all qualities that I believe will contribute to making me a valuable long term employee From my perspective may I say how impressed I was at my interview with the enthusiasm of both yourselves and your staff It has made me very keen to become a part of your continuing success As I ve seen in the interview I would like to say I love the group of people and have the enthusiasm to work with them Since I m eagerly looking for a job because I have to pay up my mortgage it would be appreciate if you guys to help me up and reconsider my application I don t mind to start with a lower salary that you ve decided to pay for the first candidate NO NO NO NEVER sound as though you are desperate and NEVER mention personal difficulties I hope to hear from you soon and would be pleased to meet with you again for another interview Sincerely Vincenthttp://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammaWordingLetter/kmqn/post.htmSun, 31 Oct 2004 02:53:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:52883tess_txI found your website from google I take a look at your writting section and found that they are very heplful Below is my formal letter to US Citizenship and Immigration Service I need somebody helps with grammatical and wording It quite long please take your time Thank you very much November 2004 Mr First name Middle name Last name Interim District Dorector of Services 126 Northpoint Dr Houston Texas 77060 Re follow up Adjust Status Dear Mr Last name My name is Eddie Last name I am an American citizen who married with Thai lady in August 21 2001 the Marriage License attached In January 3 2002 we filed form I 485 an application to Permanent Residence for my wife the receipts attached After that we have been waiting for almost 2 years and finally filed Form G 14 requesting for information on the status of my wife and you were kindly answered us your letter attached A few months ago we were informed by an American Thai couple who married about a year after us His wife First name Last name A 1234567 already had an interviewed and also has conditional green card We are so skeptical about what went wrong with our case and trying to do our research from the INS website We found the latest information about Houston TX Processing dates Posted October 14 2004 the paper attached Please see the highlight for form I 485 and processing time It will be 3 years in January 2005 that our case have been pending and we feel that we should be able to schedule an appointment for interview long time ago Thank you for your time and consideration Best Regards Signature My First name Last name Encl 1 a copy of Marriage License 2 a copy of receipts from ins for I 485 3 a copy of your letter dated Oct 17 2003 4 the paper shows District Office Processing Dates for Houston TX Posted October 14 2004