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Anonymous — Thu, 04 Sep 2008 15:49:39 GMT

Hello :)

I would like to ask someone to make corrections/improvements to my letter. I am not skilled at all in writing formal letters so any help would be appreciated. Thank you in advance.

Maria

Dear Ms. ***,

I would like to inform you that there is a possibility for me to come to Madrid at the end of next week not like I was previously expecting at the middle of October. I am going to be in Madrid 5five days starting at Saturday the 13^th. I would be glad to have the interview with you at your earliest convenience.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

FirstName LastName

could somebody please help to fix my grammar on this letter?

vincent tee — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 06:32:41 GMT

Hi Teacher,

The below letter needs to be forwarded to my interviewer but it seems there are some grammar mistakes and imporper sentence structure. Could someone please help me to correct those mistakes?

I would like to say these 2 sentences in my formal letter as well and how am I gonna include that "I love the office enviroment" and "the interviewer character" in a formal style?

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Dear Nancy,

Thank you for the opportunity to discuss the position of Multimedia Developer with you. Our meeting helped me to better understand your companyâs goals and reaffirmed my belief that this is the organization I would like to work for. I think you may see that my experience and qualifications match the requirements you seek. I believe I will produce exactly what your organization and its clients require and beyond.

Since multimedia development is a personal interest in my life, I shall work with enthusiasm. Currently I am improving my Interpersonal and IT skills, as these are also important for my career.

Incidentally, I would like to say thank you for noticing me that I had been slightly defensive in certain time in the interview and I would like to apologize on this matter. I hope you will not view this as a minus point but instead giving me an opportunity as part of my interpersonal development skills toward my career success.

I appreciate the time you took to interview me. I hope to hear from you soon, and would be pleased to meet with you again for another interview.

Sincerely,
Vincent

Could somebody please help and make amendment to my letter?

vincent tee — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 05:08:24 GMT

Hi Teacher,

The below letter needs to be forwarded to my interviewer but it seems there are some grammar mistakes and imporper sentence structure. Could someone please help me to correct those mistakes?

I would like to say these 2 sentences in my formal letter as well and how am I gonna include that "I love the office enviroment" and "the interviewer character" in a formal style?

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Dear Nancy,

I appreciate the time you took to interview me. I hope to hear from you soon, and would be pleased to meet with you again for another interview.

Sincerely,
Vincent

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I really appreciate your help. Thank You,Vincent

Re: Urgent Letter to an Employer. Grammar Check

Demetrius — Mon, 06 Mar 2006 11:25:46 GMT

Dear Tim Garland & Wendy Luc,

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to discuss the position of Web Programmer with you. Our meeting helped me to better understand your companyâs goals and reaffirmed my belief that this is the organization I would like to work for.

Although Iâm ranked second you have indicated that I am second choice among the three candidates, I would like you to reconsider about my application as I believe I have a lot to offer not only again to be the right person you would like to hire and at the same time giving me a chance to work as a long term employee, not just to benefit the development team but also the company.

I made some mistakes by showing too much of may perhaps have over-emphasized Front End Materials Front-End Application skills in the interview as , but Iâve the I also have extensive experience in Back- End Programming Knowledge too which I didnât showmay might not have been apparent. With all that, I could clearly see that you doubt if I were the right candidate your organization is looking for. To reaffirm your confidenceIn In order to reassure you, I come came from a wide programming background and from during my time at collegea Programming College, APIIT, I designed and Iâve done a successful prototype E-Commerce system for my Final Year Project using ASP, VB Script, SQL and DBMS. The project was a success, but not only that, Iâve I have also integrated multimedia elements with Back- End Programming Languages programming languages and a properly designed web presentation layer layout to make it as a whole package of an produce a complete E-Commerce System. I can show you this project if you decideThe project is available to be shown if you would like to invite me for a 2^nd interview.

As I amIâm a fast and a self- learner, I believe that it would be a straightforward matter for me to become quickly acquainted with any particular programming language that my work may require. would say I could easily pick up any Programming Languages and learn them in a fast pace. 2-3 weeks will be needed for my refresh, by that time the hiring processes (signing offer letter, medical report, HR processing, etc) will take longer than that, so Iâve retrained myself to accomplish your work and am capable to handle the job as per your requirements and lead Your Company to success. (I(I don't fully understand the preceding section - what is a "refresh"? - but I feel it is unnecessary in any case.)

Iâm a hardworking, someone with a sense of humor, a competent young man, have the ability to product, a self learner and easily mix around with new people. I would say its better to think for a long term employee instead of a short term. Donât you want to hire somebody like this? (Remove ALL of the previous section - NEVER ask informal questions in a formal letter). I am hardworking, friendly, conscientious, self-motivated and a good mixer. These are all qualities that I believe will contribute to making me a valuable long-term employee. From my perspective, may I say how impressed I was at my interview with the enthusiasm of both yourselves and your staff. It has made me very keen to become a part of your continuing success.

As Iâve seen in the interview, I would like to say I love the group of people and have the enthusiasm to work with them.

Since Iâm eagerly looking for a job because I have to pay up my mortgage, it would be appreciate if you guys to help me up and reconsider my application. I donât mind to start with a lower salary that youâve decided to pay for the first candidate.(NO! NO! NO! NEVER sound as though you are desperate, and NEVER mention personal difficulties!) I hope to hear from you soon, and would be pleased to meet with you again for another interview.

Sincerely,
Vincent

Re: How to start a formal letter

Guest — Wed, 16 Mar 2005 13:58:15 GMT

I want to apply for a job but I do not know the proper way how to write a formal letter. This is because Ineed to apply first. Then I would be called for an interview

Please help with gramma and wording of this letter !

tess_tx — Sun, 31 Oct 2004 02:53:49 GMT

I found your website from google. I take a look at your writting section and found that they are very heplful. Below is my formal letter to US Citizenship and Immigration Service. I need somebody helps with grammatical and wording. It quite long, please take your time. Thank you very much.

November 2004

Mr. First name Middle name Last name
Interim District Dorector of Services
126 Northpoint Dr
Houston, Texas 77060

Re: follow up Adjust Status

Dear Mr. Last name:

My name is Eddie Last name. I am an American citizen who married with Thai lady in August 21, 2001 (the Marriage License attached). In January 3, 2002, we filed form I-485, an application to Permanent Residence for my wife (the receipts attached). After that we have been waiting for almost 2 years and finally filed Form G-14 requesting for information on the status of my wife and you were kindly answered us (your letter attached).

A few months ago, we were informed by an American â Thai couple, who married about a year after us. His wife First name Last name, A# 1234567 already had an interviewed and also has conditional green card. We are so skeptical about what went wrong with our case and trying to do our research from the INS website. We found the latest information about Houston TX Processing dates, Posted October 14, 2004 (the paper attached). Please see the highlight for form I-485 and processing time. It will be 3 years in January 2005 that our case have been pending and we feel that we should be able to schedule an appointment for interview long time ago.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Best Regards,

Signature

My First name Last name

Encl.
1. a copy of Marriage License
2. a copy of receipts from ins for I-485
3. a copy of your letter dated Oct. 17, 2003
4. the paper shows District Office Processing Dates for Houston TX Posted October 14, 2004

Re: Follow up email after unsuccessful internal interview.....

sherif_fam — Tue, 26 Oct 2004 21:36:45 GMT

Hi,

The letter sounds good to me as well.

Only one comment: I read someplace that we should not use abbreviations in formal letters, such as (I'm sure...), instead we use (I am sure...).

Best regards,

Sherif