Please Help me correct and make the complete sentence of MYWORDS in appraisal

dhan_csn — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 10:20:06 GMT

Looking Back

What achievement during the past year are you most proud of?

MY Words

Proactively work in monitoring team to providing that maximum level of Availability of global IT resource (Servers & Network Link).

User administration tasks and cases are completed in effectively with in the period of SLA.

In what way does cooperation within your department and with other departments affect your handling of tasks?

Cooperation within the Department

MY Words

Maintaining good working relationships with all members in my department as well as other department would helping to rendering good support to

End users.

On a scale from 1-5 where 1 being the extremely bad and 5 being the extremely good, how is the cooperation

Within department

1 2 3 4 5

Reason

MY Words

Cooperation within the department is good.

What will be your contribution to the cooperation within the department in the coming year?

MY Words

Organizing frequent meeting & training for our team members to have a better knowledge sharing within us.

How can your manager and colleagues contribute to improved cooperation in the coming year?

MY Words

Conducting discussions and organizing training regularly to improve the quality and standard of the IT support.

Performance Appraisal

The performance appraisal for the current year:

1. Appraisal of result agreed on at last review

AA : Above Anticipated Performance

E : Excellent Performance

A : Anticipated Performance

NI : Needs Improved Performance

The tasks for which the employee holds Responsibility

Responsiblities Unit of Measurement

1 Resolution based on knowledge base Timeliness E AA A NI

2 Escalation to respective teams Timeliness E AA A NI

3 Follow up and closure Timeliness E AA A NI

4 Timely completion of tasks Timeliness E AA A NI

Reasons for the above rating

MY Words

Effectively handling user administration task, access rights and mail related cases

Understanding of technical problem and timely escalations to the appropriate team members

Resolving the issue/incident by follow up with respective team

Effectively working on more tasks & cases,monitoring BMC & orion,back up jobs and virus alerts

Future

This section deals with the employee's tasks in the coming year and competency development. It is divided into five subsections:

1. Defining tasks and results

2. Competencies necessary to achieve the tasks and result defined above

3. Specific competency profile relevant to the employee

4. Competency development plan

5. Views on future career

1. Defining tasks and results

Responsibility Unit of Measurement

Enter the most important tasks for which the employee holds responsiblity

Resolution based on knowledge base Timeliness

Escalation to respective teams Timeliness

Follow up and closure Timeliness

Timely completion of tasks Timeliness

Reasons

MY Words

Having Knowledge of BMC and Orion,AD administration

Timely escalating the technical problem with Global team members

Timely Completion for AD task & cases

Functional Competencies

2. Specific competency portfolio for : Dhandapani

Technical Knowledge E AA A NI

Technical Solution Development E AA A NI

Technical Support E AA A NI

Behavioural Competencies

Learning Ability E AA A NI

Team Work E AA A NI

Quality Focus E AA A NI

Decision Making and Problem Solving E AA A NI

Communication E AA A NI

Specific competency

3. Competency development plan

Prioritise the competencies to be improved

Means of achieving

competency improvement

Timetable Responsible Follow up

MY Words

Technical Knowledge ADS & Exchange 01 Sep 2009 Appraiser Self

Achievement Orientation Training 05 Oct 2009 HR Self

Require to attend technical training to update technical skills in order to work with more incidents task and cases.

Remarks

Continue in Present Job

Remarks

Deeper Specialisation in Present job

New field of work in present department

New Department

Make your preferences for future career path

4. Views on future career

MY Words

I Would like to take responsiblities for Exchange

Re: PhD Cover Letter ! Need help to correct it

Kathrin — Sun, 09 Sep 2007 08:21:41 GMT

Hello all,

First of all, i would like to thank everyone who have good posts on this forum. It helps me a lot when I learn English.
I am now writting a PhD. Cover Letter. I would highly appreciate any help to improve it.
Please help! I am not good at writting .

Thank you in advance.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

On recommendation of Prof. Dr. ***, University of ***, I am writing to you in order to apply for ~~the PhDt~~the PhD-program you are offering. ~~Student position at ***. I have enclosed a completed resume for your review.~~

My name is Quan Nguyen, a fresh graduate from University of *** [Please don't introduce yourselve in a formal letter, it is very unprofessional. Besides, your resume is enclosed.] In March 2007, I ~~hold~~ got the Master degree in Communication and Media Engineering. During my last academic year, I had a chance to do an my internship and master thesis in the *** company. There I gained profound ~~developed not only my~~ knowledges in web development ~~but also real~~ as well as working experiences in an international environment. My thesis is related to the issues in Business Intelligent and Web 2.0. I obtained skills in J2EE programming and advanced web technologies for Enterprise Applications including Jboss, Portal/Portlet, Ajax, Web services,etc.. ~~It was a great experience for me, which~~ has focused my interests on the topic of Web 2.0 technologies.

After my graduation, I worked as a PHP developer for ***, an IT and business consulting company. I gained further experiences in web programming, project management and team-working.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. It makes me confident that I will be suitable for your research team.

For my future career, I see this PhD program as the way to broaden my knowledges in designing and implementing Enterprise Distributed Applications, as well as how to ~~apply~~ ~~these applications~~ use them in business, ~~which~~ in the case that SAP is now the best solution. ~~This~~ Your program ~~proposes~~ covers areas of research that match my interests, such as Business Process Management and Semantic Web Technologies. ~~I have no doubt in mind that I have enough knowledges, skills and competence to pursue the PhD program in your research center.~~

I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss how I may be suitable for this position. I am now on vacation in Vietnam, but can be reached at any time via email or telephone at number +***.[Your contact data should be in the resume and every person in the business wourld know how to reach an other person. If your contact data are not on the resume, you should put it there and don't write about it. Again, it looks very unprofessional, sorry, if I am too hard by trying to help]

Thank you very much for your time an ~~your~~ consideration. My resume is enclosed. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Quan Nguyen

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Please Help me correct and make the complete sentence of MYWORDS in appraisal

Re: PhD Cover Letter ! Need help to correct it