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Howto write a letter(s) to ask for, Spnsorship, donations and/or other Contributions for raising fund for LGBT Pride

ScotlandPRIDE — Wed, 26 Nov 2008 01:09:31 GMT

I am looking for someone o help me write a letter inviting companies to sponsor, donate or generate some other type of involvement that couldl help raise funds for our Aberdeen Pride event for 2009 in August. The idea of Pride is to make aware of issues that relate to individual mainly in the gay community hoever not aways;

Such as ;

Sexual health awareness
homphobia and discrimination in all areas of enviroment
Sense of Community of one and other
Promoting intergration amoungst the wider community
raise awareness of all issues that concearn different individuals within the LGBT communtiy
Raise money for Terrance Higgins Trust

The event is hopefully a whole week the will show Parade,stalls, markets, information sites and entertianment; comedy, music, live bands, stand - up, inovated speachs etc, that will keep the supporters and others that are interested in the topic that we hope to bring to the surface.

There is an estatmated value to cover the cost of Â£30,000 (this could be more) that will cover all expenses for the day event and the other long week events, covering audio, visual, security, isurance, Stage & PA hire, Marquee Hire, Marketing and Publicity, Artist Fees, Toilet Hire, Generator Hire, Ambulance and other stationary applications

Please help, something I do not how to put in an attract way that can beneit the companies in sales and publicity; ideas of companies would range from;

Super-stores
Clothing retialers
Traveling Agents
Jewllers
Banks
Car Dealers
Loan Companies
Chain Pubs
Radio
Hotels
Gyms
Restaurants/ food store
Cinema
Haridressers and beauty Salons
Diageo
Belhavean etc.

All help would be obliged.

Thanx Scotland

Please Help me correct and make the complete sentence of MYWORDS in appraisal

dhan_csn — Mon, 24 Nov 2008 10:20:06 GMT

Looking Back

What achievement during the past year are you most proud of?

MY Words

Proactively work in monitoring team to providing that maximum level of Availability of global IT resource (Servers & Network Link).

User administration tasks and cases are completed in effectively with in the period of SLA.

In what way does cooperation within your department and with other departments affect your handling of tasks?

Cooperation within the Department

MY Words

Maintaining good working relationships with all members in my department as well as other department would helping to rendering good support to

End users.

On a scale from 1-5 where 1 being the extremely bad and 5 being the extremely good, how is the cooperation

Within department

1 2 3 4 5

Reason

MY Words

Cooperation within the department is good.

What will be your contribution to the cooperation within the department in the coming year?

MY Words

Organizing frequent meeting & training for our team members to have a better knowledge sharing within us.

How can your manager and colleagues contribute to improved cooperation in the coming year?

MY Words

Conducting discussions and organizing training regularly to improve the quality and standard of the IT support.

Performance Appraisal

The performance appraisal for the current year:

1. Appraisal of result agreed on at last review

AA : Above Anticipated Performance

E : Excellent Performance

A : Anticipated Performance

NI : Needs Improved Performance

The tasks for which the employee holds Responsibility

Responsiblities Unit of Measurement

1 Resolution based on knowledge base Timeliness E AA A NI

2 Escalation to respective teams Timeliness E AA A NI

3 Follow up and closure Timeliness E AA A NI

4 Timely completion of tasks Timeliness E AA A NI

Reasons for the above rating

MY Words

Effectively handling user administration task, access rights and mail related cases

Understanding of technical problem and timely escalations to the appropriate team members

Resolving the issue/incident by follow up with respective team

Effectively working on more tasks & cases,monitoring BMC & orion,back up jobs and virus alerts

Future

This section deals with the employee's tasks in the coming year and competency development. It is divided into five subsections:

1. Defining tasks and results

2. Competencies necessary to achieve the tasks and result defined above

3. Specific competency profile relevant to the employee

4. Competency development plan

5. Views on future career

1. Defining tasks and results

Responsibility Unit of Measurement

Enter the most important tasks for which the employee holds responsiblity

Resolution based on knowledge base Timeliness

Escalation to respective teams Timeliness

Follow up and closure Timeliness

Timely completion of tasks Timeliness

Reasons

MY Words

Having Knowledge of BMC and Orion,AD administration

Timely escalating the technical problem with Global team members

Timely Completion for AD task & cases

Functional Competencies

2. Specific competency portfolio for : Dhandapani

Technical Knowledge E AA A NI

Technical Solution Development E AA A NI

Technical Support E AA A NI

Behavioural Competencies

Learning Ability E AA A NI

Team Work E AA A NI

Quality Focus E AA A NI

Decision Making and Problem Solving E AA A NI

Communication E AA A NI

Specific competency

3. Competency development plan

Prioritise the competencies to be improved

Means of achieving

competency improvement

Timetable Responsible Follow up

MY Words

Technical Knowledge ADS & Exchange 01 Sep 2009 Appraiser Self

Achievement Orientation Training 05 Oct 2009 HR Self

Require to attend technical training to update technical skills in order to work with more incidents task and cases.

Remarks

Continue in Present Job

Remarks

Deeper Specialisation in Present job

New field of work in present department

New Department

Make your preferences for future career path

4. Views on future career

MY Words

I Would like to take responsiblities for Exchange

Improvement on writing

Pleasecorrectme — Sun, 05 Oct 2008 10:17:58 GMT

This is a practice on report writing for the recommendation on the one-day learning journey.

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Question given: Your teacher has asked for your recommendations on a one-day learning journey to be held during the june vacation. The objective of the trip is to allow the class to gain a deeper knowledge and appreciation of Biology and History. Your teacher has shortlisted 4 places. ...

Set your report out correctly, in clear, accurate English , and use persuasive tone to convince your teacher that the choice is the best recommendation.

To: Miss Huda
From: YCC

5th October 2008

Dear Miss Huda

RE: Recommendations for the one-day learning Journey

I have considered the four places which you have shortlisted. The four places are remarkable and I sincerely hoped to be able to visit all four places. However, I believe that the Zoo Management Tour and the Changi WW2 will be the best options for the one-day learning journey.

Firstly, a visit to the Singapore Zoo will satisfy one of the objective of the learning journey. It allows the class to learn more and appreciate biology as Singapore Zoo is well-known for its endangered species breeding programme, open plan concept and public education programme. Futhermore, an animal specialist will be giving us a tour and briefing on the reasons for implementing these programmes. Students can then gain knowledge and better understanding towards the animals.

To add one, Singapore Zoo allows students to observe animals' playful antics and feeding habits. The animals interesting behaviour will definitely appeal to many students. They will not only be able to listen to the fascinating facts about the animals but also be able to see real life evidences. I believe the memories and the fun-filled experiences, they will have, will be imprinted in their mind for a very long time. Not only can they have fun, but be able to benefit from this Learning Journey.

As for the visit to Changi WW2, it will educate the students more on the history of Singapore, which is the next objective of the Journey. This tour commemorates the fighting spirit of men and women during World War II and internment. Changi was once a site of many prison camps (POW) during the Japanese Occupation. Students will be able to tour the places where the Japanese soldiers once set foot on. According to the given list of places covered during the tour. Changi beach, which was the site of the Sook Ching Massacre, will be visited where poor souls and helpless cries once filled that place. This way, students can learn more in depth on the sufferings and fear people lived during the war.

On top of that, students are allowed to visit one of the Changi Prison camp. This will be an eye-opener for the students as for the first time, they will be able to feel the horror of war and of being enclosed in a prison. The experiences they gained will teach them the moral values of compassion and also that war is not just a game, but instead, is a game of life and death.

To conclude, these two places the class will be visiting will definitely enrich the lives of the students and allow them to gain a deeper knowledge and appreciation for Biology and History. I must say, I look forward to this day of the one-day Learning Journey.

Signature

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Please correct me for the mistakes! Haha! How can I make it a formal letter writing yet friendly letter. hmmm... And how should I improve on the sentences and the organisation of ideas in a clearer and better way? Should my sentences be varied more? Is it too long? There are so many questions ! I need your guidance!

Thank you so much!

Re: Social titles

badegine — Fri, 09 May 2008 14:19:13 GMT

Grossly informal for most things, however.

Formal letter writing should always be addressed 'Dear Sir' in such cases of ambiguity - not even 'Dear Sir/Madam'.

Gender equality might be a quaint philosophy to live by, but it doesn't hold up in the archaic world or written etiquette. And, I'm afraid, it's not really a 'choice', either...far too much of a liberal phenomenon.

Cast any feminism you might have stored up aside and - for letter writing, at least - check your Debrett's.

Present Perfect / Past Simple

Ant_222 — Sat, 23 Feb 2008 22:25:23 GMT

Good Time of Day!

  Well, I just read the list of members online and found this:

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  In the past 3 days, the most popular thread for  everyone  has
  been "Sample of formal letter writing". The post with the most
  views is "Live chat room". The most  replies  _were_  made  to
  "GUESS MY WORD"
  --

  The first two sentences are in a present tense while the  last
  one uses Past Simple. What's the reason?

Thanks in advance,
Anton

Letter writing

Pleasecorrectme — Sun, 27 Jan 2008 14:24:56 GMT

We had exams on Letter Writing in schools.

I wish to improve on my writing. What critieria are needed for formal letter/ report/ account writing ? Are there any examples on formal words used? How should i start the writing? What about the tone used. How can i sound less offending and informal? How should I end?

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An example of our school paper:

E.g : Your school has recieved a gift of money from a former student was is now famous. The money can be spent in any way and your principal has asked for ideas.

Write a formal letter to your principal with your plan. You must include the following:

- How much money was given.
-How you will spend the money.
-Why you will spend the money in this way.
-How you will help to put the plan into action
-Why you think the former student will be pleased.

You must cover all five points in detail in your letter. You may add details of your own if you wish.

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Formal letter writing for Declaration of PR applicaion

Anonymous — Thu, 20 Sep 2007 08:05:21 GMT

Dear Sir or Madam,'

May I know how to write the formal letter for Declaration of PR application at Singapore.

I would like to declare that this PR application does not concern my recent company in which I'm working.

Then I'll apply it only for personal needs.

If possible, I want to receive the immediate format for this letter.

Thanks.

Re: Formal letter writing

Anonymous — Mon, 20 Aug 2007 15:31:46 GMT

pls send me examples of formal letter writing

Re: How would you comment this letter?

joeviee — Mon, 10 Jul 2006 02:49:53 GMT

I'm very glad that you've assured me the right way to write a good business letter. I've been struggling with this point since I left Uni. In Uni, my lecturer always encouraged the students to use modern-style approach in business letter writing, that are - direct, simple, consice and clear, which is exactly what you proposed. But when I actually practiced that on my first job, I was critised so badly by my superior for having bad sense in writing formal letter. Here are some of the examples I could still remember she had corrected on my letter,

"Apend herewith is the...." instead of " I have attached a......",

"Kindly contact the undersigned ....." instead of " Please give me a call...."

"We offer our humblest apologies for the unnecessary inconvenience that you have been casued in this instance." instead of "Please accept my apologies for the inconvenience caused."

And I remember she told me this, "To make your recepient look up the dictionary is better than they read and think the writer is a high school dropout."

I was unable to figure what she meant then. But that wasn't important to me anymore, I quitted the job after 2 months

Re: formal letter writing . . .

Grammar Geek — Wed, 12 Apr 2006 18:38:12 GMT

Dear Boss,

I'm writing to request a temporary reduction in my weekly hours. Specifically, I'd like to adjust my hours so that I leave at X p.m. every afternoon for the period of June 5 through August 28, 2006. I have the opportunity this summer to volunteer in the X program at the local Parks and Recreation, but it requires that I be there by y p.m. every afternoon.

I greatly appreciate your consideration of this request. I'd be happy to talk to you more about this program and how it will affect my job.

Sincerely,

Can you say something about how your company values communitiy participation, how this could in any way help you with your job skills, any connection to work? Will you lose benefits by going to a part-time basis, that you should acknowledge in this request?