i've just taken a mock TOEFL exam. here is my speaking response and i hope someone here will read it and tell me my mistakes (or correct words , grammar..)Thanks in advance. (bold words are sentences that i think they may have a problem)

I'm a girl, just a girl that like speaking and learning english and also I love nature very much. I think making friends all over the world is so cool! Oh and by the way, I love music and singing though I can't say I sing very well. :D

but I can tell you for sure my teachers would've marked both wrong I knew it, lol, that's why I wouldn't take that risk. In "theory", it might be accepted, for the same reason that in theory the f-word should be accepted too

When I was little my dad brought me home a goldfish. I was delighted but something soon went wrong. My parents were talking to some friends who had come to visit us, and I was a bit bored so I went into the kitchen to see my goldfish. The packet

Hi! I am Lucus from English forums I would like to make friends with people around the world to improve my English. If you are interested in talking with me, you can add me to your skype. You can get my skype name in my profile.

Hi! I am Lucus from English forums I would like to make friends with people around the world to improve my English. If you are interested in talking with me, you can add me to your skype. You can get my skype name in my profile.

Hi! I am Lucus from English forums I would like to make friends with people around the world to improve my English. If you are interested in talking with me, you can add me to your skype. You can get my skype name in my profile.

Hi! I am Lucus from English forums I would like to make friends with people around the world to improve my English. If you are interested in talking with me, you can add me to your skype. You can get my skype name in my profile.

Hi! I am Lucus from English forums I would like to make friends with people around the world to improve my English. If you are interested in talking with me, you can add me to your skype. You can get my skype name in my profile.

Hi! I am Lucus from English forums I would like to make friends with people around the world to improve my English. If you are interested in talking with me, you can add me to your skype. You can get my skype name in my profile. Bye. Hope to chat