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.I have underlined some problem areas. There is a tension in Western society between people who think that everyone should have legal equality and people who think that we have to make people equal in every way. Most English people share the first view whereas most of the French share the second...

Hello, I have to do an essay and I would appreciate if you could tell me if the the sentences are grammatically correct. The topic is: The British poet and essayist Matthew Arnold (1822-1888) once wrote:“As to the duty of pursuing equality, there is no such consent among us. Indeed,...