By Genders, Commas

.Given the grammar, the author means:...we are seeing violent extremist types of ( 1 ) alienation, ( 2) narcissism, and ( 3 ) fundamentalist religious, national, ethnic gender-related phobias which, near and far, have tightened the ring of ( 1 ) dialogue, ( 2 ) tolerance, and ( 3 ) coexistence in...

In today's globalized world, we are seeing violent extremist types of alienation, narcissism, and fundamentalist religious, national, ethnic gender-related phobias which, near and far, have tightened the ring of dialogue, tolerance, and coexistence in the world. These alienations, phobias,...

Hi, About a half domestic companies are unwilling to employ ‘old’ people and place a limitation on qualifications by gender. 1. a half domestic companies / half domestic companies. Which is right? You need to speak of 'half of domestic companies'. The article 'a' can be used, but more...

Hey, thanks for the speedy reply. The full paragraph that she has written is this ... According to Barry, Feminist Criticism could be described as the examination of representations of women in literature by men and women. Barry also describes feminism as being just the opposite of...

Hi Clive, thanks for the answers. "I employ the term 'dogmatist' in the sense in which S. uses dogmatikos, namely, to designate one who makes positive or negative assertions about the nature of things, on the basis of what one considers to be evidence and reasoned arguments and...

Hi Jeff, Your first paragraph is rather attractive already. I would make an effort to discover the quote author's gender, in order to avoid the 'he/she' awkwardness. Here are some other words or phrases that need work: speaker (I'd change to 'writer' since it is not obviously from a...

Sentence one. Drop the comma and the word 'they' and the 'to it'. Sentence 2/3. I'm not too sure of your intended meaning here. When you say resistance do you mean resistance from the existing population, or problems on her behalf. Who is 'she' anyway? If you are still talking about any...

I would have used a comma before the final "and" or "or" in a series, like this: mother, and lesbian church, or community You need "losing parental custody" -- one "o" in "losing". I think you need a more parallel structure than "as an activist and through faith", maybe "through faith and...