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Hi all! I have written this to the best of my ability. I'm pretty secure about the language part, as I'm bilingual, but it's the culture part that I want to check works. Some stuff I need to put in there, like the reason for the GPA - it's part letter, part appeal. But, this is...

At least two dozen schools, including Brown University, the University of Pennsylvania, Oberlin College, Clark University and the California Institute of Technology, allow some or all students to share a room with anyone they choose, including someone of the opposite sex. This spring, as students...

You need to fix the part in red.

Ok... so basically I need to do a five paragraph essay (Paragraph model?) by analyzing 3 quotes from this a passage I read "No name woman" by Maxie Hong Kingston. I'm just having trouble with a few things... some I understand, and others I don't. I tried fixing some errors that...

Highlighted some glaring errors for you. Sweetsourzinc wrote: Thesis Statement and body paragraph Goodyear’s tire cooperation is better than Firestone tire cooperation because of it diversity, student programs and customer services. Diversity is Goodyear’s number one priority; it’s...

Thesis Statement and body paragraph Goodyear’s tire cooperation is better than Firestone tire cooperation because of it diversity, student programs and customer services Diversity is Goodyear’s number one priority; it’s an important part of what they must do to increase growth...

Like everything else in this booming economy, ideas about gender roles are quickly changing as satellite TV and the Internet bring Western influences to a society cut off by decades of war and economic isolation.

Like everything else in this economicall booming country, ideas about sex and gender roles are quickly changing as satellite TV and the Internet bring Western influences to a society cut off by decades of war and economic isolation. Thanks for your help!

I have corrected what you have posted. I feel that your letter needs one more paragraph (in the position marked 'P' below) to provide more specific detail of why this MA is important for you and why the Leiden MA is specifically appropriate to your needs.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you...

Much appreciation to all who had earnestly replied me regardless whether your views are of any help. And since I started this post I think I should give my views too. Heres an essay of what I think on this topic. Do pardon me - a 17 year old student if theres an immature thought in it. I am...