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Hi Crazy I finally got here I have added some comments in brackets after underlined problems Do Sports and Drugs Mix Since the dawn of time a ridiculous exaggeration delete it it seems that you can t do not use contractions in essays change to cannot think of sports without some sort of drug...

Hi He had injured his knee in high school in a skiing accident while playing football Hi the grammar seems OK to me It s a bit clumsy because you have two in phrases in a row A comma or two might also help However the meaning seems wrong Was he skiing or playing football when he injured his knee...

Hello Sextus As it s quite a long paragraph I ve put some suggestions in square brackets The sq brackets replace the text in curly brackets The paragraph breaks are merely for ease of reading and aren t supposed to be suggestions Let me know if these edits change your meaning 9 To see To get an...