By Grammar, Personal statements

Hi Grammar Geek,wow that was quick. Thanx a lot!But I'm really amazed, great forum.T.

Hello,I'm a guy from Sweden and right now I'm writing a letter to a university in the USA.Since it's a very important letter I want it to be perfect.I'd really appreciate it if someone here could have a look at it and give me any hints on changes or anything!  Dear Sir or...

Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :)My strong desire to take a Business related course in Great Britain dates back about three years ago, realizing that this dynamic field...

This is my personal statement, wich I will send to 3 different universities. I'm not sure about the order in wich letter is written, nor of the grammar/spelling. Secondly, I don't know how to adress the people of the admissions commitee. Could someone give me some advice? ----- Because...

Hi everyone! I'm currently working on my personal statement for CTM course in UK. Could somene check it please advice on grammar, vocabulary and content. I know it is very like an autobiographical note but I think it gives a true overview of why I decidet to study and also it contains...

I am a Chinese student and presently applying for postgraduate study in UK/US. Here is my Personal Statement. Please make some corrections on grammar. Many thanks! Personal Statement ------ The growth of a tree Winter invaded, every thing was coated with snow. A seed of a tree fell…. One...

Hi Sammy, From just glancing over your personal statement, I couldn’t help but ask you, are you from Hong Kong or England, because “6th Form” catches my eyes? The general impression I got from a quick glance was that your grammar is fine. The Statement, as a whole sounded a bit too wordy...

Hello! I am currently writing my personal statement for university, although I think that it still needs some work done to it. As I am going to be studying English Language at university, I figure that it's best to get the grammar and overall statement spot on. I figure that there's no better...

hi: I am new to this forum, and I need some guidance ,correction and help on my Personal Statement writing.Here is it: Personal Statement If there is some thing I have developed over the past three years, they are an acute awareness of what I can not do and how to be a electronic engineer....

Hi,I am new to this forum. I would like some help. I am applying for a Msc program in Microelectronics System Design.Here is my Personal Statement: Personal Statement If there is some thing I have developed over the past three years, they are an acute awareness of what I can not do and how to...