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Re: Student's resume for scholarship (help me to admend)

Grammar Geek — Sun, 30 Dec 2007 17:49:23 GMT

Often things like this are listed in reverse chronological order -- that is, the most recent is first, and the oldest is last. When you get to 2007, you have so many things that a bulleted list might be better. Good luck with your scholarship application.

OBJECTIVE : DON KNOW WHAT TO WRITEâ¦(please advise) Only you know what your objectives are. What do you want to study? Why do you want to study it? My 8 year old has an abiding passion for sharks and wants to go to college to study marine biology so she can go on to study sharks in their natural setting. What do YOU want to do?

EDUCATION:

UPSR 2002 (SJK(C)FOON YEW 1, J.B) I have no idea what this means.

Secondary education ( SMK TAMAN DAYA 2, JB )

Form 1, 2003 : second place of the whole form 1 students.(2/415) Perhaps for all of these you could simply say "Class ranking: 2 of 415"

Form 2, 2004 : first place of the whole form 2 students (1/326)

Form 3, 2005 : PMR-6Aâs (highest mark in geography, kemahiran hidup 4 ) Do you not have a ranking here? Leaving it out makes it look like you went way down.

Form 4, 2006 : second place of the whole form 4 students. (2/234), (highest mark in physic , chemistry and biology subject ) Same as above, but say "Highest place in physics, chemistry, and biology." Don't use "subject."

HONORS AND ACTIVITIES: Use consistent capitalization. Start each one with a capital letter.

2003: Council member of the schoolâs badminton association, scoutâs group leader I don't know how it's written in your country, but here it would be "Scout troop leader."

2004: scoutâs group leader, participated in the schoolâs English Poem Recitation, second runner up for the (JPJ - what is this?) road safety competition organized by Shell Malaysia. Is this relevent to your academic achievements? Is the fact that Shell sponsored it important to this scholarship application.

First place in the science and mathematic inter-school competition.

2005: scoutâ group leader , vice chairman of the science and mathematic society , first place in the inter-school literature quiz competition.

don't leave a space before a comma - leave one after it.

2006 : vice chairman of the scoutâs troop , don't have a comma dangling out here unless there's another thing to list

2007 : chairman of the scoutâs troop, vice chairman of the science and mathematic society, council member of the interschool sports team, participate in first aid and basic fire fighting course organized by Malaysia Civil Defense force ,participate in the J.B Law Olympiad 2007, second place in the district drama competition ,second place in the district Biology competition , don't have a comma dangling out here unless there's another thing to list

Fluent in spoken and written:
English, Mandarin, Bahasa Malaysia, Mandarin, Cantonese

Student's resume for scholarship (help me to admend)

Anonymous — Sat, 29 Dec 2007 17:37:49 GMT

Hi English Guru,

I am a secondary school student wishing to apply for a companyâs scholarship. Please help me to amend my resume below. This resume is crucial for my scholarship. Thanks for your help.

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Name: Stanley Poh

OBJECTIVE : DON KNOW WHAT TO WRITEâ¦(please advise)

EDUCATION:

UPSR 2002 (SJK(C)FOON YEW 1, J.B)

Secondary education ( SMK TAMAN DAYA 2, JB )

Form 1, 2003 : second place of the whole form 1 students.(2/415)

Form 2, 2004 : first place of the whole form 2 students (1/326)

Form 3, 2005 : PMR-6Aâs (highest mark in geography, kemahiran hidup 4 )

Form 4, 2006 : second place of the whole form 4 students. (2/234), (highest mark in physic , chemistry and biology subject )

HONORS AND ACTIVITIES:

2003: Council member of the schoolâs badminton association, scoutâs group leader

2004: scoutâs group leader, participate in the schoolâs English Poem Recitation, second runner up for the ( JPJ )road safety competition organized by Shell Malaysia.

First place in the science and mathematic inter school competition.

2005: scoutâ group leader , vice chairman of the science and mathematic society , first place in the interschool literature quiz competition.

2006 : vice chairman of the scoutâs troop ,

Fluent in spoken and written:
English, Mandarin, Bahasa Malaysia, Mandarin, Cantonese

Re: for or of ?

Avangi — Tue, 18 Dec 2007 06:28:12 GMT

Haohaoxuexi wrote:

Hi teachers:
how to add a preposition after the noun, can u explain a bit when I need to for or of?

Can you give me the template for/of a resume?   This is the template for/of a resume.

What is the price for/of this T-shirt?           The price for/of this T-shirt is 100$.

He is the sponsor of/for this event.          He wants to be a sponsor of/for this event.

He is a volunteer in/of/for this event.       He wants to become a voluteer in/of /for the Olympics.

He has much knowledge of/on/in the computer.

What is your understanding of/on this matter?

What is your perception of/on this matter?

Thanks a lot!

A volunteer in the event would be a contestant rather than a staffer.

Concerning the "sponsor" example, I believe both are common, with a shade of difference in meaning, but I can't seem to get a handle on it right now. Your teacher probably wants "of."

Concerning the "understanding" example, I'm sure your teacher wants "of" , but I also hear the other choice, as in "what's your take on this matter?" take = understanding    Perhaps it's a colloquial meaning, such as "I thought we had an understanding on this!" (an agreement)

Some of these are really difficult; I don't envy your teacher. Common usages often corrupt the pure meanings of the nouns so that an alternate meaning seems to call for an alternate preposition. If you said, "What's your opinion of/on this matter?," and it's a controversial issue, your opinion on it could be, "I'm against it." Your opinion of the issue could be, "I think it's stupid." I don't think you can say that a given noun always takes the same preposition. I believe you can change the preposition to show which meaning you intend.

Regards,   - A.

for or of ?

Haohaoxuexi — Sun, 16 Dec 2007 14:43:06 GMT

Hi teachers:
how to add a preposition after the noun, can u explain a bit when I need to for or of?

Can you give the template for/of resume? This is the template for/of resume.
What is the price for/of this T-shirt? The price for/of this T-shirt is 100$.
He is the sponsor of/for this event. He wants to be a sponsor of/for this event.
He is a volunteer in/of/for this event. He wants to become a voluteer in/of /for the Olympics.
He has much knowledge of/on/in computer.
What is your understanding of/on this matter?
What is your percetion of/on this matter?

Thanks a lot!

hypocrisy/false modesty

Angliholic — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 03:32:19 GMT

We often resort to hypocrisy/false modesty in order not to hurt people's feelings in their presence.

For me, the two terms are pretty close in meaning, and I'd like to test if they are interchangeable. I presume "hypocrisy" implies negative meanings while "false modesty" doesn't. Correct me if I am wrong. Thanks.

Re: could you help me with my cv ???????

Grammar Geek — Fri, 20 Jul 2007 23:17:08 GMT

The formatting is VERY hard to overcome in this. Decide which tense - past - and use it consistencly. Check ALL of your spelling!! Capitalize proper nouns.

(for future reference, don't post your personal contact information in the forum)

Born: 16/10/78 At least in the US, we do not put our birthdays on resumes. I believe it's the same in the UK. Ask a Brit.

Languages: English, Spanish Have your titles start with capital letters, and make sure languages also start with capitals

Status: European residence European should also be capitalized. Is this important?

Computers skills: Microsoft Office products, including X, Y, Z, and database programs (list them - but not Access - that's part of Office.)

Objective: A position in which I can use my financial and  business skills to further the goals of the company

Education

 
2002 â 2003                ESIC business school, Madrid (Spain), Masters in Finance

1996 â 2000                Northern University (Colombia), BA in Business Administration (graduated with honors)

Employment

 
2002 â 2006       Abba Advertisement & Communnication, Madrid, SSpain

                      Administrative and financial assistant

Processed and managed administrative/financial information for the director to manage comapny's activity.

Provided administrative support to develop a strong team and clear communications.

Addressed all administrative and financial issues.

Selected accomplisments: These are duties, not accomplishments

Neogtiated with suppliers to reduce prices for projects/products and improve profitability.

Processed and verified all accounts payable for *** supplier

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Managed insurance policies
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Developed strategic solutions that strengthen investment goals.  What? Leave this out unless you can quantify.

Served as liaison to other departments for sales, costs, and profitability for campaigns/services offering for the company.

Controlled and verified the liquidation and payments of annual bonus (rappel) from suppliers.

2000 â 2002               Chamber of Commerce and Industry, Barranquilla, Colombia

                                Assistant of development and competitiveness department

I'm sorry, but the formatting is too much for me to work with.

Try pasting your resume into a program like Notebook, cleaning it up, and reposting it here.

Advicing companies for their competitive development on the market, based on strengths.

Selected accomplisments:

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<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Researching on the behavior of markets in order to find out different opportunities of insertion for companies.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Setting up work strategies for company clusters in order to improve their establisment and succed in the market.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Writing articles and publications based in economic researches and analisys in order to help the performance of companies in the market.

  1999 â 2000                 Water of Barcelona (Triple A, AGBAR), Barranquilla (Colombia)

                                    Intership finance department

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Supporting different areas of the department.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Reporting to the accounting director about investments of the company.

<!--[if !supportLists]-->Â·    <!--[endif]-->Codifing different costs projects for its assignment according to departments.

           Publications

              &  Honors

 
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2000 â 2001               The strategic sectors of the manufacturing industry of North Colombia

                                  and their possibilities of insertion in the Great Caribbean. Edition 201
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1996 â 2000               Graduated with honors, ba business administration, northern university

Re: Communicative English

Anonymous — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 06:40:06 GMT

I would like some tips on how to conduct a communicative English class for higher secondary students. My main aim is to break the ice and make them interact as much as possible.How to motivate them and what kind of activities can I do to keep them interested.

Regards

Shane

Anonymous wrote:

Communicative English is slightly different from formal English. In formal English we observe the grammar rules strictly. Communicative English is the form of English that is used to communicative with each other. in communication you should know how to start, how to continue, how to repair, how to resume and how to close a communication. For this some special skills are reqired. They are generally called soft skills.
Mathew T A
Generala Secretary
ELTIF

Re: Please help me resume correct

safeer — Thu, 31 May 2007 06:43:16 GMT

RESUME

SAFEER HAMZA . P

PUTHALATH HOUSE

VANIYAKKAD

MANNAM . P.O

N . PARAVUR

ERNAKULAM DIST

KERALA â 683520

PHONE NO : 0484 2447483

E-MAIL ID : safeerboys@yahoo.co.in

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OBJECTIVE

To be successful team player with hard work, dedication, dynamism, integrity and to gain as much as practical knowledge by working so as to enhance my skills and add value to the organization.

EDUCATIONAL QUALIFICATIONS

SI NO

Qualifications

School/Board University

Year of passing

Percentage of marks

Diploma in Computer Science

Board of Technical Examinations,

Govt of Karnataka

2006

56%

Vocational Higher Secondary Education (VHSE)

Board of Vocational Higher Secondary Examinations,

Govt of Kerala

2002

68%

SSLC

Board of Public Examinations,

Govt of Kerala

2000

66%

COMPUTER SKILLS

Operating Systems

Windows 98/2000/XP

Programming Languages

C, C++, VB, ASP, RDBMS, AutoCAD Map 2000

Package

MS - Office

PROESSIONAL EXPERIENCE

One year of experience in Karnataka State Remote Sensing Applications Center (KSRSAC) as a Technical Assistant, Mysore.

HIGHLIGHTS

v Satellite image interpretation using AutoCAD Map

v Knowledge of Digitization of Map

EXPERIENCE DETAILS

August 16^th 2006 to August 25^th 2007 Karnataka State Remote Sensing Applications Center (KSRSAC) working as Technical Assistant, involved in Updation, Cartography and Cadastral Map.

PROJECTS

q Computerized Canteen Management System (Mini Project)

The project entitled Computerized Canteen Management System has been developed to maintain the information about a canteen. This project maintains the information like Menu, Employee details, Bill etcâ¦

q Online Results for JSSPPH

The web based application âONLINE RESULTS FOR JSSPPHâ is developed with an idea of providing a flexible and efficient way for maintaining the detailed academic records of students for the Exam â Administrators via online.

PERSONAL INFORMATION

Name : SAFEER HAMZA . P

Father Name : Hamza Abdulla

Date of Birth : 02/07/1983

Gender : Male

Nature of Disability : Hearing Impaired

Marital Status : Single

Nationality : Indian

Languages Known : English & Malayalam

Permanent Address : Safeer Hamza . P, Puthalath House, Vaniyakkad, Mannam. P.O, N. Paravur, Ernakulam Dist, Kerala â 683520

DECLARATION

I hereby declare that all the above information furnished is true to the best of my knowledge.

Date :

Place : SAFEER HAMZA . P

Re: Communicative English

Anonymous — Thu, 01 Mar 2007 10:39:01 GMT

Communicative English is slightly different from formal English. In formal English we observe the grammar rules strictly. Communicative English is the form of English that is used to communicative with each other. in communication you should know how to start, how to continue, how to repair, how to resume and how to close a communication. For this some special skills are reqired. They are generally called soft skills.
Mathew T A
Generala Secretary
ELTIF

Re: Resume Letter Cover

Clive — Mon, 18 Sep 2006 05:24:25 GMT

Hi,

The format still does not seem quite right, but I'll try to comment. I'm commenting based on the format that people use here where I live.

Put your name /address / phone / email at the top, as a heading.

Then put these sections, in this order:

OBJECTIVE (what position you are looking for, very briefly)

SKILLS

EMPLOYMENT EXPERIENCE

EDUCATION

PROFESSIONAL QUALIFICATIONS / MEMBERSHIPS

REFERENCES (Just say 'available on request')

Why don't you make the changes I've suggested, if you want to, and then repost this.

The format you gave me to work with is an awkward one.

Can you just type in, directly, what you want me to look at?

Best wishes, Clive
_____________________________________________

EDUCATION

2005 Curtin University of Technology Bachelor of Science (Safety and Health)

1998 Hong Kong Institute of Vocational Higher Certificate in Building Studies Education (IVE)

1987 Construction Industry Training Construction Safety Officer Certificate Authority (CITA)

PROFESSIONAL QULAIIFICATION

2006 Labour Department where? Registered Safety Officer

1998 Labour Department Registered Safety Officer

PROFESSIONAL MEMBERSHIP

2005 Institute of Occupational Safety IOSH Member No. 100121

and Health Where? Which country?

Available: Immediate Just say this in cover letter

Skill: Familiar with computer software: Microsoft Office, PowerPoint, Excel, Word 'Familiar' is a weak word. 'Good knowledge of ...' ?

WORKING EXPERIENCES

Period Job description

CLP Engineering Limited Where, what city/country? Safety Engineer

June 2002~ Present Put a sentence for overall duties, and the rest in brief point form, starting with a 'bullet' dot. You don't need all these reference numbers, the reader wil not care

Too long, too many numbers, use point form >>> With 4 years experience performing Registered Safety Officer of CLPE, including, a full time Safety Officer for Highways Department Project MOM Contract No. 01/HY/2002 since Jun 2003, the projects had been handled including KCRC-Siemens-DB1500 Project, Airport Authority Airport Lighting Maintenance No. M120, CLP-Castle Peak Power Plant Building Renovation Project, MTRCL 595A etc., the main duties included coordinating safety meeting and activities, performing site safety check, reporting site safety performance of subcontractors and investigating any accident happened.

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise and provide technical support to project teams on occupational safety & health compliance issues.

Manage companyâs Safety, Health & Environmental (SH&E) Management systems are well maintained in accordance with the CLPE polices.

Manage regular risk assessment, surveys, site inspections & internal audits and to address required follow up actions to responsible units.

Perform incident & accident investigation and address feasible recommendations.

Comply site SH&E performance statistic and submit monthly RSOâs report to CLPE.

Co-ordinate SH&E promotional activities and SH&E training with CLPE

Perform driving duties and other relevant duties related to SH&E management.

Geotechnics & Concrete Engineering (HK) Limited Safety Officer,

December 2001 ~ June 2002

Reporting to the Safety Manager as a full time safety officer for Civil Engineering and Development Department Contract no. GE/2001/13

Duties

Managing GCE (HK) Ltd. Safety management system

Attending client safety meeting

Perform joint safety check

Report site safety performance monthly

Investigate any accident happened

Organize safety training

Kentâs Construction & Engineering Company Safety Officer,

September 1997 ~December 2001 Put the dates on same line as Compnay name, and in front of the name

With 4 years overseeing the site safety for Highways Department -Public Lighting Construction & Maintenance Contract. For past jobs, put your verbs in past tense, ie performed

Duties

Perform Registered Safety Officer (RSO) duties according to the Factories and Industrial Undertaking (Safety Officers & Safety Supervisors) Regulations to advise project management team on legal compliance related to safety issues;

Manage companyâs Safety, Health & Environmental (SH&E) Management systems are well maintained in accordance with the CLPE policies;

Manage regular risk assessment, surveys, site inspections and system audits and address required follow up actions to responsible project;

Performance incident & accident investigation and address feasible recommendations;

Comply site SH&E performance statistic and submitting monthly RSOâs report to CLPE;

Co-ordinate SH&E promotional activities and SH&E training with CLPE;

Perform safety advisor role in the Company Safety Committee Meeting;

Perform driving duties and other relevant duties related to SH&E management.

And also, attending CLPE safety meeting, joint site safety check with CLPE, reporting the site safety performance monthly and investigating any accident happened to CLPE