Hello Vctory Ong, I enjoyed reading your essay, I think you're an imaginative writer who is skilled at making the place you are describing seem real. Here are some of the errors I noticed in your essay. We enjoys, they dances, jogs...

However, what you have made a mistake with in my humble opinion is that the indefinite article isn't used with uncountable nouns. Uncountable nouns ARE used with the indefinite article when the abstarct noun denotes a certain kind of quality,

Kaki: Has Mr. Lam taught you grammar? One of the first things E nglish teachers should do is show correct simple sentence structures, with subject and verb. More advanced students learn about clauses, which also have a subject and verb, but are

Another one of those strange questions we get from people whose apparent level of attainment in English suggests that they should know the answer already. I've often wondered what's going on. Does any more recent EFL teacher have any light

It's not good; and they forgot the indefinite articles, too, which is always a sign of poor English. It's a sign of poor English on hearing someone say he went to university, or talks about being in hospital? If so, it's a damn good

but case 2 has another error. English speakers say very ... wrong order. Nevertheless English speakers usually say "the wrong order.") It is not implying there is only one wrong order. It is merely saying the order was wrong. Not quite.

We'd manage perfectly well without it, as long as we ... possible for too many expressions to change meaning too quickly. The Moon Is a Harsh Mistress , by Robert A. Heinlein, is written in a dialect of English he imagines to be spoken on the

We'd manage perfectly well without it, as long as we *all* stopped using it and reached a consensus about what ... course, why so many people round here worry that it's possible for too many expressions to change meaning too quickly. The