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Help Revise PLEASE

bonbonxkim — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 20:20:29 GMT

A. Colin Tangeman
University Of Houston
4800 Calhoun Rd-T2-339
Houston, TX 77004

Dear Professor Tangeman:

My name is Kim Nguyen, currently enrolled in Technical Communication 3363. [act1] Iâm a junior at University of Houston, planning to purse[act2] a major in Bio-Technology. I want to take advanced[act3] of this course, because my standard[act4] communication skills are fairly weak.

Iâm[act5] specifically interested in learning more about the elements of job application letters, informative interview, arguable claim letter and much more. [act6] Iâm wants [act7] to use everyday writing to everyday life. But [act8] I canât ever seem to understand the process of moving from static [act9] documents to richer content. When I took ENGL 1301, I didnât gain anything besides writing good essays to get a decent grade. [act10] The TELS 3363 course wills[act11] definitely an importance [act12] field I needed [act13] to be successful in any of my career choices. [act14]

Therefore, Iâm looking forward to developing a better understanding of communication skills in TELS 3363. I will try my best to expand my knowledge for [act15] this course. Iâm hoping to have a great semester at University of Houston.

Sincerely,

Re: How to reply to interview invitation

Hampeh — Fri, 05 Sep 2008 13:56:53 GMT

Dear Mister Micawber, teachers and fellow friends,

Thank you for your prompt reply. I really appreciate it. Just one more thing, do you thing I should mention about part time lecturer because I never mention it in my application letter.

The main purpose I want to apply for part time job is because I like to teach people. It makes me remember things better especially things that related to my work (I only teaching subject that related to my work). After all, because of the nature of my job, I have a lot of free time.

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I just modified the letter with the purpose to make it better. The changes is in the bold font. Well, what do you think about it?

Thank you and best regards,

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Dear Sarah,

With reference to your email of 21^st November, I would like to thank you very much for your invitation. I really appreciate the opportunity for an interview. The position is very interesting. I am very much interested in the opportunity to contribute to University of XYZ. Unfortunately, I have just joined Company X this month, and I will start working on shift as per the following schedule (Where 0 is a working day and X is an off day):

M T W T F S S M T W T F S S

0 0 0 0 X X X X 0 0 0 X X X

I will soon start this shift work, after completing the training. Currently, I must come to my office 9 â 5 every day.

As I have just joined the company, it would be difficult to take a day's leave at the moment. Would it be possible for you to postpone my interview until I am on shift work, when I could then have it scheduled during one of my off days?

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Best regards,

Hampeh

Re: How to reply to interview invitation

Anonymous — Fri, 05 Sep 2008 13:53:40 GMT

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Dear Mister Micawber, teachers and fellow friends,

Thank you for your prompt reply. I really appreciate it. Just one more thing, do you thing I should mention about part time lecturer because I never mention it in my application letter.

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I just modified the letter with the purpose to make it better. The changes is in the bold font. Well, what do you think about it?

Thank you and best regards,

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Dear Sarah,

M T W T F S S M T W T F S S

0 0 0 0 X X X X 0 0 0 X X X

I will soon start this shift work, after completing the training. Currently, I must come to my office 9 â 5 every day.

I look forward to hearing from you about this possibility. Thank you very much for your time and trouble.

Best regards,

Hampeh

Re: urgent need helping to edit my application letter for secondary one

catcat612000 — Thu, 31 Jul 2008 04:15:51 GMT

hi, new2grammar,
thank you very much for your help. i request to put my daughter on the waiting list for vacancy . i think the principal may want to have an interview with her first so that i say grant an interview, Could you be kind enough re-write the letter for me ? Awaiting for your reply.

rgds/ cat

Re: urgent need helping to edit my application letter for secondary one

New2grammar — Thu, 31 Jul 2008 02:10:24 GMT

Hello, Catcat. I would like to help but I'm just a learner. Here's the deal. Let me give it a try and then, we wait for a native speaker. What do you think?

OK...There are a few things I don't feel comfortable with. I could be darn wrong.

catcat612000

The principleS ~~and ideal~~ of teaching in your school have so deeply impressed me that I would like to apply for admission of secondary one for my daughter to your school in the coming academic year.

(Perhaps, " I would like to apply for admission to secondary one of your school for the coming academic year on behalf of my daughter")

Her name is ***, she graduated primary six in from *** school . Her English foundation is good (Perhaps, She has a strong foundation in English ) so she is suitable to accept English as media for teaching (Perhaps, so learning through English medium is almost second nature to her) and her personality is active and creative so that she can be taught by flexible methods used in your school (Not so natural. I can't think of a good sentence now) . I believe it will help her future development under the excellent cultivation of your school (which is so important)

I hope she can be granted an interview and (eventually )admitted ~~as a student in you~~ to your school. ~~Enclosed~~ please find her enclosed transcripts ~~from~~ for P.5 to and P.6 ~~along with~~ and other ~~necessary~~ required documents. Any further information will be supplied if required. (Perhaps, additional information/documents is/are available upon request)

I understand it is may be too late to apply ~~that~~ since your (or the) enrolment quota ~~were fully occupied already~~has been filled , but I hope she can be filled in ~~the~~ any vacancy (at anytime if available) (perhaps, "should it become available").

Thanking for your attention and awaiting for your reply (I look forward to hearing from you).

Cat, you might want to make your request clearer. Do you want an interview or the principal to put her on the waiting list for any vacancy? Having both in the letter, in my opinion, is inconsistent, thus it's rather confusing.

urgent need helping to edit my application letter for secondary one

catcat612000 — Thu, 31 Jul 2008 01:08:52 GMT

Hi, everybody,

i'm a mother of a P.6 student who will be promoted to secondary one to a school which is not of my will, so i decided to apply another school for her. As mother, i do hope my daughter can receive better education it is very important for her future, i will greatly appreciate if anyone kind enough to edit my application letter .

the following is my draft :

Date:

To: The principal

address

Dear Principal,

The principle and ideal of teaching in your school have so deeply impressed me that I would like to apply for admission of secondary one for my daughter to your school in the coming academic year.

Her name is ***, she graduated primary six in *** school . Her English foundation is good so she is suitable to accept English as media for teaching and her personality is active and creative so that she can be taught by flexible methods used in your school. I believe it will help her future development under the excellent cultivation of your school which is so important.

I hope she can be granted an interview and admitted as a student in you school. Enclosed please find her transcripts from P.5 to P.6 along with other necessary documents. Any further information will be supplied if required.

I understand it is too late to apply that your enrolment quota were fully occupied already , but I hope she can be filled in the vacancy at anytime if available.

Thanking for your attention and awaiting for your reply.

Yours sincerely,

catcat
(Mother of ***)

Re: Job application letter correction, please...

Mister Micawber — Mon, 19 Nov 2007 05:07:13 GMT

Hello, JP.

It is very well-written grammatically, but also very boring-- it uses all the cliches and stock phrases that cover letters are prey to. All the self-praise will count for nothing with the potential employer until an interview is held. I would suggest that, while keeping it brief, you eliminate the self-description and supply instead more details about why the company/position interests you and what specific experiences in your background most make your abilities appropriate to what is needed.

Dear Sirs:

I am writing to apply for the position of Supply Manager, as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.

I appreciate challenges and I consider myself able and extremely motivated. I am a results-orientated marketer with proven success in the planning and delivery of effective marketing strategies and activities. My strong professional background is a result of eight years of work experience, both as an employee and as a freelance consultant. As a freelancer, I worked with companies from a wide range of activity sectors. Hence, I have amplified considerably my experience and empowered my professional vision. I believe I possess the essential attributes for success: I am professional, dynamic, autonomous, social and dedicated. I have excellent organisational and technical skills and I truly believe in teamwork. I easily adapt to new environments and I am proud of my flexibility and facility for learning despite being a woman of strong morals and firm principles.

I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am available for an interview any weekday to better present my credentials. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Job application letter correction, please...

Josepinto — Fri, 16 Nov 2007 23:58:39 GMT

Hello all,

I really appreciate if somenone would help me correcting my letter for a job application. Thank you very much.

Dear Sir(s),

I am writing to apply for the position of Supply Manager as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.

I appreciate challenges and I consider myself able and extremely motivated. I am a results-orientated marketer with proven success in the planning and delivery of effective marketing strategies and activities. My strong professional background is a result of eight years work experience, both as an employee and as a free-lancer consultant. As free-lancer I worked with companies from a wide scope of activity sectors. Hence, I had amplified considerably my experience and empower my professional vision. I believe to possess the essential adjectives towards success: professional, dynamic, autonomous, social and dedicated. I have excellent organisational and technical skills and I truly believe in teamwork. I easily adapt to new environments and I am proud of my flexibility and easiness to learn despite being a woman of strong moral and firm principles.

I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am available for an interview any weekday to better expose my arguments. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards,

Re: please healp me correct grammar a letter send to employer

Feebs11 — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 14:39:10 GMT

Quangtrungvtv wrote:
Marius Hancu wrote:

APPLICATION LETTER

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VXK COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

Why did you give me some advice?

Are you asking "Why did you not give me some advice?"

Marius has indicated where you made errors. If you check these in a dictionary, you may be able to correct them yourself. If you still cannot find an answer, ask again about the ones that are a problem.

As a matter of the way in which to write a letter to a company in which you do not have a contact, You address it to "Human Relations Department", and with an opening salutation "Dear sir/madam,"ending with Yours faithfullt". This site gives lots of information on how to write letters: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/549/01/

APPLICATION LETTER

Quangtrungvtv — Mon, 29 Oct 2007 05:20:12 GMT

RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO: VKX COMPANY.

I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer .

I have to found about operation of your company, I decide to write this letter to apply to that position.

I have added the CV let your company see and select for that position.

In work , I am very concentrator ,I not to hesitate to do every jobs. Alternatively ,my English is very well (preintermediate level , I am studing intermediate level).

I hope that I have a opportinity to interview .I wish you let me know the time of interview through email or mobile phone .

I wish to work at your company anyjobs that I have learn in university .I swear I will always study and teach yourself to improve my skill to satisfy jobs at your company.

Thanks for seeing my application letter and my record I have attached.

Sincerely yours!

writter

LÃª Quang Trung

please help me correct this letter? THanks very much