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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Interviews tag:Articles' matching tags 'Interviews' and 'Articles'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aInterviews+tag%3aArticles&amp;tag=Interviews,Articles&amp;orTags=0</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Interviews tag:Articles' matching tags 'Interviews' and 'Articles'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3172.20403)</generator><item><title>A Little Help with Capitals </title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ALittleHelpWithCapitals/glpwk/post.htm</link><pubDate>Thu, 28 Aug 2008 10:07:10 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:559650</guid><dc:creator>angel_tristan0409</dc:creator><description>&lt;h2&gt;A Little Help with Capitals&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;p&gt;This handout lists some guidelines for capitalization. If you have a question about whether a specific word should be capitalized that doesn&amp;#39;t fit under one of these rules, try checking a dictionary to see if the word is capitalized there.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Use capital letters in the following ways:&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;The first words of a sentence&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;When he tells a joke, he sometimes forgets the punch line.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;The pronoun &amp;quot;I&amp;quot;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;The last time I visited Atlanta was several years ago.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Proper nouns (the names of specific people, places, organizations, and sometimes things)&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;Worrill Fabrication Company&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Golden Gate Bridge&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Supreme Court&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Livingston, Missouri&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Atlantic Ocean&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Mothers Against Drunk Driving&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Family relationships (when used as proper names)&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;I sent a thank-you note to Aunt Abigail, but not to my other aunts.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Here is a present I bought for Mother.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Did you buy a present for your mother?&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;The names of God, specific deities, religious figures, and holy books&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;God the Father&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;the Virgin Mary&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;the Bible&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;the Greek gods&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Moses&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Shiva&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Buddha&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Zeus&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Exception: Do not capitalize the non-specific use of the word &amp;quot;god.&amp;quot;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;The word &amp;quot;polytheistic&amp;quot; means the worship of more than one god.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Titles preceding names, but not titles that follow names&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;She worked as the assistant to Mayor Hanolovi.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;I was able to interview Miriam Moss, mayor of Littonville.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Directions that are names (North, South, East, and West when used as sections of the country, but not as compass directions)&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;The Patels have moved to the Southwest.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Jim&amp;#39;s house is two miles north of Otterbein.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;The days of the week, the months of the year, and holidays (but not the seasons used generally)&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;Halloween&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;October&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Friday&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;winter&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;spring&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;fall&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Exception: Seasons are capitalized when used in a title.&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;The Fall 1999 semester&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;The names of countries, nationalities, and specific languages &lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;Costa Rica&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Spanish&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;French&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;English&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;The first word in a sentence that is a direct quote&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;Emerson once said, &amp;quot;A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds.&amp;quot;&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;The major words in the titles of books, articles, and songs (but not short prepositions or the articles &amp;quot;the,&amp;quot; &amp;quot;a,&amp;quot; or &amp;quot;an,&amp;quot; if they are not the first word of the title)&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;One of Jerry&amp;#39;s favorite books is &lt;em&gt;The Catcher in the Rye&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Members of national, political, racial, social, civic, and athletic groups&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;Green Bay Packers&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;African-Americans&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Anti-Semitic&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Democrats&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Friends of the Wilderness&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Chinese&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Periods and events (but not century numbers)&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;Victorian Era&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Great Depression&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Constitutional Convention&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;sixteenth century&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Trademarks&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;Pepsi&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Honda&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;IBM&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;Microsoft Word&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Words and abbreviations of specific names (but not names of things that came from specific things but are now general types)&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;div&gt;Freudian &lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;NBC&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;pasteurize&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;UN&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;french fries&lt;/div&gt; &lt;div&gt;italics&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re:      Georgia - a peaceloving genocide</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeorgiaPeacelovingGenocide/10/glbjv/Post.htm#555615</link><pubDate>Sat, 16 Aug 2008 20:19:53 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:555615</guid><dc:creator>Ant_222</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Dominik&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;Â What do you think about this article?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2008/08/15/AR2008081503319.html"&gt;Mythmaking in Moscow&lt;/a&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;Â &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Hey, Dominik, I just wathced that interview with the dictor (on a site linked by ISU), and you know what? It is true, but the words have bee taken out of context. So here it is:&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;quot;You ask me if it is possible that 2000 have been killed? If to take the whole region into account, then I think yes. During the six days that we almost wholly spent in the cellar, the city was intensively bombarded by GRADs and other weapons &amp;lt;cut&amp;gt;. I saw tanks in the city and jets above that were bombarding us. It was a real horror.... to attack civillians this way, in the *** century... &lt;span&gt;&lt;span style="text-decoration:underline;"&gt;Only in our hospital (sic! â Ant) &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;there were 273 wounded, and 45 died (not &amp;quot;dead&amp;quot;), two journalists among them (cut). We damped the bodies in our trauma center because we couldn&amp;#39;t get to the morgue due to the shelling.&amp;quot;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Â Now, let&amp;#39;s compare it to the distorted version presented by Washington Post:&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;quot;&lt;span&gt;A doctor at Tskhinvali Regional Hospital who was on duty from the afternoon of August 7 told Human Rights Watch that between August 6 to 12 the hospital treated 273 wounded, both military and civilians. . . . The doctor also said that 44 bodies had been brought to the hospital since the fighting began, of both military and civilians. The figure reflects only those killed in the city of Tskhinvali. But the doctor was adamant that the majority of people killed in the city had been brought to the hospital before being buried, because the city morgue was not functioning due to the lack of electricity in the city.&lt;span&gt;&amp;quot;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;The first distortion is the omission of the doctor&amp;#39;s opinion â she did think 2000 was a real figure. Then it&amp;#39;s a lie that dead bodies were brought to that hospital â that people died within the hospital. At last, in the last sentence, shelling has been replaced by a modest &amp;quot;lack of electricity&amp;quot; as the reason they couldn&amp;#39;t deliver the bodies to the morgue.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Â </description></item><item><title>Re:      Georgia - a peaceloving genocide</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeorgiaPeacelovingGenocide/10/glbhn/Post.htm#555590</link><pubDate>Sat, 16 Aug 2008 18:34:00 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:555590</guid><dc:creator>Ant_222</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Dominik&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;Â What do you think about this article?&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;It says: &lt;span&gt;Tskhinvali, where most of the fighting took place, mostly intact and with &amp;quot;little evidence of a high death toll.&amp;quot;&lt;span&gt;Â &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Russia News have shown LOTS of damage and destruction in Tskhinval, saying the city has been essentially destroyed. And this kind of evidence is a rare case when it is easy to see and hard to falsify.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;I don&amp;#39;t know what the author wants to say by referring to the interview with a doctor who said the hospital had treated only several hundred patients. Can a hospital take through it 2000 patients in a space of a day or two (until the Russian army came)? Also take into account that, as per Russian news, the Tskhinval hospital was a target of Georgian artillery and even GRADs, which were using splinter shells that don&amp;#39;t inflict much damage to buildings but kill everything alive.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Under heavy bombardment, most of medical treatment was delivered in cellars, for they were the only (relatively) safe place.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Another evidence hard to fabricate is the number of refugees from S. Ossetia, which is reported to be around 34000, 40% of the population!Â &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;I seriously doubt Russian government is dumb enough to tell a kind of lie that can be checked and disproved so easily.</description></item><item><title>Re:       Georgia - a peaceloving genocide</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeorgiaPeacelovingGenocide/10/glbgh/Post.htm#555567</link><pubDate>Sat, 16 Aug 2008 17:17:28 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:555567</guid><dc:creator>Ruslana</dc:creator><description>&amp;quot;Blah-blah-blah&amp;quot; or &amp;quot;Mythmaking by WashingtonPost&amp;quot;. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I rather believe tens of interviews of Tskhinvali civilians who were in the very hell.&amp;nbsp;By the way, have you seen that many of&amp;nbsp;such interviews? &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Dominik, it&amp;#39;s information war. &lt;br /&gt;You can find dozens of articles that say this, and I&amp;#39;ll find dozens of articles that&amp;nbsp;say that. Only people of South Ossetia, who were dying,&amp;nbsp;really know what and how it happened, without any political lyrics. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Cute, isn&amp;#39;t it? The red inscription on the yellow says: &amp;quot;Why does Saakashvili eat ties?&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://ru.youtube.com/watch?v=ULRKOClCf5c"&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.englishforums.com/English/GeorgiaPeacelovingGenocide/10/glbgh/Post.htm#555567"&gt;&lt;img src="http://img.youtube.com/vi/ULRKOClCf5c/default.jpg"/&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/a&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Standard spoken English</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/StandardSpokenEnglish/gzcpd/post.htm#526527</link><pubDate>Thu, 12 Jun 2008 23:48:05 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:526527</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;Hello Milky. Yes, your style remains, even when you post anonymously.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I would define it as the type of English you use when you interview for a white-collar job. The type of English you use when you testify before Congress. The type of English you use when you mean your significant other&amp;#39;s well-bred, wealthy parents for the first time.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I would absolutely exclude omitting articles and verbs when they are needed in standard written English. I would not exclude instances when you simply don&amp;#39;t have the vocabulary so you use words like &amp;quot;thing&amp;quot; and &amp;quot;stuff.&amp;quot; I would not exclude the occasional &amp;quot;um&amp;quot; because some people are not good public speakers, despite their knowledge of and daily use of standard English. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;It&amp;#39;s how you speak when the know the rules for standard written English and want your style of speech to reflect your knowledge and use of it, and you don&amp;#39;t want your speech to reflect your socio-economic or regional background. You are being as neutral as possible. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;You don&amp;#39;t have to use formal words when you speak in standard English. You do have conjugate, use articles, use proper auxiallary verbs, and so on.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: drug[s]</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/DrugS/gdhvm/post.htm#517968</link><pubDate>Fri, 23 May 2008 15:37:51 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:517968</guid><dc:creator>Yankee</dc:creator><description>&amp;nbsp;Hi N2G&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;It&amp;#39;s entirely possible that the man received more than one type of drug via online pharmacies.&amp;nbsp; The article doesn&amp;#39;t actually mention whether that was the case or not. The woman may well have said quite a few other things during the course of the interview that didn&amp;#39;t end up in the news article.&amp;nbsp; So, perhaps her husband received various different drugs.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;By the way, I enjoyed this sentence:&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;quot;&lt;i&gt;These pharmacy people that are doing this and these doctors that are
doing this, they don&amp;#39;t give a &lt;b&gt;dadgummit&lt;/b&gt; about people.&lt;/i&gt;&amp;quot; &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;I&amp;#39;m surprised you didn&amp;#39;t ask about the word &amp;#39;dadgummit&amp;#39;.&amp;nbsp;&lt;img src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-4.gif" alt="Stick out tongue" title="Stick out tongue" /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Correction of an Essay</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionOfAnEssay/grjpw/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 22 Apr 2008 21:05:57 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:503990</guid><dc:creator>learner_of_english</dc:creator><description>Hello,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I&amp;#39;m trying to write Essays to improve my English level
cause I want to study in the United Kingdom.&amp;nbsp; But I always have some
problems in grammar.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So I would like a kind English speaker
correct the big mistakes in the grammar of my sentences (not the
content). I&amp;#39;ll be very grateful if you can help me &lt;img src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile" title="Smile" /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thanks a lot ! &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;The topic is : &amp;quot;&lt;b&gt;According to press articles, the US is a more masculine country than France. To what extent do you believe this is true ?&lt;/b&gt;&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Through History,
weâve seen that American people are proud and want to manage the world.
Meanwhile, French people know how to live and they have a more collectivism mentality.
According to several studies, the US
is a more âmasculineâ country than France. Weâre about to study if
this is a reality or not.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;1Â°/ First, we can compare educational values
between these two countries.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;The
American people educational values are rather funded on individualism.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Each person
must show his value to be recognized, the merit is more important than the &lt;i&gt;link formed (relationship)&lt;/i&gt; with others.
Pupils and students have to be independent, self-confident, their teacher
assists them in work but they donât give solutions. They also have to be
competitive.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;For
instance, intercollegiate sporting events are promoted in American football and
basketball. These competitions attract not only young people but all sport
fans.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;In France, educational values are
rather funded on collectivism.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;The ties
between people are privileged, it doesnât matter if a person &lt;i&gt;undergoes many failures &lt;/i&gt;his family and
his friends will always support him. Devotion in relationships is essential
because people donât stand to be alone.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;As
students, weâre used to partying several times by week, we enter in student
associations to share our ideals with others and we think that is the victory
of groups which is the more important.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;For
example, in soccer games, &lt;i&gt;one player goal
is the equip goal&lt;/i&gt;. &lt;/span&gt;(but 1 joueur est le but de lâÃ©quipe)&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;According to Geert Hofstede (a press article
writer), these points show that the US
is a more masculine country than France. I think we can reveal there
is another aspect of this topic with gender ideas.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;2Â°/ The power that is a more masculine idea can
be illustrated by American will to possess big things.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Indeed, American
cars are big like &lt;i&gt;4x4 or pick up&lt;/i&gt;, they
like to eat big burgers.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;They use an
amazing budget for their movies with many special effects and they often
contain fights like Rambo, Terminator or Rocky. Each time, we have the feeling
that American glory is bet and itâs always American people who win.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Then, American
comics imply heroes with a super strength and a nice physical appearance like
Superman or Hulk.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;On the contrary, French culture hires the small
things and products are adapted to family which is a more feminine idea.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;There are
small French cars for young people the Twingo, the Clio or the Smart and weâre
used to taking a little break with a small cup of coffee.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;In France, there
are often humoristic or romantic movies like movie of the moment âBienvenue
chez les châtisâ which is the best French humoristic movie of the year.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Weâre also
used to reading comics like âAstÃ©rixâ or âTintinâ who are not really
superheroes.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;As we see through all these examples America owns
more masculine ideas than France and we really saw a gap between these two
mentalities.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;3Â°/
&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;span&gt;However, the
feminine culture in France
is limited.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;We also
have a competitive policy as we se through a job or college interview. The
selection is tough, there are some oral or written exams and many people are
refused.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;The vision
of soccer as a âsweetâ sport is far from reality because many players are hurt
during the games. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Furthermore,
there are French action movies like âLes riviÃ¨res pourpresâ, âNikitaâ and âLeonâ
which compete with American super production.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;In my opinion, the association between
masculine culture with men who search for success and power, and feminine
culture with women who look after their family is a stereotype. It tends to
disappear today, women are more and more independent and they can be companyâs bosses
or minister.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;For
instance, the French company CHANEL is lead by a woman.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;To conclude, obviously the US is a more âmasculineâ culture than France. But in
my view, there isnât a best culture because self-confidence and relationships
are essential to have a happy live.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;We can
wonder if the promotion of power and success could not lead to abuse.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Sincerely,&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;</description></item><item><title>Re: Correction of an Essay</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionOfAnEssay/grjmm/post.htm#503943</link><pubDate>Tue, 22 Apr 2008 19:10:36 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:503943</guid><dc:creator>learner_of_english</dc:creator><description>Hello,&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;Thanks for your quick answer !&lt;br /&gt; &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;I didn&amp;#39;t realise my sentences were so short, I corrected them so I hope it is better now.&amp;nbsp; I added numbers to empasis my main points. &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Could you help me to correct my grammar ?&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Through History, weâve seen that
American people are proud and want to manage the world. Meanwhile, French
people know how to live and they have a more collectivism mentality. According
to several studies, the US is
a more âmasculineâ country than France.
Weâre about to study if this is a reality or not.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;1Â°/ First, we can compare educational values
between these two countries.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;The
American people educational values are rather funded on individualism.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Each person
must show his value to be recognized, the merit is more important than the &lt;i&gt;link formed (relationship)&lt;/i&gt; with others.
Pupils and students have to be independent, self-confident, their teacher
assists them in work but they donât give solutions. They also have to be
competitive.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;For
instance, intercollegiate sporting events are promoted in American football and
basketball. These competitions attract not only young people but all sport
fans.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;In France, educational values are
rather funded on collectivism.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;The ties
between people are privileged, it doesnât matter if a person &lt;i&gt;undergoes many failures &lt;/i&gt;his family and
his friends will always support him. Devotion in relationships is essential
because people donât stand to be alone.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;As
students, weâre used to partying several times by week, we enter in student
associations to share our ideals with others and we think that is the victory
of groups which is the more important.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;For
example, in soccer games, &lt;i&gt;one player goal
is the equip goal&lt;/i&gt;. &lt;/span&gt;(but 1 joueur est le but de lâÃ©quipe)&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;According to Geert Hofstede (a press article
writer), these points show that the US
is a more masculine country than France. I think we can reveal there
is another aspect of this topic with gender ideas.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;2Â°/ The power that is a more masculine idea can
be illustrated by American will to possess big things.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Indeed, American
cars are big like &lt;i&gt;4x4 or pick up&lt;/i&gt;, they
like to eat big burgers.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;They use an
amazing budget for their movies with many special effects and they often
contain fights like Rambo, Terminator or Rocky. Each time, we have the feeling
that American glory is bet and itâs always American people who win.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Then, American
comics imply heroes with a super strength and a nice physical appearance like
Superman or Hulk.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;On the contrary, French culture hires the small
things and products are adapted to family which is a more feminine idea.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;There are
small French cars for young people the Twingo, the Clio or the Smart and weâre
used to taking a little break with a small cup of coffee.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;In France, there
are often humoristic or romantic movies like movie of the moment âBienvenue
chez les châtisâ which is the best French humoristic movie of the year.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Weâre also
used to reading comics like âAstÃ©rixâ or âTintinâ who are not really
superheroes.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;As we see through all these examples America owns
more masculine ideas than France and we really saw a gap between these two
mentalities.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;3Â°/
&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;span&gt;However, the
feminine culture in France
is limited.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;We also
have a competitive policy as we se through a job or college interview. The
selection is tough, there are some oral or written exams and many people are
refused.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;The vision
of soccer as a âsweetâ sport is far from reality because many players are hurt
during the games. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Furthermore,
there are French action movies like âLes riviÃ¨res pourpresâ, âNikitaâ and âLeonâ
which compete with American super production.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;In my opinion, the association
between masculine culture with men who search for success and power, and
feminine culture with women who look after their family is a stereotype. It
tends to disappear today, women are more and more independent and they can be companyâs
bosses or minister.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;For instance,
the French company CHANEL is lead by a woman.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;To conclude, obviously the US is a more âmasculineâ culture than France. But in
my view, there isnât a best culture because self-confidence and relationships
are essential to have a happy live.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;We can
wonder if the promotion of power and success could not lead to abuse.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Sincerely, &lt;br /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Correction of an Essay</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectionOfAnEssay/grwhj/post.htm</link><pubDate>Mon, 21 Apr 2008 21:37:28 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:503566</guid><dc:creator>learner_of_english</dc:creator><description>Hello,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I&amp;#39;m trying to write Essays to improve my English level cause I want to study in the United Kingdom.&amp;nbsp; But I always have some problems in grammar.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;So I would like a kind English speaker correct the big mistakes in the grammar of my sentences (not the content). I&amp;#39;ll be very grateful if you can help me &lt;img src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile" title="Smile" /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thanks a lot ! &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;The topic is : &amp;quot;&lt;b&gt;According to press articles, the US is a more masculine country than France. To what extent do you believe this is true ?&lt;/b&gt;&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Through History, weâve seen that American people are proud and want to manage the world. Meanwhile, French people know how to live and they have a more collectivism mentality. According to several studies, the US is a more âmasculineâ country than France. Weâre about to study if this is a reality or not.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;First, we can compare educational values between these two countries.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;American people are rather individualistic.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Each person must show his value to be recognized. The merit is more important than the link formed with others. Pupils and students have to be independent, self-confident and competitive. Competition is the key word there.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For instance, intercollegiate sporting events are promoted in American football and basketball. These competitions attract not only young people but all sport fans.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In France, people are rather collectivistic. Ties between people are privileged. It doesnât matter if a person undergoes many failures, his family and his friends will always support him. Devotion in relationships is essential because people donât want to be alone.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Weâre used to partying several times by week, we enter in student associations to share our ideals with others and we think that is the victory of groups which is more important.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In a soccer games, one player goal is the equip goal. (but 1 joueur est le but de lâÃ©quipe)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;According to Geert Hofstede, these points show that the US is a more masculine country than France. I think there is another aspect of this topic with the gender ideas.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;One of those ideas is the power that is a more masculine idea. We have noticed that big is part of American culture, I think it can illustrate that idea.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Indeed, American cars are big like 4x4 or Espace, there are big burgers.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;They use an amazing budget for their movies with many special effects. They often contain fights like Rambo, Terminator or Rocky. Each time, we have the feeling that American glory is bet and itâs always American people who win.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Then, American comics imply more heroes with superpowers and a nice physical appearance like Superman or Hulk.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;On the contrary, French culture hires the small things. Products are adapted to family which is a more feminine idea.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;French cars for young people are smaller like the Twingo, the Clio or the Smart. Weâre used to taking a little break with a small cup of coffee.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In France, there are often humoristic or romantic movies. At the moment, âBienvenue chez les châtisâ is the best French humoristic movie of the year.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In France, weâre used to reading comics like âAstÃ©rixâ or âTintinâ who are not really superheroes.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As we see through all these examples America owns more masculine ideas than France. We really see a gap between these two mentalities.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; However, the feminine culture in France is limited.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;We also have a competitive policy as we se through a job or college interview. The selection is tough, there are some oral or written exams and many people are refused.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The vision of soccer as a âsweetâ sport is far from reality because many players are hurt during the games. There are French action movies like âLes riviÃ¨res pourpresâ, âNikitaâ, âLeonâ which compete with American super production.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; In my opinion, the association between masculine culture with men who search success and feminine culture with women who look after their family is a stereotype. It tends to disappear today, women are more and more independent and they can be companyâs boss or minister.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;For instance, the French company CHANEL is lead by a woman.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;To conclude, obviously the US is a more âmasculineâ culture than France. But in my view, there isnât best culture because self-confident and relationships are essential to live.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And we can wonder if the promotion of power and success could not lead to abuse.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;nbsp;Sincerely, &lt;br /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Until Death Do Us Part, by Ingrid Betancourt</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/UntilDeathPartIngridBetancourt/grwzn/post.htm</link><pubDate>Mon, 21 Apr 2008 20:59:42 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:503536</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><description>&lt;p style="TEXT-ALIGN:center;" align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;The Crying Game of Democracy&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p style="TEXT-ALIGN:center;" align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;Review of Ingrid Betancourtâs memoir &lt;i&gt;Until Death Do Us Part, My Struggle to Reclaim Colombia&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Author and politician Ingrid Betancourtâs return to Colombia and involvement in politics was a selfless act of love. Unfortunately, her love and the magnitude of her offerings were not understood by her fellow countrymen.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;In her &lt;i&gt;book Until Death Do Us Part&lt;/i&gt;, &lt;i&gt;My Struggle to Reclaim Colombia&lt;/i&gt; (Harper Collins Publishers, Inc., 2002, 228pgs.) Betancourtâs crusade, marked by being a woman in a male society, sets the tone for many of the difficulties she encountered along the way. &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;Facing long separations from her children, barring by other politicians, frequent hostility of the press and threats against her and her family, she endured and overcame the obstacles one by one. Ingrid understood the price for her convictions.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;She embraced them and never let up the fight. &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;This book is an amazing story of courage and her fight against corruption at the highest political levels.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;font&gt;The childhood of Betancourt was not that of a typical Colombian. Born in BogotÃ¡ on December 25 1961. Betancourtâs mom, Yolanda Pulecio is a former Miss Colombia, turned congress woman and social activist.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;Her father, Gabriel Betancourt, is a career diplomat who started as minister for the General Rojas Pinillaâs dictatorship. The year she was born, her father was appointed to posts in Washington D.C. Later he was sent to Paris, and BogotÃ¡ (Rank). Although Ingrid spent a large part of her childhood in Paris, she collected a vast cultural background from the places she lived and her social interaction with the literary and political elite.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;According to her memoirs, their house was frequently visited by leading Colombian personalities such as Carlos Lleras, Misael Pastrana,Virgilio Barco.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;All former Presidents of Colombia, and intellectuals like writer Gabriel Garcia Marquez, poet Pablo Neruda and painter / sculptor Fernando Botero. All of the people who came in contact with her inspired her to love the arts and politics. Betancourt attended the Institut d&amp;#39;Etudes Politiques in Paris (known as &lt;i&gt;Sciences Po&lt;/i&gt;), an elite higher education institute. After graduating, she married a fellow student, Fabrice and they had two children, Melanie and Lorenzo. Since her husband was in the French diplomatic service, they continued to live in various places. &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;i&gt;Until Death Do Us Part&lt;/i&gt; explains how Ingridâs passion for politics was born from listening to conversations her parents had with many of their prominent Colombian guests while in Paris. The discussions revolved around the troublesome situation of the country and the grim future they anticipated. Since Ingrid was too young to participate in these discussions, she frequently hid under their grand piano to listen.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;In her memoirs, Betancourt makes reference to the birth of her political vocation under the grand piano. âI often returned to my hiding place, under the piano, and sometimes emerge with my temples burning, my stomach in knots, ready to burst into tears-so awful truly terrifying, do I find my countryâs fateâ (Betancourt).&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;She recalls a desire &amp;#39;&amp;#39;to affect the destiny of Colombia.â&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;From this point on, her love for her countries people increased, even though she never shared in their suffering.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Finally, Betancourt could stand it no longer; her heart ached to help Colombia. Betancourt makes a decision to leave her husband and children behind and âdescend into the brutish world of Colombian politicsâ (Golden). She was determined to fight against corruption.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;During an interview, &lt;span&gt;Betancourt told the &lt;i&gt;Los Angeles Times&lt;/i&gt;, &amp;quot;Between the drug traffickers and the guerrillas, we have been made almost ashamed to be Colombian, and a country that is ashamed of itself is a country without a future. We have to reconstruct our hopes and dreams.&amp;quot; Colombia mattered to Ingrid more than anything else and she wanted to restore the countryâs pride and the faith of the Colombian people.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;According to her memoir, &lt;/span&gt;Betancourt begins her political combat against corruption, aware of the political turmoil in Colombia.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;She has a strong desire to fight for what is right. Her weapons are honesty, truth and the strong desire to help Colombia to succeed. The murder of Luis Carlos GalÃ¡n in August of 1989, a candidate for the Colombian Presidency running on an anti-drug-trafficking platform, was the straw that broke the camelâs back&lt;i&gt;.&lt;/i&gt; Ingrid returnes to Colombia and starts her political career with her first appointment at the Ministry of Finance. In her post, Betancourt determines how much &lt;b&gt;â&lt;/b&gt;politicians lack in ideals and integrity and realizes that they are only interested in power and moneyâ (Golden). &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;Feeling like an outsider, but knowing âsomething has to be doneâ, Betancourt decides to run for a seat in the senate.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;During her first campaign Ingrid and her staff distributed condoms&lt;i&gt;,&lt;/i&gt; with the motto âIâll be like a condom against corruption.â Betancourt has been elected as a representative confirming that the attention of enough Colombians had been captivated by this political novice.&lt;span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt; 
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;The road to a Congresswoman was not an easy one, according to the author.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;Like many countries, in spite of the rich natural resources and vast cultural offerings, Colombia finds itself prisoner of political and economic greed. The price paid in the currency of, what the politicians, drug lords, and the militia considers disposable lives.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Committed to the political struggle, Betancourt shares her many adventures as she &lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;sets up her headquarters in a fixer upper mansion. This time to run for a seat in the legislature. Betancourtâs message is heard by people in need of hope. The same message is quoted by Juan Forero of The New York Times &lt;/span&gt;&amp;#39;&amp;#39;Corruption is not abstract; it has a face, and it has a name and we have to say it,&amp;#39;&amp;#39; said Ms. Betancourt, who wears well-tailored business suits and appears a decade younger than her age. &amp;#39;&amp;#39;Corruption must be consciously confronted, and has to be on the conscience of all Colombians so that we cannot be manipulated.&amp;#39;&amp;#39; A powerful message, shared during the same interview, reassuring the Colombian people that she is on their side. She is willing to fight their biggest oppressor.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;&lt;font&gt;After only after a week in office, Ingrid is invited by one of the most corrupt politicians to write a code of ethics. The code is successfully passed as the code for the liberal party. The same party under which Betancourt ran her campaign for congress.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:black;"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;Ingrid confronted politicians in a very unique âin your face manner.â At a speech given to the legislature, she wore a T-Shirt that read âOnly the Truth!â During her time as a congress woman, she initiated a hunger strike in the name of honesty. For the majority of the population, the idea of a crusader coming form another country and from a privileged background is distant and unreal. However, no one can question Ingridâs determination, courage or the commitment to her ideals.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;The book outlines Betancourtâs many political struggles to fight corruption wherever she found it. &lt;span&gt;As a representative, âshe was not afraid to ruffle the feathers of her fellow congress members.â Demonstrated during âthe campaign against a government arms contract to purchase outdated weaponsâ (Rank). &lt;/span&gt;Ingridâs honesty shines during this scandal (named the Galil scandal after the manufacturer of the guns). Shortly after, a second controversy emerges linking then President, Ernesto Samper, to drug money.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;The investigation of the President was launched after evidence became known that he had taken campaign donations from the heads of the Cali cocaine cartel. Betancourt was one of the few politicians who challenged him. Betancourt wanted to give the Colombian people a chance to breathe clean politics. Struggling to break the mold, &lt;span&gt;Betancourt launched a new political party, the Liberal Oxygen Party, in 1997.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;âIt was an effort to offer a choice outside of the traditional Liberal and Conservative partiesâ (Rank).&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Throughout the book s&lt;/span&gt;he gives detailed accounts of the times when she found herself nearly alone in unmasking the enemies of the Colombian democracy.&lt;i&gt; &lt;/i&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt; 
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;In the book, &lt;i&gt;Until Death Do Us Part&lt;/i&gt;, the thirst for power inducts almost every politician into corruption. But Betancourt steers away from corruption, while navigating through temptations and threats. She never gives up on her ideals of honesty and truth. A clear example of gross ambition as mentioned by Betancourt in her book is the prosecutor that led the investigation of Samper&amp;#39;s misconduct she describes him as &amp;#39;&amp;#39;moved by his own presidential ambitions.&amp;#39;&amp;#39; In her memoir Ingrid writes &amp;#39;&amp;#39;Is it ridiculous to play the democracy game all by myself?â Her story seems unbelievable at times. However it is sad and accurate. Betancourt has been one of the closest chances Colombia has had to feel true democratic freedom. This book is an insight into the corrupt government machine that runs Colombia.&lt;b&gt; &lt;/b&gt;Betancourt relays the tragedies of the Colombian civil war through her own perspective.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;She, herself became a victim of the civil war she was trying to end. The guerrillas kidnapped Betancourt on Feb. 23, as she traveled into their former stronghold to show support for a local leader of her independent political party. &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;By the time Betancourt was kidnapped by the FARC guerrillas (Revolutionary Armed Forces of Colombia), she had become a prominent figure of Colombian politics. Although the approach of truth and honesty made many of her fellow politicians uncomfortable, Betancourt was elected to the Senate in 1994.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Her campaign was and example of her courage to fight corruption. Betancourt went on to attain a seat in the congress two years later.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;She received more votes than any other candidate. When Ingrid was kidnapped, she was running as a presidential contender.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Again, her campaign denounced the corruption of the political elite and prioritized the defense of the country she loves with all her heart. &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;i&gt;Until Death Do Us Part&lt;/i&gt; is a fascinating and enlightening. The book brings to light the many hardships a political leader faces, more so if it is a woman. The book provides a detail account of Betancourtâs life of dedication, honesty and courage.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; 
&lt;p style="TEXT-ALIGN:center;" align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;Works Cited&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Betancourt, Ingrid. Memoir. &lt;u&gt;Until Death Do Us Part, My Struggle To Reclaim Colombia&lt;/u&gt;. New York: Harper Collins Publishers, Inc., 2002&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;span&gt;Forero, Juan.&amp;nbsp;Article. &lt;u&gt;&amp;quot;Corruption&amp;#39;s her story; Colombia doesn&amp;#39;t like it&lt;/u&gt;. (Ingrid Betancourt, who has written about political corruption).&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp;&lt;u&gt;The New York Times&lt;/u&gt;&amp;nbsp;(Nov 17, 2001 pA4(N) pA4(L) col 1 (24 col):&amp;nbsp;A4(L).&amp;nbsp;&lt;u&gt;New York&lt;/u&gt;&lt;u&gt; Times on the web&lt;/u&gt;.&amp;nbsp;Gale.&amp;nbsp;Oakland Community College.&amp;nbsp;16 Mar. 2008&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&amp;lt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;a href="http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9803E4D6153BF934A25752C1A9679C8B63&amp;amp;sec=&amp;amp;spon=&amp;amp;pagewanted=2"&gt;&lt;font&gt;http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9803E4D6153BF934A25752C1A9679C8B63&amp;amp;sec=&amp;amp;spon=&amp;amp;pagewanted=2&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;font&gt; &amp;gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;Golden, Tim.&amp;nbsp;Article. &amp;quot;Muckraking in Colombia: Ingrid Betancourt explains her anticorruption campaign.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp;&lt;u&gt;The New York Times Book Review&lt;/u&gt;&amp;nbsp;107.11&amp;nbsp;(March 17, 2002):&amp;nbsp;23(1).&amp;nbsp;&lt;u&gt;New York&lt;/u&gt;&lt;u&gt; Times on the web&lt;/u&gt;. &amp;lt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9500E3DF1330F934A25750C0A9649C8B63"&gt;&lt;font&gt;http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9500E3DF1330F934A25750C0A9649C8B63&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;font&gt;Rank, J. Biography. Ingrid Betancourt.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://biography.jrank.org/pages/3282/Betancourt-Ingrid-1961-Politician-Became-Politician.html"&gt;&lt;font&gt;http://biography.jrank.org/pages/3282/Betancourt-Ingrid-1961-Politician-Became-Politician.html&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/span&gt; 
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