By Interviews, Colons

Hyena wrote: Rmontez wrote: Almost everyone is being manipulated at one point of the day in their lives. Whether they are driving on the highway, reading the newspaper, or watching T.V. the U.S. population is constantly having information thrown at them to sway them to an idea or action. For...

Rmontez wrote: Almost everyone is being manipulated at one point of the day in their lives. Whether they are driving on the highway, reading the newspaper, or watching T.V. the U.S. population is constantly having information thrown at them to sway them to an idea or action. For the most part...

In formal writing, do not use 'I'm'; instead, use 'I am'.I am unsure if you telphoned me yesterday regarding an interview. As I seem unable to reach you via telphone, I have sent you this e-mail. If you wish to contact me by telephone, then please call ****.A side note: words such as therefore...

<>Please, could you help me with my motivation letter? Just to fill you in, I’m from Brazil and I’m applying for an exchange program with German universities. The deadline is 31st August (this Wednesday), at 23h in Brazil (that is, if I'm not mistaken, 3.00 am in London). I know...

It looks fine. Options which I myself would exercise are (1) replacing the semicolon with a full colon ( : ) and (2) placing a comma after interviews (this is called for if the 'listed' items are sufficiently long or convoluted).

Dear Ms/Mr Sincerely, Yanakieva Watch your spelling and capitalizations. No exclamation marks, smiley faces, or anything else. I have made some changes and put in some words for you. See if my words capture your intent. I love your enthusiasm and passion. If I am hiring someone, I...