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Widget wrote:The sky was becoming dark as John left his house to take an evening walk. He looked up at the gray sky. Then he extended his right palm to see if was raining. He was walking up the street, with his soda, beef jerk and chips. When John finished his chips, he began to eat beef jerks....

The sky was becoming dark as John left his house to take an evening walk. He looked up at the gray sky. Then he extended his right palm to see if it was raining. He was walking up the street, with his soda, beef jerk and chips. When John finished his chips, he began to eat beef jerks. He chewed...

The sky was becoming dark when he was leaving his house to take an evening walk. He looked up the sky which was gray. Then he extended his right palm hand to see if was raining. He was walking up the street, with his soda, beef jerk and chips. When John finished up his chips, he began to eat beef...