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Great stuff... A note on using phrases like "In my opinion"; I have been given the advice many a time to avoid this and it stands to reason. I use it sometimes when I know the next argument is going to sound very presumptuous. By using it I avoid having the reader think to themselves 'That's a...

Here is my essay. I am studying for Toefl. Could you please help me Thanks Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should always show their strong emotions. (Such as excitement, anger or joy)?? In my opinion people should show their emotions to some extent. Since...