By Jokes, TOEFL

Hi, I am a student planning to take TOEFL test, can somebody please check the grammar and structure of this paragraph, this paragraph about complaints. Can you please read this sentence and help me make it more clear and natural? Thanks friend I would like to thank you for your support...

Yep, why not, lets make a comic EFL site, taking the mickey outta teaching English.. We can call it PIFL or something, it'll be a nice change for the 1,000,000s of EFL/TEFL sites. So I need some EFL/ESL/TEFL etc etc etc etc related jokes. I think i'll title it: "A simple...