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Applying for scholar ship

SadeqMorshedloo — Sun, 17 Aug 2008 13:28:43 GMT

Hi everybody,
I should say this is one of the best websites I have ever encountered in this area.(Learning English).
Well I have written an application letter, but I know there is lots of errors,
so I would be glad if you have look at my essay and give me your comments,
Thank you all of you.

Aug 17 2008

Ms <Name Surname>

Awards and Scholarships Manager

British Council
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Dear Ms. Ahmadi:

I am very interested in British Council, Chevening scholarships or any other financial assistance opportunities available for graduate students.

I have already finished my undergraduate studying in the course of petroleum engineering. I have graduated in Jul 2007 with a grade 17.7 of 20 (excellent) in the Iran university system. My major is Safety and Technical Inspection Engineering. To deepen my knowledge and to specialize in the field of Technical Inspection Engineering, I intend to do my Master of Engineering.

I am currently experiencing an educational period in the field of technical inspection and corrosion prevention at NIOC-OTC (National Iranian Oil Company-Oil Terminal Company) which has started in March 2008 and will last about 16 month. I have also finished two training periods, each of witch last about 2 months at the same company in Jul & Aug 2005 and Jul & Aug 2006.

My career goal is to work in an international company where this Master degree would be helpful. I am interested in traveling and getting to know different cultures and people from various countries around the world.

I am an open-minded and friendly person who is interested in international aspects and intercultural relations. Therefore, I would enjoy studying at UK universities which have a high proportion of international students. It is possible to get to know people from more than one country. Normally, this would require a world tour. Furthermore, I am keen on looking beyond my own nose to learn from other nationalities and cultures. Only personal experience can give you a real view of other cultures and behaviors.

Please send me the appropriate application and deadlines, including any other necessary information I would need to complete a proper application process with Chevening scholarships.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Sadeq Morshedloo

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Re: Learning English language is not easy

sorayapearl — Fri, 08 Aug 2008 09:56:18 GMT

instead of : for my part USE for me or my case
                 books I have read in English USE English books
                 In short USE generally , or in general
                 literatures SAY literature without plural

the essay is good and I agree with u, learning english is not easy still it is so much fun isn't it?

Re: hello

Grammar Geek — Thu, 12 Jul 2007 18:00:56 GMT

Hi Littl, and welcome to the forums. And before I forget, good luck in your anthropoloy studies.

We do provide our help on this forum for free, so if you have something to post, you can post it here. However, because we do this as volunteers, you are not guaranteed to get an immediate response. You are more likely to get a response if you keep your essays short, or if you only post a paragraph or two that you are struggling with. We do NOT accept e-mails from members with essays attached to correct and e-mail back - you post them in the forums, and hope for the best.

I'm sure there are other members who can recommend books to help with your writing. I've always liked an old book called The Elements of Style by Strunk and White.

You can send PMs to certain members, but not to request private help with an essay. (By the way, remember that English has a capital E.)

Whenever I write an essay, I take a lot of time revising it and I reread every sentence in my essay. Yet it always seems that it does not really make sense to the readers. I do not know how to help myself, but I am eager to work with anyone who would want to help me. If you have any advice on how can I improve my English, or if you want to work with me to improve my English, I know it will get much better. I need someone to guide me in learning English writing. I do not have perfect or the best English when I am writing, and I am not sure if my writing would make sense to the reader. It's been recommended to me get an English tutor, but I am having hard time finding one, so I went online to research. Others have said that I will need to learn only basic English. I am confused how I can start, what to study, and what to focus on. These are the questions that are going in my mind. So, if anyone has time to help and guide me. I will work hard for you. I am willing to learn.

hello

Littl — Thu, 12 Jul 2007 12:19:28 GMT

Do you check essay for free by email or by posting?

Are you an english teacher? Can you guide me?

Do you know anything to read online or a good author/book to read? what kind of book do you recommend to read for non-native english like me?

I am not really good in writing english. this coming semester, I will be studying anthropology. It is hard for me to combine unfamiliar words and put in a sentence. So, I would also want to prepare myself, I will need your advice of how to prepare or to study? Would you like to help me?

Whenever I do some essay, I took a lot of time refixing, and reading every sentence in my essay. It always seems that it does not really make sense to the readers. And I do not know how to help myself, but I am eager to work with anyone who would want to help me. If you have any advice on how can I improve my english, or if you want to work with me to improve my english, it would be much better. I need someone to guide me in learning english writing. I do not have the perfect or best english whenever I am writing. I am not sure if my writing would make sense to the reader. They recommend me to have an english tutor but I am having hard time to find one, so I went online and research. Others said that I will only need to learn the basic english. I am confused how can I start, what to study, what to focus on. These are the questions that are going in my mind. So, if anyone really have time to help me, and guide me. I will work hard for you. I am willing to learn.

Thank You so much for your precious time reading this, and for understanding my situation.

** is there any private messages here? do you want my email? Can you also put some comments/correct this message that I posted. I want to see more of my errors and learn from it. Thanks again!

Re: Please Check my little essay, only one paragraph

Anonymous — Mon, 07 May 2007 05:54:40 GMT

Learning english

For many years comunication it the way to express ideas ,feeling with another person,by talking or writing.Learning english to been one of the challenges for many person arriving from other countries.The first reason by which all the foreigners should speak englishis to find a better work and be able to make more money.tHE SECOND REASON IS IF YOU FEEL SURE OF WHAT YOU MEAN and your self esteem improves.The third reason is you be able to speak in the same languaje, and understand ideas. Finally to learn english help you to express positively and give you the opportunity to have a better future for our family.

Please correct my essay :-) I'm huger for your criticizing.

Yourleft — Mon, 19 Feb 2007 04:12:18 GMT

Hello guys!

I wrote this paragraph for honing my writing skill, but I am very unsure. I would appreciate if you freely criticize my mistake. I am very eager to improve my level of writing in English. Your remark will be very helpful for my learning English.

Thank you very much.

Since participant countries of the six-party talks signed a comprehensive agreement in 2005 September, diplomatic efforts to resolve North Koreaâs nuclear stand-still have hardly been seen. At that time, North Korea agreed to halting their nuclear bomb program in return for economic aid, energy aid and security assurance. However, since North Korea launched a nuclear test in last October, the negotiation has nearly come to a rupture.

On this week, negotiators from each country focused on how to set the timetable for abolishing North Koreaâs nuclear program, and on how much and when the reclusive nation will receive compensation. Bush administrationâs officials said that the current proposal demand that North Korea shut down and seal main nuclear facilities in the next couple of months in return for providing fuel oil from South Korea and starting a talk for building a diplomatic tie between North Korea and the United States.

Nevertheless, the procedure has difficulties due to details on how much aid North Korea accurately demanded. Aleksandr Losyukov, Russian top envoy, said that participant countries did not decide on the amount of final aid, and refused to open the specific amount of money that North Korea requested. âThe biggest stumbling block is still economic aidâ, he added.

However, a diplomat said that problems are not sole. âSituations are still serious. Gaps among each country for the problem have been narrowed, but a definite resolution have hardly been reached.â, Japanese representative Kenichiro Sasae said to reporters.

Citing an unidentified diplomatic source, Japanese Kyodo news reported that North Korea requested fuel oil which was an equivalent to two million ton, and it took the other participant countries by surprise.

Dear Senators

Republic of Korea and the United states have kept common interests and values in East Asia as well as in the world. Two nations have deeply recognized the value of democracy in the world. We also have conviction that free trades make the world prosperous. As a firm and reliable partner, ROK has gradually enhanced economic ties with the United States. The Korea-U.S. Free Trade Agreement is one of these efforts to further our partnership for better lives of both countriesâ people.

The FTA is equally beneficial for both countries for two reasons. Firstly, it will spur more investment on each country. With opening more markets, two countriesâ enterprises can enjoy more chances to get profit. Simultaneously, the FTA will make us more attractive for Foreign Direct Investment which target on ROK and the U.S. due to deterring trade barriers. Secondly, the FTA will be a pillar for the economic balance in East Asia. Growing Chinaâs clout should be balanced by the firm economic alliance between other nations. The FTA will become one of main factors for two nations to maintain economic power in East Asia.

I wish Senators now have wisdom to choose more prosperous future of the U.S. as well as you did excellently. The FTA with ROK will demonstrate that the U.S. has a will for free trades with the world. I would really appreciate your commitment to further economic relations between ROK and the U.S.

Re: Teacher David????

Goodman — Sat, 14 Oct 2006 09:41:47 GMT

CalifJim wrote:
Thanks, Goodman! I'm sorry if you felt I had put you on the spot! It did seem as if I were assigning you an essay to write, didn't it?! But I did want to encourage other Forum participants to weigh in as well.

I realize that you were not comparing Chinese and American culture, just adding more to what had been said about Chinese culture. I was just wondering if you had more observations to add about American culture as well. And I wasn't thinking in terms of who is right or who is wrong.

Thank you for the response that you gave.
Jim

CJ,

Iâve lived in this country a lot longer than I did in my own birthplace. United States is my adapted country and I am grateful for everything and opportunity this country has opened up to me. From being an ignorant young teen to a well-paid engineer, Iâve truly experienced the American dream and savored every moment along the way. For me, learning English was difficult at the beginning but as time went on, I became motivated to do better than just to âget byâ. Although there were many years of tough time and struggle trying to adapt to a new life and learning English, I never gave up because I wanted to prove to myself and those who wouldnât give me the time of day that I could break out of the Chinatown walls. This ambition and perseverance became the fuel for my motivation to succeed. I was working at night as a waiter while going to adult school to get my GED during the day. Then I went to a technical college for electronics. The rest was history. With the same attitude I had in learning, I developed a strong work ethic which became an important asset in my career.

Through my eyes, I have seen both sides of the world. I think Western culture cultivates individualism and materialism which at the same time place little or no emphasis on disciplines and respect. As a result, parents, elders and teachers are often regarded as figures of troubles among some teenagers. With the advance of technology and computers,

Western influences, trend and images began to infiltrate Asian countries. Today, teenagers in countries with traditional values are acting and behaving just like their counter parts in the US. I hope I am not offending anyone in this forum for being so straight-forward. Jim ,since you opened up this conversation, I thought you may be interested to learn whatâs on my mind.

Please check my essay. Thank you.

Anonymous — Sat, 30 Sep 2006 01:49:54 GMT

The advantages and/or disadvantages of English as a global language

There is a heat discussion whether English is suitable for a global language or not. I think there are two advantages and one disadvantage of English as a global language as following.
The first advantage is that many people in the world are using English as the fact. Language learning is not so easy that this fact is advantageous for English.
The second advantage is that future language trends are for English. For example , in China, one of the biggest country in the world , many young people are learning English, it is said.
The disadvantage is that there are many kinds of English such as British, American, or other forms of English. This would annoy English learners, so this is the disadvantage .
In conclusion, in spite of the disadvantage, I think English is suitable for a global language because of the two advantages that I mentioned.

Thank you very much.

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Re: Learning English - what's your trick?

Divine — Sun, 03 Sep 2006 17:47:02 GMT

Englishuser wrote:

In other words, you need to change your daily habits if you're serious about improving your language skills.

Hi Englishuser! Nice to see you again.

I totally agree with you when you claim that it is essential to change our daily habits if we want to develope our language skills. I had similar experiences in learning foreign languages. For instance, when I was learning English only at school, I mean I was doing grammar exercises, writing essays, learning by heart new vocabulary, I felt that I was doing a big effort, but my results couldn't satisfy me. I had to begin looking for opportunities to use English as often as it was possible. Like here, in this forum. Besides, I started to read English literature and magazines.

What is your trick in learning vocabulary (for example), or maybe you are a native speaker and you don't have to learn English words

Divine

Re: My students can't speak English

Anonymous — Wed, 01 Mar 2006 19:40:13 GMT

Learning English

Hello,

Being a beginner student of English is hard. There are many obstacles like personal and learning problems that make a student to take a lot of time in learning a new language.

As a student of an English school, I would like to tell you a little bit about my experience in learning this nice language. In this experience, I found some problems like pronunciation, words order, grammar and more. Also I found some solutions such as learning songs, playing games, reading books and more that helped me to improve my English.

Ecuador, a country in South America where almost every body speaks the same language, is where I born. Three years ago I decided to come to NY. When I arrived here, I was surprised to find many costumes of people from different countries. As the time passed, I started missing my own costumes like carnivals. It made me to get depressed and it affected my performance in the school. It is difficult to learn new things when people get depressed.

When I started my English class, I didnât know about pronunciation. It was difficult to talk to the teacher about my problems in grammar. I had to talk to my partner who knew the same language like me, and this way to get a little explain of some grammar.

At the beginning of my English classes was difficult to speak English because I had to keep in mind the words order like white house that in Spanish order is house white (Casa Blanca).

Some times the English grammar got me confused. I needed time to understand it. When I was trying to speak, there was a lot of grammar to remember if I wanted to express a clear idea to my teacher or some English speaker.

Trough the time, I have learned some ways to improve my English. I learn many words by listening some songs (I like Bryan Adamâs songs) and narrations of the books that comes in CDs like the Alchemist. Also, I learn the way of pronunciation by this way. I think is good idea to try to sing a popular or interesting song in class. It makes the class more interesting.

Playing games is a good idea in class. I have learned to speak a little bit more by playing like an actor. When I was in class, the teacher organized small groups to perform situations of daily life. It was fun for me.

The English class is more interesting when the teacher brings an interesting book. Some time ago my teacher brought to the class many books about the Alchemist. When I started reading, I was tempting to read more and more. This way I increased my vocabulary. I can say every body enjoyed the book.

If the teacher speaks to the class about topics that are interesting to the students, the class becomes less cold. The students feel more comfortable and start speaking more and more. It is like to speak to a friend without any fear.

In the end, I have finished writing a little bit of my experience in learning a new language. Learning a new language takes a lot of time. Today I am still learning new words, pronunciations, grammar.

I hope this little essay is good. If anyone sees some problems in my grammar, please correct them. Thank you.