Hello Urgent! Your English writing is fantastic and I am happy to make a few small changes. For the most part this is already great writing, although I have made a few small changes in bold. Super impressed with the letter, though. It states your

I am part of an online editing and proofreading service. For more info on this service, please see my profile. Here is my revision of your first two paragraphs (which I would combine into one) I am a 4th Semester business administration student at

There are many examples posted on this site. http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=%22motivation+letter%22 Hint: These documents typically take a long time to edit. You are more likely to get help if you do the following: 1) Post only a

Hi! Tried to register, but it did not really work out... Anyway, I would like to ask if you can please check my letter of motivation :-) I hope it is at least good enoguh to justify the beginning of the 4th paragraph :-D Thank you very much in

Normal 0 I am an experienced graphic designer and lecturer with a sound knowledge and understanding in the field of graphic design. Despite my skills and artistic background has been dominated by graphics I like to expand my inspiration into

thanks for previous answer! Normal 0 I am an experienced graphic designer and lecturer with a sound knowledge and understanding in the field of graphic design. Despite my skills and artistic background has been dominated by graphics I like to

Good people please help me urgently with this issue. I want to apply for a post of office assistant so they asked me to submit the letter of motivation and i do not know where to stay because i do not know how to write that letter. I am really

Hi, according to NonatheBrit covering letters in the UK are very short and only sounds enthusiatic, that's all but this appies only to the UK. I have a post with regard to the subject. I tried to show you that you can shorten the second paragraph.

no, no need to be sorry. u might be right...im stating to think i might have put to much information in the second paragraph

Hi, attracting attention is of course your main aim but you should do this without backfiring:-) There are many diverse ways how to attract attention. In my opinion, you had chosen not the best one but of course this is only my opinion. They don't